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    Krow



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    Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Thu Sep 10, 2015 11:39 am

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    General Information:
    Name: Kyros D. Sora
    Nickname: Krow
    Age: While Sora's real age is unknown, he takes the form of a nineteen year old youth. (His birthday is unknown for plot reason's.)
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Species: Phoenixized Human
    Phoenixized Human:
    Sora is quiet to anomaly, while he was indeed born a human, the very act of taking in the life force of the Phoenix that trained him has changed him greatly. For starters, his human shell was burned away by the flames of the Phoenix, killing him, then reviving him as a Phoenix; which is why his hair is white and his eyes are a golden yellow. This also left a mark over where his heart is, a wing-shaped emblem. However, he also possesses the darker side of the Phoenix.

    Species Ability/Perk: - Reincarnation: Sora having been turned into a Phoenixized Human, possesses the life force of an actual Phoenix, is able to reincarnate himself. However, this requires that he either be fatally wounded or out-right killed. This reincarnation process will have his azure flames burn him to ashes, from which he will rise once more. While this makes him a tough bastard to truly kill, it is not without its own drawbacks, which one would say out-weighs the advantages. Mainly, the fact that he will respawn in a new thread. He will also respawn with his S through SS-rank spells sealed and must do a training thread for each spell in order to remove their seals, each spell needing a 500 WC for S-Rank spells and a 1,000 WC for SS-Rank spells training thread. He is able to die at most ten times, after the final death he cannot use the Alter to revive.

    - Flames of Resurrection: Krow is able to regenerate from scattered azure flames, which means if he takes a large attack (S, SS, or X-Rank), his body will reflexively explode into a shower of flames, from which his body will reform. However, regenerating from scattered flames takes three posts and cannot happen again for four posts, and he will suffer from nausea during the three posts. The scale for his generalized health regeneration by absorbing flames is; 10% at D-rank, 16% at C-rank, 23% at B-rank, 25% at A-rank, 25% at S-rank, and 23% at SS-rank over 3 posts (divide these numbers by three to find how much he heals each post at that rank). Sora as a consequence of being a Phoenix, yet at the same time, not a Phoenix, is cursed with a body of flames. While he may, for all intents and purposes, appear to be no different from a human, his body has actually become one of flames. This is both a curse and a blessing, it is a curse, as regenerating when his body is damaged and reduced to scattered flames causes him physical pain and nausea. On the other hand, it is also a blessing, as unless the scattered flames are all extinguished by water at the exact same moment, he can regenerate fully, albeit with nausea keeping him off guard. This regeneration from flames takes up to three posts.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Sora has messy white ivory hair and golden yellow eyes, which are odd trait in their own right. The reason for these traits being odd is that they are natural, but instead physical traits that came about as a result of his death.

    Character Depth:
    Personality: Krow is carefree and reckless in nature, and, despite his habit of picking fights with others over trivial matters, he is a fiercely loyal and protective friend. Krow has a rather straight-forward mind, and often say's what is on his mind openly regardless of how others might react to the given information. Befitting his straight-forward mind he tackles most issues with a "hands on" approach, it is this quality that makes Krow quite the capable mage in his own right. This determination has helped him gain respect throughout Fiore.

    Krow's carefree nature is often shown to provide laughter for not only himself, but also others. If one were to refer to him as a joker they would be right to harsh fault. He loves to make people laugh, and loves to make himself laugh. He is known for pulling pranks on other's, even clients that he meets through jobs. Though, he never pulls pranks with the intent of seriously harming others. It is this joyous side of his personality that shown that he is still somewhat immature.

    Krow's recklessness is often considered his achille's heel due to the fact that he can get carried away and not see attacks in his blind spot. Strength is this man's strong suit over strategy as he would rather attack head on then find a better option. His solution to problems usually involves some degree of violence.

    Krow seems to have an extraordinary amount of anger contained within his being, though he will not take this out upon his allies. This anger seems to be something, that makes many afraid of him, as there is really no telling when he might snap. Though, he also possesses many leadership qualities, namely how much he cares about his comrades and is willing to take a potentially fatal assault if it means he can protect his friends.

    Krow, when on the field of battle, is shown to be quite skilled, albeit someone who cannot partake in a minor brawl without causing a rather significant amount of damage to his surrounds. This quality making jobs that involve fighting, to be something that, in the past, had landed him in the Magic Council's Prison in Era on numerous occasions. He is the sort of person who goes all out and will actually get bored with a fight if his opponent only shows a half-hearted enthusiasm towards taking him down. He is quite durable and is able to take attacks head-on without hesitation. Typical of someone with his type of personality, he tends to become rather temperamental when fighting, especially if his friends are dissed or harmed, at which point he usually snaps and does something drastic that will result in wide-spread destruction. He is not one for thinking things through and prefers to let his actions speak for him, though he is also the kind to get hyped up and tries to convince his opponents to use their full power right from the get-go.

    Likes: - Fighting: Krow likes fighting as he finds it to be a good way to test his current limitations and grow stronger.
    - Fire: Krow likes fire because he is a practitioner of an ancient style of fire magic.
    - Comrades: Krow likes being surrounded by friends, as he views them as his extended family.

