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    Ruby Rhion

    Post by Ruby on Wed Oct 28, 2015 9:59 pm

    Ruby Rhion
    Red
    19
    June 6th
    Bionic Human
    D-Rank
    Chaotic Good
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk
    As a Bionic Human, Ruby doesn't just have circuits and machinery inside of her; the machinery is part of her DNA, and has fully integrated itself into her body. Not normal technology by any means, it has become part of her very flesh. Being an orphan, she's not sure how it got there, but she believes it may be magical in nature and seems to be able to affect her body. However, the magical technology isn't physically obvious; she looks, mostly, like any other human, and for all intents and purposes she still is. She's just better. The bionics inside of her have improved her human functions and abilities greatly, and she still doesn't even completely understand it.

    -Mechanical Reconstruction: Ruby can have her body rebuild through the bionics within her. This is a passive perk which activates automatically once she has taken damage of her rank. It allows her to heal damage to her body of her rank with a two post duration and a three post cooldown. Currently at D-Rank, it takes two posts to heal that D-Rank damage, but once she has reached C-Rank she will heal C-Rank damage over two turns (D-Rank each turn), and at B-Rank she will heal over two turns (C-Rank each turn), and so on.
    -Increased Experience: Ruby is able to increase all the EXP she gets from jobs by a set percent (this will depend on a dice roll). This occurs because of her bionics mostly - although she is of average intelligence normally, the bionics in her brain allowed her to learn much more than an average human, and much faster. For this reason, whenever she goes on jobs, she is able to take away much more from it. The experience she gains from it allows her to grow faster.


    Special Unique Characteristics
    Her eyes have gear-shaped irises due to her bionics, but her fiery streak of red hair is due to a mutation in her human genetics.

    Character Depth
    Personality: Ruby has a relatively simple personality: fierce and stubborn, which stems from her human willpower. She fears little, which is demonstrated when she directly and disrespectfully those who claim to be stronger than her, demanding that they recognize her strength. She is somewhat self-conscious about her body (because of her bionics), but is very confident in her own abilities. The self-conscious side of her is usually hidden and only known to herself. She has to get stronger to prevent herself from ever becoming complacent with her bionically-enhanced abilities, which means pushing the unrestricted boundaries of her human body and having both parts of her work in perfect unison. Being partially bionic, things are a lot easier for Ruby than they are for a normal human. Not only is she physically stronger, but her mind works differently; she can tackle problems from the clearest, most logical solution in an instant, but sometimes fails to see that the best solution isn't always the most logical. Others' feelings have never been of major concern to her, but she has begun to realize that what she does actually does affect others.

    In battle, she shows fierce determination in defeating her opponent and grow stronger. Her stubbornness and strength of will is insane, but she won't ever let herself feel like she's reached her limit or unable to surpass her current strength, which includes having people be stronger than her. She will push herself until she has given it her all, and then push herself to go beyond that. Even if she ends up dying, she never wants to let either her human capabilities or the capabilities of the bionics within her restrict her; she will do whatever it takes to make it to the top. She can get reckless, but in all honesty, she has a lot of fun while she fights, proving to herself that she can be stronger than she's ever been before. However, she as much as she wants to be stronger, she won't give herself any undue hardships. If she's able to figure out the quickest way possible to take down an opponent, she will take it. After all, she'll be proving how she's grown if she's able to defeat anyone that tries to take her down. She's a bit of a solo fighter, preferring to fight alone due to her concentrated on the battle she becomes; strategy involving others doesn't usually concern her, since she feels like others will just slow her down most of the time, unless they can prove themselves to her.

    Likes:
    - Fighting: It's the one main way she can prove she is getting stronger. She's very competitive, and will fight anyone who asks. She only becomes deadly when dealing with enemies, but she takes regular fights just as seriously, giving her full power as long as it won't kill the person she's fighting.
    - Meeting Capable People: When she meets new people, her hope is always that, if they are willing, they will be worthy opponents that she can view as equals, due to her wanting to be viewed as an equal. She enjoys the company of those willing to take risks.
    - Resounding Music: Ruby finds loud, powerful music really cool; it helps her get pumped up for a fight and she feels like it allows her to express herself in some ways.

