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    Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Zagan on Mon Oct 12, 2015 8:44 pm

    Zagan Bloodstorm
    Z
    21
    July 1st
    Fallen Angel
    D Rank
    Neutral Evil
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk
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    A Fallen Angel - Fallen Angel are celestial beings that have been cast out of Heaven because either they rebelled from god or because they disobeyed a law of Heaven.

    Wings of an Angel - Zagan has black feathered wings that sprout from his back that make him able to fly
    Spoiler:
    Flying: This one is going to be a fairly common theme. Guess what, in reality, human/humanoid creatures have no hope of flying. This story isn't based on reality, it's based on fairy tail, where giant overpowered geckos can fly. No matter what your story may be, your probably going to have to face some sort of adversary that can fly, NPC or PC. Therefore all characters will be set under the given limitations so nobodies flying in the stratosphere or the ozone.

    D-rank: 100 feet (about 30.5 meters)
    C-rank: 300 feet (about 91.5 meters)
    B-rank: 500 feet (exactly 152.4 meters)
    A-rank: 600 feet (about 182.9 meters)
    S-rank: 750 feet (exactly 228.6 meters)
    SS-rank: 900 feet (about 274.3 meters)
    X-rank: TBA
    A Fallen's Sight - Fallen Angels, being Angels, have a special sight. Angel's eyes are made to see through deceptions. Though because they lost their grace, Fallen Angels no longer can see through deception the same way an Angel can. Instead that have the unique trait of being able to lock their vision on a single target. This allows them to see them no matter what might try to block their vision, whether illusion, wall, smoke etc, as long as they are within range. The Fallen must see the target originally to active their sight and it can not be switched to another target for 3 posts. The Ranges for the Sight is as Follows.
    At D-Rank: 50m
    At C-Rank: 100 m
    At B-Rank: 250 m
    At A-Rank: 400 m
    At S-Rank: 600 m
    At SS-Rank: 800 m
    At X-Rank: 1,000 m


    Special Unique Characteristics
    Scars that crisscross all along his back

    Character Depth
    Personality: Zagan is the pinnacle of a suave handsome villain. On a regular basis he is known to smooth talk whom ever is in the way of him getting what he wants. Of course if that doesn't work he was always willing to resort to more violent measures. Though willing he tries to refrain from such acts most the time. While he enjoys the mastery over others, seeing their pain and suffering, it isn't a very useful tactic most of the time. Suave and charming like he is, he tends to turn to flattering and bribes to get most of his work done. This does not mean in any way that he is afraid to fight if a person persists, it's just that most the time he believes those that challenge him to beneath his notice let alone worth his time to fight.

    A former Master of Arms, Zagan has amazing skill with weaponry of all kinds but that alone did not make him highest ranked Master of Arms. Zagan was considered a tactical genius among his peers. Able to analyze with quick efficiency any potential threat and formulate plans meant to give him the advantage. Though tactically he could finish opponents off quickly, he normally likes to take his time and play around with those that he fights. He'll grin and watch his opponents suffer time and time again to do something to win, often getting desperate and doing something extremely foolish. It is moments like that Zagan really begins to enjoy a fight, watching an opponent realizing that they are powerless against such a being. Once they've seen their final attempts to win fail, Zagan kills them with brutal efficiency. With Stronger opponents though, Zagan doesn't waste such time. He'll move as quickly as possible to incapacitate them though not kill them. Anyone with such power that forces him to fight in such a way is not someone that he would outright kill unless he had no choice. Instead it is such beings that he gives the choice to vow an unbreakable oath to serve him or to suffer until he chooses to kill them.