    Dislikes: - Wimps: Krow dislikes people who don't stick to their belief or are afraid to fight, which is most likely due to his own love of batle.
    - Dark Guilds: Krow dislikes Dark Guild's because of the kinds of unsavory jobs they are willing to undertake.
    - Being Alone: Krow dislikes being alone due to how boring it is.

    Fears: - Magic Council: Krow had an apparent fear of the Magic Council, which is most likely due to having spent time looked up in their jail for accidentally demolishing an entire town.
    - Treasure Hunting Guild's : Krow is mildly afraid of treasure hunting guild's, as he thinks that his Magic makes him a treasure of sorts, though this may simply be Krow being Krow. This in of itself being rather ironic, given he is a Sky Pirate.
    - Siegnius: Krow has a rather reasonable fear of his elder brother Siegnius who is one of the top ranking mages of the Empire of Alvarez.

    Motivations/Goals: - Sky King: Krow is greatly motivated by his desire to become Lord of the Skies, this desire stemming from hearing stories about the former Sky King from his Uncle Zetar.
    - Defeat Siegnius: While Krow fears his brother, he is also determined to defeat Siegnius as he believes his elder brother is standing in his way of becoming Lord of the Skies.
    - Crew: Krow is motivated to gather a strong crew, feeling that the Lord of the Skies needs to have a strong crew.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Krow has messy ivory white hair, not much unlike that of a cadaver.
    Eyes: Krow has fierce golden yellow eyes, like two orbs that pierce through the black of night.
    Skin Tone: Krow has a lightly tanned skin tone.
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 135 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Krow is a youth of average height, with  ivory white hair and golden yellow eyes. While not tall in terms of his height, he has a well-toned musculature, with a slightly tanned skin tone. He has a three-stitched scar under his left eye.

    Krow wears a few different outfits, his primary outfit being an open, blue vest, black shorts, plain sandals and his trademark straw hat. His secondary outfit contains the same bottom attire, with the vest being swapped out in favor of a hooded vest, white fur around the hood, the arm holes being ripped. His third outfit is a 3/4th long-sleeved blue cardigan, left open, a red sash tied around his waist with the same lower attire.

    Other:
    Rank: Guild Master
    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo Krow's guild mark is located on his right shoulder and its color is black.


    Last edited by Krow on Mon Dec 28, 2015 7:51 pm; edited 24 times in total



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Kosovo Misogi on Thu Sep 10, 2015 9:35 pm

    So Krow, really gonna have to go into detail on your perk, how exactly does it work, how does it specifically affect others. You specifically mention a 'burst of sheer willpower', I'm going to need a specific radius, effectiveness, cooldown. Also is it just mental? Could one be so strong themselves that they are affected? I'm going to REALLY need specifics on that one.



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Fri Sep 11, 2015 9:04 am

    BUMP
    *takes an arrow to the knee and retires early*



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Kosovo Misogi on Fri Sep 11, 2015 9:34 pm

    Ok so this is really depending upon what rank and how we do systems so I'm going to have to ask that this ability be 'unusable' til proper corrections can be made after finalization of systems and rules. Other than this, its looks good and will wait for Bacon to get back.



    Current Edit:
    King's Quality/Conqueror's Spirit/Will: Those of the Clan of D. possess a special quality that marks them as being one who is fit to lead, whether it be a simple group or an entire country. This quality is shown by their indomitable determination and nearly boundless will to live. These aspects being so great, that those of the Clan of D. are able to overpower and incapacitate those with weaker will's (lower ranks). This type of perk grants the user the ability to dominate the wills of others. The most common usage is knocking those with weak wills unconscious. Whilst inexperienced users are restricted to merely overpowering the will of one individual or blindly knocking out weak-willed people around them, those of the Clan of D. with more expertise can pick out weak-willed individuals in a large group and knock them out without affecting those around them. However, those with stronger wills, namely those of equal rank and standing can resist or even ignore the effects of Conqueror's Spirit. The ability to knock someone out depends on the difference in strength between the person using Conqueror's Spirit and the person or persons the user is trying to knock out. The greater the power gap, the easier it is to knock the victim out. According to Zetar, while this perk cannot be attained through training, it can be improved through strengthening the will of the user. It seems that upon recovery, victims of Conqueror's Spirit experience the sensation of chills running through their body. However, it presumably wears off after a short period.

    There are two ways in which Conqueror's Will can be used. The first and most common way is in a quick burst that will knock out those with weaker wills relatively easily. The second method is to release it continuously, which will not only knock out those of weak wills around the user, but also put pressure on the surroundings, actually affecting other physical objects besides living beings. It also has been shown that light bursts of Conqueror's Spirit can be used in order to tame or intimidate creatures, and show the users superiority over the beast(s).

    Those hit with Conqueror's Spirit foam at the mouth after or while losing consciousness, though, with a more precise burst, they simply faint. The use of Conqueror's Spirit causes the affected area, excluding the user, to be highlighted in a dark blue tint. However, this tint could just be a side-effect created by the aura of Sora's Magic. The current radius of King's Quality is one hundred feet, with the burst effect anyone who is two or more ranks below Sora. This perk can only be used five times per thread and carries a cool-down of ten posts.