    Dislikes:
    - Lazy People: Anyone who doesn't feel like going out there and becoming more than what they already are, no matter how strong they are or think they are, is worthless in her opinion, and piss her off, especially if they are strong. She doesn't like to deal with them if she can help it.
    - People Lacking Confidence: She feels a certain pity for some of them, who can't help being so weak. But those who have the power to be strong, or are strong but don't realize it just frustrate her to no end since they are the only ones stopping themselves. However, the ones she can't stand at all are those who give up completely. Ruby herself will never stop fighting till the end, and she believes others should as well.
    - People With No Morals: She feels like these people are the lowest of the low in society; even if she can be a bit destructive while she battles, she's still a good person in the end. However, anyone who has no respect for themselves or respect for others isn't someone she can appreciate on equal terms.

    Fears:
    - Afterlife: While not really fearing death itself, she fears the fact that she doesn't know what comes after, and what will happen to her.
    - Becoming Powerless: Different from unsurpassable power, she worries that she'll lose all her power and become completely unable to do anything. While she always strive to grow, becoming powerless would completely cause her to panic, whereas unsurpassable power would simply be something she would not want to face yet for fear of not being to match up.
    - Unsurpassable Power: She worries that there is someone out there so strong that she'll never be able to reach them in power, but she hopes that she'll be able to keep growing stronger even if she does find someone that she currently can never hope to reach, in the hopes that one day she will be able to reach their level, and then surpass even them.

    Motivations/Goals:
    - Growing Stronger: She never wants to be limited in her power, so she's always trying to progress beyond her current limitations. She won't let what or who she is define her, but she will allow it to help her reach this goal.
    - Discovering New Machines: Through her Machina Soul, she's always looking for new machines which she can adapt into her body to grow stronger. (Machina Soul must be approved first for this to apply. Machina Soul will be her primary magic.)
    - To Be Understood: Ruby feels like she's always been different from everyone else due to the bionic nature of her body; even though she's still human, she also isn't. She just wants to be able to relate to people and for them to be able to understand her as well.


    Appearance
    Hair: Black with red streak
    Eyes: Blue
    Skin Tone: Caucasian
    Height: 5'5
    Weight: 120 lbs
    Overall Appearances:
    Spoiler:


    Other

    Guild: Rusty Hearts
    Guild Tattoo: Red, located on the left side of her body, to the left of but below the ribs and above her waist.





    Last edited by Ruby on Mon Feb 01, 2016 3:34 pm; edited 2 times in total



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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Mizuko on Thu Oct 29, 2015 9:44 pm

    First approval given ^.^
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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Krow on Sun Nov 01, 2015 2:08 pm

    Hello there, my name is Krow-sama, I shall be doing your second grading.

    @Ruby wrote:
    Ruby Rhion
    Red
    19
    June 6th
    Bionic Human
    D-Rank
    Chaotic Good
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk
    As a Bionic Human, Ruby doesn't just have circuits and machinery inside of her; the machinery is part of her DNA, and has fully integrated itself into her body. Not normal technology by any means, it has become part of her very flesh. Being an orphan, she's not sure how it got there, but she believes it may be magical in nature and seems to be able to affect her body. However, the magical technology isn't physically obvious; she looks, mostly, like any other human, and for all intents and purposes she still is. She's just better. The bionics inside of her have improved her human functions and abilities greatly, and she still doesn't even completely understand it.

    - Enhanced Strength: Ruby can increase her physical strength by one rank for a maximum of one turn at D-Rank, two turns at C-Rank, three turns at B-Rank, four turns at A-Rank, five turns at S-Rank, six turns at SS-Rank, and seven turns at X-Rank. She accomplishes this by temporarily removing the limit on her human strength through the bionics in her body. However, if she has a set duration because if not the effects of the limiter removal would be irreversible, causing damage throughout her body's frame. Cannot be used while Enhanced Speed is active.
    Please give this a set Cool-down, this cool-down must always surpass the Duration by at least one post.