    Now, while Zagan is capable of all these feats of holding his temper, keeping him from flying into homicidal rages, there are times that out of no where he'll let loose. It is as if there is a spinning wheel within himself made up of ten sections. 9 out of 10 of them say calm and collected but the 10th has but one word on it. MURDER! On this rare occasion, Zagan will hold nothing back and will kill all who vex him, whether in reality or only in his mind. These outbursts are extremely rare but once they happen, Zagan indulges in the cruelest forms brutality known. He revels in death and bathes in the blood of those he slays.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    -Chicken - It just stays too good to say that you can't have more of it.
    -Busty Woman - Being a former Celestial being without memory of his former life, he doesn't know why but large mammary glands he thinks are attractive. Very Attractive, especially if they're on a petite curvy woman.
    -Blood - The feel of blood on his skin, the warm wetness, it makes his body tingle.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    -Fish - Hates the taste, hates the smell and hates all those little bones.
    -Self Righteous Heroes - Those pompous, going around do gooders make him sick. He wants them all dead.
    -Finding out he is out of money - As a former Angel, he never had the use for money but since he fell, he found out that it is needed for a host of things. Having no money when he first arrived he knows how troublesome it can be, so just steal some.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    -Losing All his Power - he needs power to achieve his goals. If someone steals it all then he will never be able to remove god and take his place.
    -Death - Zagan's met the dude, he's scary.
    -Finding someone that he would actually care about. To care would mean to have a weakness. If he cared about someone, enemies could use that person to keep him from his goals.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    -To Recreate the World in his Image - Zagan wants to control everything. He plans to take over the world and make it into a world of suffering.
    -To Gain Absolute Power - He wants to destroy God, he's no fool though. He knows that it will take immense power to do so, so he seeks it out, killing anyone trying to stop him.
    -To Regain access to the Heavens he was thrown from - he seeks to kill and replace God, so he needs to find a way back into heaven to do so.


    Appearance
    Hair: Silver
    Eyes: Red
    Skin Tone: Lightly Tanned
    Height: 6'3"
    Weight: 195 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances:
    Spoiler:


    Other

    Guild: Tartarus
    Guild Tattoo: Blood Red and Black





    Last edited by Zagan on Sun Oct 25, 2015 1:11 am; edited 12 times in total
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Krow on Mon Oct 12, 2015 9:59 pm

    Dibs. (I'll get to it first thing tomorrow.)



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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Sun Wukong on Mon Oct 12, 2015 10:30 pm

    Overall everything looks good but there is a few things im going to need you to add to this app! should be short and painless~

    First, you need to adhere to our flight rules posted below.

    @Ean Sableheart wrote:Maximum attack distance: TBA

    AoE ranges: TBA


    Flying: This one is going to be a fairly common theme. Guess what, in reality, human/humanoid creatures have no hope of flying. This story isn't based on reality, it's based on fairy tail, where giant overpowered geckos can fly. No matter what your story may be, your probably going to have to face some sort of adversary that can fly, NPC or PC. Therefore all characters will be set under the given limitations so nobodies flying in the stratosphere or the ozone.

    Spoiler:

    D-rank: 100 feet (about 30.5 meters)
    C-rank: 300 feet (about 91.5 meters)
    B-rank: 500 feet (exactly 152.4 meters)
    A-rank: 600 feet (about 182.9 meters)
    S-rank: 750 feet (exactly 228.6 meters)
    SS-rank: 900 feet (about 274.3 meters)
    X-rank: TBA

    Also im going to need you to put at least a sentence explanation of all of your Likes/Dislikes/Fears/Motivations. After this, everything should be fine~



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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Zagan on Mon Oct 12, 2015 10:40 pm

    Edited
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Sun Wukong on Mon Oct 12, 2015 11:08 pm

    you forgot to add the flight information and to add descriptions for motivations~



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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Zagan on Mon Oct 12, 2015 11:14 pm

    Fixed
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Sun Wukong on Tue Oct 13, 2015 8:19 am

    Edits have been made according to what I asked for~

    Gaelan wrote:
    Gaelan Shadowbane
    Lan
    21
    July 1st
    Fallen Angel
    D Rank
    Chaotic Good
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk
    List Wings of an Angel - Gaelan has black feathered wings that sprout from his back that make him able to fly
    Spoiler:
    Flying: This one is going to be a fairly common theme. Guess what, in reality, human/humanoid creatures have no hope of flying. This story isn't based on reality, it's based on fairy tail, where giant overpowered geckos can fly. No matter what your story may be, your probably going to have to face some sort of adversary that can fly, NPC or PC. Therefore all characters will be set under the given limitations so nobodies flying in the stratosphere or the ozone.

    D-rank: 100 feet (about 30.5 meters)
    C-rank: 300 feet (about 91.5 meters)
    B-rank: 500 feet (exactly 152.4 meters)
    A-rank: 600 feet (about 182.9 meters)
    S-rank: 750 feet (exactly 228.6 meters)
    SS-rank: 900 feet (about 274.3 meters)
    X-rank: TBA
    The Weight of a Soul - by looking into someone's eyes he can see all the evil or good they've done. Not specific details just the general deeds.


