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    Eleazar Stronghold



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    Eleazar Stronghold

    Post by Eleazar Stronghold on Fri Oct 23, 2015 5:05 pm

    Eleazar Stronghold
    Eli, Zar
    23
    April 23
    Human
    D Rank
    Chaotic Neutral
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk
    Due to his talents, Eleazar has always had a resistance to the cold. He feels quite comfortable wearing minimal clothing in an arctic winter. On the other hand, he doesn't have this resistance for fire, making him just as vulnerable, if not slightly more so, to the element.

    Special Unique Characteristics
    Eleazar has a rather large, jagged scar running down his right side from a fight when he was younger. He usually avoid being shirtless around people at all costs because of this. He also has a barcode branded on the back of his neck, but he doesn't care much for it, since he'd just punch anyone who mentions it.

    Character Depth
    Personality: Eleazar did whatever he could to keep his sister and himself alive when they were growing up. He grew up conflicted, torn between doing the right thing and doing what was needed to survive. Whenever he stole something, he would find a way to compensate, either going back to the place he stole from and volunteering to help, or simply finding a way to pay back what was taken. He also grew up lying to his sister. This was the real source of conflict in him; she didn't remember anything of their past, but he did. He just didn't want to trigger the memories of torture, pain and grief in her. But at the same time, lying to his twin every day was exhausting and went against everything in him. To say he valued doing the right thing is an understatement.

    When he was imprisoned, he gradually lost his "always think of Aemi first", since there was no Aemi to look out for. It took him a while, but he became more conscious of his own needs and safety. He became harder, and put himself first. Of course, he was influenced by Forge, his prison mate, who was... well, let's say rebellious. Eleazar learned to let go of the whole good and evil, and just value what is best for himself. If it means to do something bad, he'll do it.

    When it comes to killing, Eleazar does not hesitate anymore. If he needs to torture, he'll do it too. He's become very good at dissociation, compartmentalizing his thoughts and feelings. After breaking out of jail, Eleazar had to do some shady jobs here and there to get himself a good enough foothold to protect himself. He didn't really do any of these things for pleasure, but more out of necessity. However, with this skill of dissociating, he developed a temper. He keeps it under control, channeling it in combat or during an interrogation,  but he sometimes fears that it will burst out of him and he'll lose control. Regardless, he always keeps a shit-eating grin on his face.

    Likes:
    - Magic
    - Being stronger than his opponent
    - Aemi

    Dislikes:
    - Police
    - Being trapped
    - Being threatened

    Fears:
    - Confinement (Claustrophobic) ~ From his time in a cell. Eleazar panics when he is in enclosed space.
    - His sister dying ~ Eleazar is quite convinced that Aemi's death would result in his own. What with their connection, added to his love for her, he wouldn't be able to survive not having her in the same world as he is.
    - Losing the ability to use magic ~ Using magic always brings him some measure of joy. Losing his magic would be like losing an arm.
    - His own anger ~ He is afraid that he will lose control of himself and end up hurting Aemi, or doing something he will regret.

    Motivations/Goals:
    - Make sure his sister is safe once and for all
    - Find said sister first
    - Try not to die


    Appearance
    Hair: White
    Eyes: Light blue
    Skin Tone: He is one pasty boy
    Height: 5’9”
    Weight: 145 lbs
    Overall Appearances:
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    Other

    Guild: Arcana Force
    Guild Tattoo: On his left shoulder



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    Selenia



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    Re: Eleazar Stronghold

    Post by Selenia on Mon Oct 26, 2015 8:04 pm

    Hello, I'm Selenia and I'll be grading your app today ^~^

    First off, your perk. Just wanted to clarify it and ask for a bit more information.

    Spoiler:
    Due to his talents, Eleazar has always had a resistance to the cold. He feels quite comfortable wearing minimal clothing in an arctic winter. On the other hand, he doesn't have this resistance for fire, making him just as vulnerable, if not slightly more so, to the element.

    First things first, can you explain more about what these talents entail? If your character is going to be an Ice-Make mage or something of that sort, then this might be better if you put in in the magic's perks. You'll need to quantify it if it's going to have an effect in PvP as well.

    That being said, if this does not affect PvP, then you can leave it mostly as is, although some more info about your talents would still be required. (For example, if this post is simply about minimal clothing in an arctic winter, which you want to RP, I think it'd be fine, as long as it has no PvP usage.)

    Second up is your Personality. More info about how he acts in combat situations needs to be added; I couldn't really tell what he would do in a fight.

    Finally, Likes, Dislikes, and Goals/Motivations all need at least a sentence description. Please add those as well :D

    That should be all, please bump once you've edited and I'll review it again as soon as possible, thank you~
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    Selenia



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    Re: Eleazar Stronghold

    Post by Selenia on Sat Nov 28, 2015 12:36 pm

    Bumping. If no response is made to this app within a week, app will be archived, thanks!




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