    -This will be here for tracking edits and other purposes-



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Raina on Wed Sep 23, 2015 1:27 pm

    @Krow wrote:
    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Kyros D. Sora
    Nickname: Krow
    Age: While Sora's real age is unknown, he takes the form of a nineteen year old youth.
    Species: Humanized Phoenix
    Species Ability/Perk: - Flames of Resurrection: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, possess a body of azure flames. What this means, is that his body has become corporeal, thus allowing bullets and other physical objects to slip through him without harming him grievously. This corporeal form extending to not only his flesh, but his inner-workings and organs, even his heart and brain.  Additionally, when he is wounded, azure flames will burst forth from the wound healing him. While he is able to do this reflexively, it does seem to take a toll, as it makes him feel nauseous afterwards, leaving him off guard. How long can you stay incorporeal? How long would you have to wait to use this form again? As it is a fire form will water  be more effective to you?

    - Phoenix Form: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, is able to enter a hybird and full phoenix form at will. His hybrid phoenix form involves turning his arms into wings, though he can leave his hands as they are while simply transforming his arms, such wings having a span of ten feet each. While his full phoenix form is that of an azure phoenix, allowing him to attain flight or attack from above. What is the width of your wings. What is the Cooldown and duration of this ability and how fast can you fly? What is the highest altitude you can reach? Again as you are fire will water be more effective against you?

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Sora has messy white ivory hair and golden yellow eyes, which are odd trait in their own right.

    Character Depth:
    Personality: Krow is carefree and reckless in nature, and, despite his habit of picking fights with others over trivial matters, he is a fiercely loyal and protective friend. Krow has a rather straight-forward mind, and often say's what is on his mind openly regardless of how others might react to the given information. Befitting his straight-forward mind he tackles most issues with a "hands on" approach, it is this quality that makes Krow quite the capable mage in his own right. This determination has helped him gain respect throughout Fiore.

    Krow's carefree nature is often shown to provide laughter for not only himself, but also others. If one were to refer to him as a joker they would be right to harsh fault. He loves to make people laugh, and loves to make himself laugh. He is known for pulling pranks on other's, even clients that he meets through jobs. Though, he never pulls pranks with the intent of seriously harming others. It is this joyous side of his personality that shown that he is still somewhat immature.

    Krow's recklessness is often considered his achille's heel due to the fact that he can get carried away and not see attacks in his blind spot. Strength is this man's strong suit over strategy as he would rather attack head on then find a better option. His solution to problems usually involves some degree of violence.

    Krow seems to have an extraordinary amount of anger contained within his being, though he will not take this out upon his allies. This anger seems to be something, that makes many afraid of him, as there is really no telling when he might snap. Though, he also possesses many leadership qualities, namely how much he cares about his comrades and is willing to take a potentially fatal assault if it means he can protect his friends.

    Krow, when on the field of battle, is shown to be quite skilled, albeit someone who cannot partake in a minor brawl without causing a rather significant amount of damage to his surrounds. This quality making jobs that involve fighting, to be something that, in the past, had landed him in the Magic Council's Prison in Era on numerous occasions. He is the sort of person who goes all out and will actually get bored with a fight if his opponent only shows a half-hearted enthusiasm towards taking him down. He is quite durable and is able to take attacks head-on without hesitation. Typical of someone with his type of personality, he tends to become rather temperamental when fighting, especially if his friends are dissed or harmed, at which point he usually snaps and does something drastic that will result in wide-spread destruction. He is not one for thinking things through and prefers to let his actions speak for him, though he is also the kind to get hyped up and tries to convince his opponents to use their full power right from the get-go.

    Likes: - Fighting: Krow likes fighting as he finds it to be a good way to test his current limitations and grow stronger.
    - Fire: Krow likes fire because he is a practitioner of an ancient style of fire magic.
    - Comrades: Krow likes being surrounded by friends, as he views them as his extended family.

    Dislikes: - Wimps: Krow dislikes people who don't stick to their belief or are afraid to fight, which is most likely due to his own love of batle.
    - Dark Guilds: Krow dislikes Dark Guild's because of the kinds of unsavory jobs they are willing to undertake.
    - Being Alone: Krow dislikes being alone due to how boring it is.

    Fears: - Magic Council: Krow had an apparent fear of the Magic Council, which is most likely due to having spent time locked up in their jail for accidentally demolishing an entire town.
    - Treasure Hunting Guild's : Krow is mildly afraid of treasure hunting guild's, as he thinks that his Magic makes him a treasure of sorts, though this may simply be Krow being Krow. This in of itself being rather ironic, given he is a Sky Pirate.
    - Siegnius: Krow has a rather reasonable fear of his elder brother Siegnius who is one of the top ranking mages of the Empire of Alvarez.

    Motivations/Goals: - Sky King: Krow is greatly motivated by his desire to become Lord of the Skies, this desire stemming from hearing stories about the former Sky King from his Uncle Zetar.
    - Defeat Siegnius: While Krow fears his brother, he is also determined to defeat Siegnius as he believes his elder brother is standing in his way of becoming Lord of the Skies.
    - Crew: Krow is motivated to gather a strong crew, feeling that the Lord of the Skies needs to have a strong crew.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Krow has messy ivory white hair, not much unlike that of a cadaver.
    Eyes: Krow has fierce golden yellow eyes, like two orbs that pierce through the black of night.
    Skin Tone: Krow has a lightly tanned skin tone.
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 135 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Krow is a youth of average height, with messy ivory white hair and golden yellow eyes. While not tall in terms of his height, he has a well-toned musculature, with a slightly tanned skin tone. He has a three-stitched scar under his left eye.

