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    Arc of Embodiment(Done)

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    Axel Vista



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    Arc of Embodiment(Done)

    Post by Axel Vista on Mon Oct 19, 2015 7:07 pm

    Arc of Embodiment
    S Rank
    Lost Magic
    N/A
    Main
    Tartaros
    Yes?
    Offense/Defense/Both


    Magic Description
    Arc of Embodiment is a form of Lost Magic that allows the caster to materialize, and subsequently use to their every whim, anything they can imagine. Any of their creations give them great versatility both in and out of combat. They can range anywhere from everyday objects and weapons to more complex creations, even living ones, or even simple images of whatever may be on the user's mind. These creations are also given special properties that goes accordingly to what they are. The user of this magic can also imagine bodily augmentations and disabilities. For example, if he imagines that the bones in someone's arm are made of cookies, this will become true. By imagining that his body is "more sturdy than the strongest steel," he can drastically increase his defense.

    Perks of Magic
    Casual creations: The user can create basic things at will that can't be used for offensive purposes, such as clothing or food, without the need to use up any magic power or a spell.
    Intuitive Mimicry- The user can copy the racial and magic perks of others, but can only copy 1 at a time. When using this perk user cannot use one of his racial or magic perks.
    High Intellect- In order to take full advantage of his magic the user has a high intellect of a vast number of topics. These topics range widely from all magic types, science, English, math and anything n between.


    Weaknesses
    Spells must be registered for each creation capable of hurting or causing pain. Reiz can't just materialize whatever he feels like at any time to attack with.

    Strengths
    Versatile, as virtually anything can be created from this magic.

    Spells
    Place your Spells you know here
    Name: Waters of Healing
    Rank: D
    Type: Healing
    Range: Self
    Appearance: A small jug of water
    Description: The user imagines a jug filled with magical healing water. Whoever drinks it instantly regains10% of their health back.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Invisible Protective Barrier
    Rank: D
    Type: Defense
    Range: Self
    Appearance: A invisible barrier that wraps around the user as a sort of “armor”.
    Description: The user imagines a invisible “armor” type barrier around himself that can protect him from up to C rank damage.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Sub Zero Zone
    Rank: D
    Type: Defense, AoE
    Range: 10 meters
    Appearance: 15 meter area all around the caster
    Description: The user imagines a area around himself in which all things without life cannot move. This includes spells and weapons, clothing however is not affected if someone is wearing it.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Strength of the Demons
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Appearance: Demon Blade guild mark appears and glows on all affected.
    Description: The user imagines and all demons or partial demons(halflings, fallen angels, vampires, etc) in the thread get a 15% boost to strength.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Thor’s Wrath
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: 50 meter radius
    Appearance: Black rain clouds form in the sky above that drop lightning to the earth
    Description: The user imagines and black rain clouds form in the sky in a 50 meter radius around the opponent. The clouds then drop 2 lightning bolts down onto the opponent. These lightning bolts cause electrical damage to whatever body part they hit for 2 post.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Extra: Anything else we should know about?

    Name: Demonic Lion
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: The lion is 13.2 feet long including the tail and weigh 585 lbs.
    Description: The user imagines  and in front of him, a demonic-looking lion with a fiery mane appears. This lion is big enough to be rode on. Its attacks deal C rank damage to the opponent, and can understand human speech; though it can't speak any, itself. When killed, it will explode into flames in a 5 meter radius before disappearing; anyone caught in the fire will be dealt C rank fire damage. In order to be dispelled the creature must take damage equal what an C rank mage does in order to die. These summons also have their own individuals stats equal to a mage of their rank.
    Extra:
    Stats:
    Strength:  Basic
    Precision: Beginner
    Endurance: Adept
    Agility: Basic

    Name: Hands of the Underworld
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary,AoE
    Range: 500 meter
    Appearance: Hands rising from the ground
    Description: The user imagines and as he does so, hands burst from the ground 10 meter radius around the target, which grab for the legs. If the target is detained and immobilized successfully from the legs, the hands will gradually begin to wrap around the target's entire body up to the neck.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Clone
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: A complete and exact clone of the user.
    Description: The user imagines a clone of themselves that has stats equal to the user. The clone also is able to use the same spells as the original if the original’s spell is on cooldown and vice versa.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Demon Bow
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: A all black long bow
    Spoiler:
    Description: The user summons a demon long bow and a a quiver full of infinite arrows. The arrows cause A rank damage when they pierce someone.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Isobel, The Demoness  of Fire
    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: A demon girl who stands at 5’11. She has long re hair, fair skin, wears armor, and wields a sword.
    Spoiler:
    Description: The user summons a demon that can attack on his behalf and can also use magic, however these spells are taken from the caster’s spell total. In order to be dispelled the creature must take damage equal what an A rank mage does in order to die. These summons also have their own individuals stats equal to a mage of their rank.
    Extra:
    Stats:
    Strength:  Master
    Precision: Beginner
    Endurance: Adept
    Agility: Adept
    Spells:
    Name: Inferno Vortex
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: 30 meters
    Appearance: A ball of fire that turns into a mini tornado
    Description: Isobel creates a fireball in her hand and throws it at the opponent and it grows in size. Once it grows it opens up and turns into a mini vortex that covers a 30 meter radius.