    - Enhanced Speed: Ruby can increase her speed by one rank for a maximum of one turn at D-Rank, two turns at C-Rank, three turns at B-Rank, four turns at A-Rank, five turns at S-Rank, six turns at SS-Rank, and seven turns at X-Rank. She accomplishes this by temporarily removing the limit on her human speed through the bionics in her body. However, if she has a set duration because if not the effects of the limiter removal would be irreversible, causing damage throughout her body's frame. Cannot be used while Enhanced Strength is active.
    Please give this a set Cool-down, this cool-down must always surpass the Duration by at least one post. Also, please give exact numbers for her base speed and the increase in speed.



    Special Unique Characteristics
    Her eyes have gear-shaped irises due to her bionics, but her fiery streak of red hair is due to a mutation in her human genetics.

    Character Depth
    Personality: Ruby has a relatively simple personality: fierce and stubborn, which stems from her human willpower. She fears little, which is demonstrated when she directly and disrespectfully those who claim to be stronger than her, demanding that they recognize her strength. She is somewhat self-conscious, but is very confident in her own abilities. She has to get stronger to prevent herself from ever becoming complacent with her bionically-enhanced abilities, which means pushing the unrestricted boundaries of her human body and having both parts of her work in perfect unison. Being partially bionic, things are a lot easier for Ruby than they are for a normal human. Not only is she physically stronger, but her mind works differently; she can tackle problems from the clearest, most logical solution in an instant, but sometimes fails to see that the best solution isn't always the most logical. Others' feelings have never been of major concern to her, but she has begun to realize that what she does actually does affect others.

    In battle, she shows fierce determination in defeating her opponent and grow stronger. Her stubbornness and strength of will is insane, but she won't ever let herself feel like she's reached her limit or unable to surpass her current strength, which includes having people be stronger than her. She will push herself until she has given it her all, and then push herself to go beyond that. Even if she ends up dying, she never wants to let either her human capabilities or the capabilities of the bionics within her restrict her; she will do whatever it takes to make it to the top. She can get reckless, but in all honesty, she has a lot of fun while she fights, proving to herself that she can be stronger than she's ever been before. However, she as much as she wants to be stronger, she won't give herself any undue hardships. If she's able to figure out the quickest way possible to take down an opponent, she will take it. After all, she'll be proving how she's grown if she's able to defeat anyone that tries to take her down. She's a bit of a solo fighter, preferring to fight alone due to her concentrated on the battle she becomes; strategy involving others doesn't usually concern her, since she feels like others will just slow her down most of the time, unless they can prove themselves to her.

    Likes:
    - Fighting: It's the one main way she can prove she is getting stronger. She's very competitive, and will fight anyone who asks. She only becomes deadly when dealing with enemies, but she takes regular fights just as seriously, giving her full power as long as it won't kill the person she's fighting.
    - Meeting Capable People: When she meets new people, her hope is always that, if they are willing, they will be worthy opponents that she can view as equals, due to her wanting to be viewed as an equal. She enjoys the company of those willing to take risks.
    - Resounding Music: Ruby finds loud, powerful music really cool; it helps her get pumped up for a fight and she feels like it allows her to express herself in some ways.

    Dislikes:
    - Lazy People: Anyone who doesn't feel like going out there and becoming more than what they already are, no matter how strong they are or think they are, is worthless in her opinion, and piss her off, especially if they are strong. She doesn't like to deal with them if she can help it.
    - People Lacking Confidence: She feels a certain pity for some of them, who can't help being so weak. But those who have the power to be strong, or are strong but don't realize it just frustrate her to no end since they are the only ones stopping themselves. However, the ones she can't stand at all are those who give up completely. Ruby herself will never stop fighting till the end, and she believes others should as well.
    - People With No Morals: She feels like these people are the lowest of the low in society; even if she can be a bit destructive while she battles, she's still a good person in the end. However, anyone who has no respect for themselves or respect for others isn't someone she can appreciate on equal terms.

    Fears:
    - Electricity: A powerful force, it can certainly disrupt her bionics. More info on this in her magic. (Which is only applicable once her magic is approved)
    - Magnetism: Similar to electricity, she is afraid magnetism will be able to ruin her bionics. More info on this in her magic. (Which is only applicable once her magic is approved)
    - Unsurpassed Power: She worries that there is someone out there so strong that she'll never be able to reach them in power, but she hopes that she'll be able to keep growing stronger even if she does find someone that she currently can never hope to reach, in the hopes that one day she will be able to reach their level, and then surpass even them.