    Krow wears a few different outfits, his primary outfit being an open, blue vest, black shorts, plain sandals and his trademark straw hat. His secondary outfit contains the same bottom attire, with the vest being swapped out in favor of a hooded vest, white fur around the hood, the arm holes being ripped. His third outfit is a 3/4th long-sleeved blue cardigan, left open, a red sash tied around his waist with the same lower attire.

    Other:
    Rank: Guild Master
    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo Krow's guild mark is located on his right shoulder and its color is black.

    Overall I really like this character and cannot wait for us to ride the Skies together! Please fix the edits and bump!  




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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Wed Sep 23, 2015 1:52 pm

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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Raina on Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:09 pm

    @Krow wrote:
    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Kyros D. Sora
    Nickname: Krow
    Age: While Sora's real age is unknown, he takes the form of a nineteen year old youth.
    Species: Humanized Phoenix
    Species Ability/Perk: - Flames of Resurrection: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, possess a body of azure flames. What this means, is that his body has become corporeal, thus allowing bullets and other physical objects to slip through him without harming him grievously. This corporeal form extending to not only his flesh, but his inner-workings and organs, even his heart and brain.  Additionally, when he is wounded, azure flames will burst forth from the wound healing him. While he is able to do this reflexively, it does seem to take a toll, as it makes him feel nauseous afterwards, leaving him off guard. This corporeal form triggers in reaction to circumstances that would be painful, like being shot or stabbed, so it is an instantaneous reaction, with this form lasting one post, with a cool-down of two posts. This form however makes water 50% more effective against Sora.
    for the faCT that this form blocks physical damage and is also healing I am sure the cool down needs to be harsher than that.


    - Phoenix Form: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, is able to enter a hybird and full phoenix form at will. His hybrid phoenix form involves turning his arms into wings, though he can leave his hands as they are while simply transforming his arms, such wings having a span of ten feet each. While his full phoenix form is that of an azure phoenix, allowing him to attain flight or attack from above. His wing span in total is twenty feet, with a width of five feet per wing. He is able to fly up to 60 mph in his full Phoenix form, but only 30 mph in his hybrid form. He can fly up to 100 feet into the air and sustain this altitude for any needed period of time. Though, this state comes with the drawback of water being 50% more effective against Sora.

    As there are other players with flight and wings I feel yours should match theirs as well. As for mph this should be limited to 15 and up to maybe 40 feet high. Now when he only has his wings instead of full transformation I feel his wings would not be plausible to actually achieve flight. Please edit that some way. And also this form needs a duration and Cooldown because the others with flight cannot sustain their flight.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Sora has messy white ivory hair and golden yellow eyes, which are odd trait in their own right.

    Character Depth:
    Personality: Krow is carefree and reckless in nature, and, despite his habit of picking fights with others over trivial matters, he is a fiercely loyal and protective friend. Krow has a rather straight-forward mind, and often say's what is on his mind openly regardless of how others might react to the given information. Befitting his straight-forward mind he tackles most issues with a "hands on" approach, it is this quality that makes Krow quite the capable mage in his own right. This determination has helped him gain respect throughout Fiore.

    Krow's carefree nature is often shown to provide laughter for not only himself, but also others. If one were to refer to him as a joker they would be right to harsh fault. He loves to make people laugh, and loves to make himself laugh. He is known for pulling pranks on other's, even clients that he meets through jobs. Though, he never pulls pranks with the intent of seriously harming others. It is this joyous side of his personality that shown that he is still somewhat immature.

    Krow's recklessness is often considered his achille's heel due to the fact that he can get carried away and not see attacks in his blind spot. Strength is this man's strong suit over strategy as he would rather attack head on then find a better option. His solution to problems usually involves some degree of violence.

    Krow seems to have an extraordinary amount of anger contained within his being, though he will not take this out upon his allies. This anger seems to be something, that makes many afraid of him, as there is really no telling when he might snap. Though, he also possesses many leadership qualities, namely how much he cares about his comrades and is willing to take a potentially fatal assault if it means he can protect his friends.

    Krow, when on the field of battle, is shown to be quite skilled, albeit someone who cannot partake in a minor brawl without causing a rather significant amount of damage to his surrounds. This quality making jobs that involve fighting, to be something that, in the past, had landed him in the Magic Council's Prison in Era on numerous occasions. He is the sort of person who goes all out and will actually get bored with a fight if his opponent only shows a half-hearted enthusiasm towards taking him down. He is quite durable and is able to take attacks head-on without hesitation. Typical of someone with his type of personality, he tends to become rather temperamental when fighting, especially if his friends are dissed or harmed, at which point he usually snaps and does something drastic that will result in wide-spread destruction. He is not one for thinking things through and prefers to let his actions speak for him, though he is also the kind to get hyped up and tries to convince his opponents to use their full power right from the get-go.

    Likes: - Fighting: Krow likes fighting as he finds it to be a good way to test his current limitations and grow stronger.
    - Fire: Krow likes fire because he is a practitioner of an ancient style of fire magic.
    - Comrades: Krow likes being surrounded by friends, as he views them as his extended family.

    Dislikes: - Wimps: Krow dislikes people who don't stick to their belief or are afraid to fight, which is most likely due to his own love of batle.
    - Dark Guilds: Krow dislikes Dark Guild's because of the kinds of unsavory jobs they are willing to undertake.
    - Being Alone: Krow dislikes being alone due to how boring it is.