    Name: Demon Awakening
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Appearance: The user becomes bat and demon-like in appearance. While in this form, large, black bat wings form on his back, his hair grows longer and wilder, and a mask centers atop his head similar to a helmet, with two large horns extending outward to the sides towards the front. He now becomes more slender and his skin becomes extremely pale.
    Duration: 6 posts
    Cooldown: 7 posts
    Spoiler:
    Description: This new form adds a 10% increase to Strength, Endurance, and Agility.
    Extra: N/A

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    Genesis



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    Age : 16

    Re: Arc of Embodiment(Done)

    Post by Genesis on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:32 pm

    Hi my name is Genesis and I will be grading your app today. Remember you are an A rank. First off, Tartarous is no more so please change that. Secondly you are an A rank not S rank. Finally please choose whether this magic is offensive, defensive or both. Edits are in this color.
    @Axel Vista wrote:
    Arc of Embodiment
    S Rank
    Lost Magic
    N/A
    Main
    Tartaros
    Yes?
    Offense/Defense/Both


    Magic Description
    Arc of Embodiment is a form of Lost Magic that allows the caster to materialize, and subsequently use to their every whim, anything they can imagine. Any of their creations give them great versatility both in and out of combat. They can range anywhere from everyday objects and weapons to more complex creations, even living ones, or even simple images of whatever may be on the user's mind. These creations are also given special properties that goes accordingly to what they are. The user of this magic can also imagine bodily augmentations and disabilities. For example, if he imagines that the bones in someone's arm are made of cookies, this will become true. By imagining that his body is "more sturdy than the strongest steel," he can drastically increase his defense.

    Perks of Magic
    Casual creations: The user can create basic things at will that can't be used for offensive purposes, such as clothing or food, without the need to use up any magic power or a spell.
    Intuitive Mimicry- The user can copy the racial and magic perks of others, but can only copy 1 at a time. When using this perk user cannot use one of his racial or magic perks.Unfortunately this perk is denied due to the fact it breaks a few rules. Please remove or replace this perk.
    High Intellect- In order to take full advantage of his magic the user has a high intellect of a vast number of topics. These topics range widely from all magic types, science, English, math and anything n between.


    Weaknesses
    Spells must be registered for each creation capable of hurting or causing pain. Reiz (Did you mean Axel?) can't just materialize whatever he feels like at any time to attack with.


    Strengths
    Versatile, as virtually anything can be created from this magic.


    Spells
    Place your Spells you know here
    Name: Waters of Healing
    Rank: D
    Type: Healing
    Range: Self
    Appearance: A small jug of water
    Description: The user imagines a jug filled with magical healing water. Whoever drinks it instantly regains 10% of their health back.Healing takes place over the course of two posts. Which means whoever drinks this will gain 5% in the first post then 5% in the second post. Also this spell needs a cooldown and duration.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Invisible Protective Barrier
    Rank: D
    Type: Defense
    Range: Self
    Appearance: A invisible barrier that wraps around the user as a sort of “armor”.
    Description: The user imagines a invisible “armor” type barrier around himself that can protect him from up to C rank damage.You can only protect yourself from one D rank spell before the barrier is broken. Again a duration and cooldown is needed
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Sub Zero Zone
    Rank: D
    Type: Defense, AoE
    Range: 10 meters
    Appearance: 15 meter area all around the caster
    Description: The user imagines a area around himself in which all things without life cannot move. This includes spells and weapons, clothing however is not affected if someone is wearing it.
    This doesn't seem like a defensive spell but rather a supportive one. Duration and cooldown is needed
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Strength of the Demons
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Appearance: Demon Blade guild mark appears and glows on all affected. Just quick reminder Demon Blade is no longer a guild.
    Description: The user imagines and all demons or partial demons(halflings, fallen angels, vampires, etc) in the thread get a 15% boost to strength.This spell needs an actual AoE. Also stat buff rules have changed. You can boost the strength by one tier for a total of 3 post at C rank with a 4 post cooldown