    Special Unique Characteristics
    Scars that crisscross all along his back

    Character Depth
    Personality: Gaelan is very laid back and calm for the most part, taking everything as it comes and never over reacting to any situation. Liking to joke around with those that he comes across and taunt his enemies, Gaelan usually takes control of situations though his cunning and charismatic attitude. Though Gaelan is able to relate to people, he makes very few real bonds with those he meets. Though he may not have many close friends, if your do become his friend he'll do basically anything to help you out.

    Though he can be laid back and easy going, when he is working, Gaelan is very serious. Work is work, whether this be a mission or going about his own personal mission in the world, while he is doing it he is completely focused on the task. This doesn't mean he won't break his attitude to taunt enemies, but other than that he will be all about this task.

    Gaelan is not one to run from a fight when something he cares for is in danger. Strong and cunning, Gaelan puts both to use to fight any opponent that would threaten him. In battle his attitude changes almost completely, fierce and focused. Every move he makes calculated to move him into his next move. Though he may still look easy going and taunt his enemy, his every thought is about what he was going to do next. Though he knows there are those out there that are stronger than him, Gaelan wants to fight them even more than normally due to there strength. He believes that either win or lose, he'll have learned something from the exchange.
    Likes: (3 minimum)
    -Chicken - There is something about the taste of Chicken that he really enjoys Especially when the chicken is fried. Does that say something about himself?
    -Busty Woman - Being a former Celestial being without memory of his former life, he doesn't know why but large mammary glands he thinks are attractive. Very Attractive, especially if they're on a petite curvy woman.
    -The Smell of a Forest After it Rains - When he first landed it was this smell, the first smell that he ever remembers. From that point on whenever he smells a wet rain forest it brings him a kind of piece.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    -Fish - Hates the taste, hates the smell and hates all those little bones.
    -Someone Abusing Another Person - Being a Celestial Being, he seeks to bring peace to everyone. When he sees someone abusing another person, it is in his nature to put a stop to it by any means necessary.
    -Finding out he is out of money - As a former Angel, he never had the use for money but since he fell, he found out that it is needed for a host of things. Having no money when he first arrived he knows how troublesome it can be.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    -Not being Remembered after he dies - He was an Angel, he fought to help mortals. To die without being remembered for any of that or recognized for the good he has done would be a tragedy.
    -Having his wings stripped from him - His wings are his pride and glory. Though they are now Black instead of White, he still loves them deeply and fears that they like his grace might be stripped from him.
    -Failing to protect an innocent - He's a being of Good. If it is in his power to keep safe an innocent Child and fails to do so is more than a failure. It is a loss of purpose.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    -To Regain his lost Memory - He was thrown out of Heaven for a reason. What the reason was he doesn't remember but he plans to find out no matter what.
    -To Rid the world of Evil Beings - He was a judge of the wicked in heaven and he will be on this earth until there are no more wicked to be had.
    -To Regain access to the Heavens he was thrown from - he was cast out but longs to feel the glory of the heavens around him once more.


    Appearance
    Hair: Silver
    Eyes: Red
    Skin Tone: Lightly Tanned
    Height: 6'3"
    Weight: 195 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances:
    Spoiler:


    Other

    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo: Blood Red and Black




    This app has received its first approval~! Now you just wait on Krow for your second approval~



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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Wed Oct 14, 2015 8:21 pm

    Hiya, just a few more things to fix!!

    Species Ability

    Can you give an example on seeing the "deeds" done? That'll help clarify

    You needs a description on your species here, as it is custom.

    Personality

    This needs to be at least 350 words.
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Zagan on Thu Oct 15, 2015 7:33 pm

    Completed and Changed
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:43 pm

    Okie, Approved! Have fun!
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Sat Oct 17, 2015 2:37 pm

    Removed for edits.
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Zagan on Sat Oct 17, 2015 9:22 pm

    Bump, ready for re-review
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Sun Oct 18, 2015 4:54 pm

    Re-approved!
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Fri Oct 23, 2015 10:33 pm

    Re-removed for edits ^ ^
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Zagan on Sat Oct 24, 2015 9:26 am

    Ready to be looked at once more. This time will be the last time I swear
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Sat Oct 24, 2015 10:21 am

    Rereapproved ^.^
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Sat Oct 24, 2015 11:05 pm

    More edits ^.^
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Zagan on Sun Oct 25, 2015 1:13 am

    Edited Again
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    Re: Zagan Bloodstorm

    Post by Mizuko on Tue Oct 27, 2015 12:23 pm

    rerereapproved.

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