    Fears: - Magic Council: Krow had an apparent fear of the Magic Council, which is most likely due to having spent time looked up in their jail for accidentally demolishing an entire town.
    - Treasure Hunting Guild's : Krow is mildly afraid of treasure hunting guild's, as he thinks that his Magic makes him a treasure of sorts, though this may simply be Krow being Krow. This in of itself being rather ironic, given he is a Sky Pirate.
    - Siegnius: Krow has a rather reasonable fear of his elder brother Siegnius who is one of the top ranking mages of the Empire of Alvarez.

    Motivations/Goals: - Sky King: Krow is greatly motivated by his desire to become Lord of the Skies, this desire stemming from hearing stories about the former Sky King from his Uncle Zetar.
    - Defeat Siegnius: While Krow fears his brother, he is also determined to defeat Siegnius as he believes his elder brother is standing in his way of becoming Lord of the Skies.
    - Crew: Krow is motivated to gather a strong crew, feeling that the Lord of the Skies needs to have a strong crew.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Krow has messy ivory white hair, not much unlike that of a cadaver.
    Eyes: Krow has fierce golden yellow eyes, like two orbs that pierce through the black of night.
    Skin Tone: Krow has a lightly tanned skin tone.
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 135 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Krow is a youth of average height, with messy ivory white hair and golden yellow eyes. While not tall in terms of his height, he has a well-toned musculature, with a slightly tanned skin tone. He has a three-stitched scar under his left eye.

    Krow wears a few different outfits, his primary outfit being an open, blue vest, black shorts, plain sandals and his trademark straw hat. His secondary outfit contains the same bottom attire, with the vest being swapped out in favor of a hooded vest, white fur around the hood, the arm holes being ripped. His third outfit is a 3/4th long-sleeved blue cardigan, left open, a red sash tied around his waist with the same lower attire.

    Other:
    Rank: Guild Master
    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo Krow's guild mark is located on his right shoulder and its color is black.




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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:15 pm

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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Raina on Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:25 pm

    @Krow wrote:
    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Kyros D. Sora
    Nickname: Krow
    Age: While Sora's real age is unknown, he takes the form of a nineteen year old youth.
    Species: Humanized Phoenix
    Species Ability/Perk: - Flames of Resurrection: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, possess a body of azure flames. What this means, is that his body has become corporeal, thus allowing bullets and other physical objects to slip through him without harming him grievously. This corporeal form extending to not only his flesh, but his inner-workings and organs, even his heart and brain.  Additionally, when he is wounded, azure flames will burst forth from the wound healing him. While he is able to do this reflexively, it does seem to take a toll, as it makes him feel nauseous afterwards, leaving him off guard. This corporeal form triggers in reaction to circumstances that would be painful, like being shot or stabbed, so it is an instantaneous reaction, with this form lasting one post, with a cool-down of five posts. This form however makes water 50% more effective against Sora.

    - Phoenix Form: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, is able to enter a hybird and full phoenix form at will. His hybrid phoenix form involves turning his arms into wings, though he can leave his hands as they are while simply transforming his arms, such wings having a span of ten feet each. While his full phoenix form is that of an azure phoenix, allowing him to attain flight or attack from above. His wing span in total is twenty feet, with a width of five feet per wing. He is able to fly up to 30 mph in his Phoenix Form, as his body has been lightened exceptionally, though this also make him easier to beat around. He can fly up to 40 feet into the air and sustain this altitude for three posts, with a cool-down of six posts. Though, this state comes with the drawback of water being 50% more effective against Krow.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Sora has messy white ivory hair and golden yellow eyes, which are odd trait in their own right.

    Character Depth:
    Personality: Krow is carefree and reckless in nature, and, despite his habit of picking fights with others over trivial matters, he is a fiercely loyal and protective friend. Krow has a rather straight-forward mind, and often say's what is on his mind openly regardless of how others might react to the given information. Befitting his straight-forward mind he tackles most issues with a "hands on" approach, it is this quality that makes Krow quite the capable mage in his own right. This determination has helped him gain respect throughout Fiore.

    Krow's carefree nature is often shown to provide laughter for not only himself, but also others. If one were to refer to him as a joker they would be right to harsh fault. He loves to make people laugh, and loves to make himself laugh. He is known for pulling pranks on other's, even clients that he meets through jobs. Though, he never pulls pranks with the intent of seriously harming others. It is this joyous side of his personality that shown that he is still somewhat immature.

    Krow's recklessness is often considered his achille's heel due to the fact that he can get carried away and not see attacks in his blind spot. Strength is this man's strong suit over strategy as he would rather attack head on then find a better option. His solution to problems usually involves some degree of violence.

    Krow seems to have an extraordinary amount of anger contained within his being, though he will not take this out upon his allies. This anger seems to be something, that makes many afraid of him, as there is really no telling when he might snap. Though, he also possesses many leadership qualities, namely how much he cares about his comrades and is willing to take a potentially fatal assault if it means he can protect his friends.