    Extra: N/A

    Name: Thor’s Wrath
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: 50 meter radius The range for C rank AoE is 25 meters
    Appearance: Black rain clouds form in the sky above that drop lightning to the earth
    Description: The user imagines and black rain clouds form in the sky in a 50 meter radius around the opponent. The clouds then drop 2 lightning bolts down onto the opponent. These lightning bolts cause electrical damage to whatever body part they hit for 2 post. State that altogether through the entire spell C rank damage is taken. Also state the speed for this spell is C rank.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Extra: Anything else we should know about?

    Name: Demonic Lion
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: The lion is 13.2 feet long including the tail and weigh 585 lbs.
    Description: The user imagines  and in front of him, a demonic-looking lion with a fiery mane appears. This lion is big enough to be rode on. Its attacks deal C rank damage to the opponent, and can understand human speech; though it can't speak any, itself. When killed, it will explode into flames in a 5 meter radius before disappearing; anyone caught in the fire will be dealt C rank fire damage. In order to be dispelled the creature must take damage equal what an C rank mage does in order to die. These summons also have their own individuals stats equal to a mage of their rank.The last part of this spell where when defeated it explodes into flames and cause C rank damage requires another spell. Also you cannot cause C rank spell damage with each hit otherwise that would be too OP. State that the lion causes C rank PHYSICAL damage per hit. A duration and cooldown is required
    Extra:
    Stats:
    Strength:  Basic
    Precision: Beginner
    Endurance: Adept
    Agility: Basic
    Take out the stats

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    Name: Hands of the Underworld
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary,AoE
    Range: 500 meter[color=#0000ff]Range for B rank AoE is 45 meters
    Appearance: Hands rising from the ground
    Description: The user imagines and as he does so, hands burst from the ground 10 meter radius around the target, which grab for the legs. If the target is detained and immobilized successfully from the legs, the hands will gradually begin to wrap around the target's entire body up to the neck.State that the hands move at B rank speed. A duration and cooldown is needed.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Clone
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: A complete and exact clone of the user.
    Description: The user imagines a clone of themselves that has stats equal to the user. The clone also is able to use the same spells as the original if the original’s spell is on cooldown and vice versa.You cannot be allowed your clone to use spells that are in cooldown. Also summons have half the stats of the user. This needs a duration and cooldown.
    Extra: N/A

    You are A rank so you may only have one A rank spell. You can pick which one you would like to remove.
    Name: Demon Bow
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: A all black long bow
    Spoiler:
    Description: The user summons a demon long bow and a a quiver full of infinite arrows. The arrows cause A rank damage when they pierce someone.They cannot cause A rank spell damage per hit but rather A rank physical damage. Also a duration and cooldown is needed.
    Extra: N/A

    Name: Isobel, The Demoness  of Fire
    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Appearance: A demon girl who stands at 5’11. She has long re hair, fair skin, wears armor, and wields a sword.
    Spoiler:
    Description: The user summons a demon that can attack on his behalf and can also use magic, however these spells are taken from the caster’s spell total. In order to be dispelled the creature must take damage equal what an A rank mage does in order to die. These summons also have their own individuals stats equal to a mage of their rank. Stats are halved of the caster. A cooldown and duration is required.
    Extra:
    Stats:
    Strength:  Master
    Precision: Beginner
    Endurance: Adept
    Agility: Adept
    Spells:
    Name: Inferno Vortex
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: 30 meters
    Appearance: A ball of fire that turns into a mini tornado
    Description: Isobel creates a fireball in her hand and throws it at the opponent and it grows in size. Once it grows it opens up and turns into a mini vortex that covers a 30 meter radius.
    You unfortunately can only have 2 B rank spells at A rank so this one is denied straightaway.



    You are an A rank so you may not have an S rank spell.
    Name: Demon Awakening
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Appearance: The user becomes bat and demon-like in appearance. While in this form, large, black bat wings form on his back, his hair grows longer and wilder, and a mask centers atop his head similar to a helmet, with two large horns extending outward to the sides towards the front. He now becomes more slender and his skin becomes extremely pale.
    Duration: 6 posts
    Cooldown: 7 posts
    Spoiler:
    Description: This new form adds a 10% increase to Strength, Endurance, and Agility.
    Extra: N/A

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