    Krow, when on the field of battle, is shown to be quite skilled, albeit someone who cannot partake in a minor brawl without causing a rather significant amount of damage to his surrounds. This quality making jobs that involve fighting, to be something that, in the past, had landed him in the Magic Council's Prison in Era on numerous occasions. He is the sort of person who goes all out and will actually get bored with a fight if his opponent only shows a half-hearted enthusiasm towards taking him down. He is quite durable and is able to take attacks head-on without hesitation. Typical of someone with his type of personality, he tends to become rather temperamental when fighting, especially if his friends are dissed or harmed, at which point he usually snaps and does something drastic that will result in wide-spread destruction. He is not one for thinking things through and prefers to let his actions speak for him, though he is also the kind to get hyped up and tries to convince his opponents to use their full power right from the get-go.

    Likes: - Fighting: Krow likes fighting as he finds it to be a good way to test his current limitations and grow stronger.
    - Fire: Krow likes fire because he is a practitioner of an ancient style of fire magic.
    - Comrades: Krow likes being surrounded by friends, as he views them as his extended family.

    Dislikes: - Wimps: Krow dislikes people who don't stick to their belief or are afraid to fight, which is most likely due to his own love of batle.
    - Dark Guilds: Krow dislikes Dark Guild's because of the kinds of unsavory jobs they are willing to undertake.
    - Being Alone: Krow dislikes being alone due to how boring it is.

    Fears: - Magic Council: Krow had an apparent fear of the Magic Council, which is most likely due to having spent time looked up in their jail for accidentally demolishing an entire town.
    - Treasure Hunting Guild's : Krow is mildly afraid of treasure hunting guild's, as he thinks that his Magic makes him a treasure of sorts, though this may simply be Krow being Krow. This in of itself being rather ironic, given he is a Sky Pirate.
    - Siegnius: Krow has a rather reasonable fear of his elder brother Siegnius who is one of the top ranking mages of the Empire of Alvarez.

    Motivations/Goals: - Sky King: Krow is greatly motivated by his desire to become Lord of the Skies, this desire stemming from hearing stories about the former Sky King from his Uncle Zetar.
    - Defeat Siegnius: While Krow fears his brother, he is also determined to defeat Siegnius as he believes his elder brother is standing in his way of becoming Lord of the Skies.
    - Crew: Krow is motivated to gather a strong crew, feeling that the Lord of the Skies needs to have a strong crew.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Krow has messy ivory white hair, not much unlike that of a cadaver.
    Eyes: Krow has fierce golden yellow eyes, like two orbs that pierce through the black of night.
    Skin Tone: Krow has a lightly tanned skin tone.
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 135 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Krow is a youth of average height, with messy ivory white hair and golden yellow eyes. While not tall in terms of his height, he has a well-toned musculature, with a slightly tanned skin tone. He has a three-stitched scar under his left eye.

    Krow wears a few different outfits, his primary outfit being an open, blue vest, black shorts, plain sandals and his trademark straw hat. His secondary outfit contains the same bottom attire, with the vest being swapped out in favor of a hooded vest, white fur around the hood, the arm holes being ripped. His third outfit is a 3/4th long-sleeved blue cardigan, left open, a red sash tied around his waist with the same lower attire.

    Other:
    Rank: Guild Master
    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo Krow's guild mark is located on his right shoulder and its color is black.

    First approved!




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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Sun Wukong on Mon Oct 05, 2015 5:11 pm

    Everything here appears to be in order except Flames of Resurrection, I have a few questions~

    @Krow wrote:
    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Kyros D. Sora
    Nickname: Krow
    Age: While Sora's real age is unknown, he takes the form of a nineteen year old youth.
    Species: Humanized Phoenix
    Species Ability/Perk: - Flames of Resurrection: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, possess a body of azure flames. What this means, is that when he is wounded, azure flames appear instantly over the wound, burning it shut while healing him. This is a reflexive aspect of his being part Phoenix and possessing the life force and abilities of a Phoenix. This triggers when he is wounded, though is has a duration of one to three posts depending on the severity of the wound, with a constant cool-down of five posts. By severity of a wound, this means that something like a singular gunshot wound or a knife puncture wound would heal in one post alone, while multiple gunshot wounds or stab wounds would take two or three posts to heal.

    Now, is this healing simply the physical appearance or is this literally instantly to up to 3 posts, healing you for all damage you sustain? If this is healing you, within a 3 post margin, back to completely full health then theres going to need to be some different restrictions put on this or changes. Just let me know and we can work through it unless this is merely cosmetic in which, I have no problem with this.

    - Phoenix Form: Sora, as a humanized phoenix, is able to enter a hybird and full phoenix form at will. His hybrid phoenix form involves turning his arms into wings, though he can leave his hands as they are while simply transforming his arms, such wings having a span of ten feet each. While his full phoenix form is that of an azure phoenix, allowing him to attain flight or attack from above. His wing span in total is twenty feet, with a width of five feet per wing. He is able to fly up to 30 mph in his Phoenix Form, as his body has been lightened exceptionally, though this also make him easier to beat around. He can fly up to 40 feet into the air and sustain this altitude for three posts, with a cool-down of six posts. Though, this state comes with the drawback of water being 50% more effective against Sora.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Sora has messy white ivory hair and golden yellow eyes, which are odd trait in their own right.

    Character Depth:
    Personality: Krow is carefree and reckless in nature, and, despite his habit of picking fights with others over trivial matters, he is a fiercely loyal and protective friend. Krow has a rather straight-forward mind, and often say's what is on his mind openly regardless of how others might react to the given information. Befitting his straight-forward mind he tackles most issues with a "hands on" approach, it is this quality that makes Krow quite the capable mage in his own right. This determination has helped him gain respect throughout Fiore.

    Krow's carefree nature is often shown to provide laughter for not only himself, but also others. If one were to refer to him as a joker they would be right to harsh fault. He loves to make people laugh, and loves to make himself laugh. He is known for pulling pranks on other's, even clients that he meets through jobs. Though, he never pulls pranks with the intent of seriously harming others. It is this joyous side of his personality that shown that he is still somewhat immature.

    Krow's recklessness is often considered his achille's heel due to the fact that he can get carried away and not see attacks in his blind spot. Strength is this man's strong suit over strategy as he would rather attack head on then find a better option. His solution to problems usually involves some degree of violence.

    Krow seems to have an extraordinary amount of anger contained within his being, though he will not take this out upon his allies. This anger seems to be something, that makes many afraid of him, as there is really no telling when he might snap. Though, he also possesses many leadership qualities, namely how much he cares about his comrades and is willing to take a potentially fatal assault if it means he can protect his friends.

    Krow, when on the field of battle, is shown to be quite skilled, albeit someone who cannot partake in a minor brawl without causing a rather significant amount of damage to his surrounds. This quality making jobs that involve fighting, to be something that, in the past, had landed him in the Magic Council's Prison in Era on numerous occasions. He is the sort of person who goes all out and will actually get bored with a fight if his opponent only shows a half-hearted enthusiasm towards taking him down. He is quite durable and is able to take attacks head-on without hesitation. Typical of someone with his type of personality, he tends to become rather temperamental when fighting, especially if his friends are dissed or harmed, at which point he usually snaps and does something drastic that will result in wide-spread destruction. He is not one for thinking things through and prefers to let his actions speak for him, though he is also the kind to get hyped up and tries to convince his opponents to use their full power right from the get-go.

    Likes: - Fighting: Krow likes fighting as he finds it to be a good way to test his current limitations and grow stronger.
    - Fire: Krow likes fire because he is a practitioner of an ancient style of fire magic.
    - Comrades: Krow likes being surrounded by friends, as he views them as his extended family.

    Dislikes: - Wimps: Krow dislikes people who don't stick to their belief or are afraid to fight, which is most likely due to his own love of batle.
    - Dark Guilds: Krow dislikes Dark Guild's because of the kinds of unsavory jobs they are willing to undertake.
    - Being Alone: Krow dislikes being alone due to how boring it is.

    Fears: - Magic Council: Krow had an apparent fear of the Magic Council, which is most likely due to having spent time looked up in their jail for accidentally demolishing an entire town.
    - Treasure Hunting Guild's : Krow is mildly afraid of treasure hunting guild's, as he thinks that his Magic makes him a treasure of sorts, though this may simply be Krow being Krow. This in of itself being rather ironic, given he is a Sky Pirate.
    - Siegnius: Krow has a rather reasonable fear of his elder brother Siegnius who is one of the top ranking mages of the Empire of Alvarez.

    Motivations/Goals: - Sky King: Krow is greatly motivated by his desire to become Lord of the Skies, this desire stemming from hearing stories about the former Sky King from his Uncle Zetar.
    - Defeat Siegnius: While Krow fears his brother, he is also determined to defeat Siegnius as he believes his elder brother is standing in his way of becoming Lord of the Skies.
    - Crew: Krow is motivated to gather a strong crew, feeling that the Lord of the Skies needs to have a strong crew.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Krow has messy ivory white hair, not much unlike that of a cadaver.
    Eyes: Krow has fierce golden yellow eyes, like two orbs that pierce through the black of night.
    Skin Tone: Krow has a lightly tanned skin tone.
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 135 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Krow is a youth of average height, with messy ivory white hair and golden yellow eyes. While not tall in terms of his height, he has a well-toned musculature, with a slightly tanned skin tone. He has a three-stitched scar under his left eye.

    Krow wears a few different outfits, his primary outfit being an open, blue vest, black shorts, plain sandals and his trademark straw hat. His secondary outfit contains the same bottom attire, with the vest being swapped out in favor of a hooded vest, white fur around the hood, the arm holes being ripped. His third outfit is a 3/4th long-sleeved blue cardigan, left open, a red sash tied around his waist with the same lower attire.

    Other:
    Rank: Guild Master
    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo Krow's guild mark is located on his right shoulder and its color is black.



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Mon Oct 05, 2015 5:27 pm

    I had contemplated making it more than cosmetic, which I believe I have worked up a scale for, so could you possibly PM and I can break down the Healing Factors Scale for you?



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Mon Oct 05, 2015 7:02 pm

    BUMP!



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Amaterasu on Sun Oct 11, 2015 4:01 pm

    Hello Krow, I will be discussing with you on your app. Anything that is out of place or needs editing will be pointed out. Hope that you understand that there will be no biased grading on this application, any and all issues dealt with on this app is strictly based on the rules of this site. Now then without further adieu, your over all assessment.


    Species and Perks/Abilities:


    Flames Resurrection, this is really well balanced, Well done, this is approved

    Phoenix Form, This approved well done.

    Special Unique Characteristics:


    This is vague but it is acceptable I would have liked an explanation as to why the features are the way they are but that is optional.

    Personality:


    I got a rather well painted picture of your character overall you did a good job here, this is approved

    As the likes/dislikes/fears/motivs go you explained them rather thoroughly which makes it visible to understand why your character is who he is so well done.

    Other:


    This section is pretty much a freebie I would be concerned if you failed this, good job lol

    [left][size=12]Overall Opinion:

    Overall this application went above and beyond in certain areas, so good job, it was lacking with the characteristics but that is really optional at that point. Very well done Krow, I was expecting to tear it apart as the way the application was described but I was surprised you did well, this is approved.

    -MOVED TO APPROVED COLOR HAS BEEN GIVEN HAPPY ROLE PLAYING!-






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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Selenia on Wed Oct 28, 2015 4:06 pm

    Hello Krow ^^ My name is Selenia and I'll be grading your app today~

    Everything looks awesome, but since the format of the app changed, there are a few small little things you're missing under "General Information". Your character's birthday, unless it has a hidden plot reason, should be added (just the month and day, of course.) Also, character allegiance (Lawful Good, Chaotic Neutral, etc.) needs to be added. Finally, please add your character's gender.

    Also, I think you forgot to edit this (Beside this physical changes, he has also gained an increased healing factor which is explained below.) from your character's species info. I know you have reincarnation, but the wording is more of a reference to your old ability. It still kind of fits for reincarnation though, so just let me know if you want to change this or not.

    Also, I'll just say that your magic isn't usable in PvP until it's approved.

    Everything else looks great! Bump to let me know when you made the edits and I'll get back to you ASAP!

    (P.S. Only mentioned that thing about magic because Sonya clarified it for me when I asked her about it when I was grading an app, I know you know xD)
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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Wed Oct 28, 2015 4:11 pm

    BUMP~



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Selenia on Wed Oct 28, 2015 4:17 pm

    Everything looks great :D

    Character approved!



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Selenia on Thu Dec 24, 2015 10:01 am

    Moved for edits~



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Axium 'War' Ikaru on Mon Dec 28, 2015 1:58 pm

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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Selenia on Mon Dec 28, 2015 5:34 pm

    Hey Krow, I need you to add gender in the top of your app (after race, if you'd like) just for simplicity.

    As to your perks, you never stated the word count for reincarnation's training threads. Also, do you mean at most 10 times?

    As to Flames of Resurrection, what are scattered flames? Also, as far as I'm concerned, eating Dragon, God, and Devil Slayer Flames would be part of Legendary Slayer magic, and therefore must be part of the magic apps perks. Please remove that part.

    Spoiler:
    - Flames of Resurrection: Krow is able to recover health, by absorbing or consuming flames (whether they be Dragon, God, or Demon Flames), he can also regenerate from scattered azure flames. However, regenerating from scattered flames takes up to three posts, and he will suffer from nausea during these three posts. The scale for his generalized health regeneration by absorbing flames is; 2.5% at D-rank, 5% at C-rank, 7.5% at B-rank, 10% at A-rank, 12.5% at S-rank, and 15% at SS-rank. Sora as a consequence of being a Phoenix, yet at the same time, not a Phoenix, is cursed with a body of flames. While he may, for all intents and purposes, appear to be no different from a human, his body has actually become one of flames. This is both a curse and a blessing, it is a curse, as regenerating when his body is damaged and reduced to scattered flames causes him physical pain and nausea. On the other hand, it is also a blessing, as unless the scattered flames are all extinguished by water at the exact same moment, he can regenerate fully, albeit with nausea keeping him off guard. This regeneration from flames takes up to three posts.



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Mon Dec 28, 2015 6:03 pm

    @Selenia wrote:Hey Krow, I need you to add gender in the top of your app (after race, if you'd like) just for simplicity.

    As to your perks, you never stated the word count for reincarnation's training threads. Also, do you mean at most 10 times? Ten times is the maximum.

    As to Flames of Resurrection, what are scattered flames? Also, as far as I'm concerned, eating Dragon, God, and Devil Slayer Flames would be part of Legendary Slayer magic, and therefore must be part of the magic apps perks. Please remove that part. Fixed this.

    Spoiler:
    - Flames of Resurrection: Krow is able to recover health, by absorbing or consuming flames (whether they be Dragon, God, or Demon Flames), he can also regenerate from scattered azure flames. However, regenerating from scattered flames takes up to three posts, and he will suffer from nausea during these three posts. The scale for his generalized health regeneration by absorbing flames is; 2.5% at D-rank, 5% at C-rank, 7.5% at B-rank, 10% at A-rank, 12.5% at S-rank, and 15% at SS-rank. Sora as a consequence of being a Phoenix, yet at the same time, not a Phoenix, is cursed with a body of flames. While he may, for all intents and purposes, appear to be no different from a human, his body has actually become one of flames. This is both a curse and a blessing, it is a curse, as regenerating when his body is damaged and reduced to scattered flames causes him physical pain and nausea. On the other hand, it is also a blessing, as unless the scattered flames are all extinguished by water at the exact same moment, he can regenerate fully, albeit with nausea keeping him off guard. This regeneration from flames takes up to three posts.



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Krow on Mon Dec 28, 2015 7:52 pm

    Bump.



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    Re: Kyros D. Sora (Done)

    Post by Selenia on Mon Dec 28, 2015 7:53 pm

    Approved ^^




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