    Motivations/Goals:
    - Growing Stronger: She never wants to be limited in her power, so she's always trying to progress beyond her current limitations. She won't let what or who she is define her, but she will allow it to help her reach this goal.
    -Discovering New Machines: Through her Machina Soul, she's always looking for new machines which she can adapt into her body to grow stronger. (Machina Soul must be approved first for this to apply/her magic to be usable in PvP)
    - To Be Understood: Ruby feels like she's always been different from everyone else due to the bionic nature of her body; even though she's still human, she also isn't. She just wants to be able to relate to people and for them to be able to understand her as well.


    Appearance
    Hair: Black with red streak
    Eyes: Blue
    Skin Tone: Caucasian
    Height: 5'5
    Weight: 120 lbs
    Overall Appearances:
    Spoiler:


    Other

    Guild: Rusty Hearts
    Guild Tattoo: Red, located on the left side of her body, to the left of but below the ribs and above her waist.






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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Ruby on Sun Nov 01, 2015 2:33 pm

    Le Bump~



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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Krow on Sun Nov 01, 2015 3:24 pm

    Second Approval, given.
    Have fun.



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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Selenia on Fri Jan 08, 2016 11:15 pm

    Moved for edits



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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Ryoshi on Wed Jan 20, 2016 6:57 pm

    Hello, I am Ryoshi. As you may know, I can only give first approval so another staff member must come along and give second approval.

    After reviewing this app, I declare that everything looks good to me and give it my first approval.
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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Selenia on Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:53 am

    bumpppp



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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Lady on Mon Feb 01, 2016 10:56 am

    Hello there! Lady here to grade your application. All Edits and Opinions are in THIS COLOR!, If you have questions, comments, or concerns that are relative to the edits i have asked for please do not be afraid to address me or any other staff member.

    @Ruby wrote:
    Ruby Rhion
    Red
    19
    June 6th
    Bionic Human
    D-Rank
    Chaotic Good
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk
    As a Bionic Human, Ruby doesn't just have circuits and machinery inside of her; the machinery is part of her DNA, and has fully integrated itself into her body. Not normal technology by any means, it has become part of her very flesh. Being an orphan, she's not sure how it got there, but she believes it may be magical in nature and seems to be able to affect her body. However, the magical technology isn't physically obvious; she looks, mostly, like any other human, and for all intents and purposes she still is. She's just better. The bionics inside of her have improved her human functions and abilities greatly, and she still doesn't even completely understand it.

    -Mechanical Reconstruction: Ruby can have her body rebuild through the bionics within her. However, she must activate this perk; it doesn't happen passively. It allows her to deal Heal right? instead of Deal?...D-Rank damage to her body at D-Rank with a two post duration and a three post cooldown. The amount she can heal will increase with her rank so that she can heal C-Rank damage over two posts at C-Rank, and B-Rank damage over two posts at B-Rank, and so forth. Because this is an activated perk instead of passive, please state that she can not perform any other spells while this is activated. This is mostly because Ruby is D Rank and would just be coming into her own as a mage, so therefore there are some feats she can not overcome yet.

    Also, is that D Rank damage PER post? Or just D Rank damage spread over 2 Posts?


    -Increased Experience: Ruby is able to increase all the EXP she gets from jobs by 20%. Now while this seems like fun and something i would certainly want to possess, i just do not see being able to modify the amount of exp obtained from jobs without a valid reason. Stated above you gave an exact answer to Why she was able to heal her body physically, that being her mechanical origin. But what about her race lets her gain a boost in EXP? Is it due to artificial Intelligence, or because of her enhanced body? Just give a valid reason as to why her species gains a boost in EXP and then it should be okay.


    Special Unique Characteristics
    Her eyes have gear-shaped irises due to her bionics, but her fiery streak of red hair is due to a mutation in her human genetics.

    Character Depth
    Personality: Ruby has a relatively simple personality: fierce and stubborn, which stems from her human willpower. She fears little, which is demonstrated when she directly and disrespectfully those who claim to be stronger than her, demanding that they recognize her strength. She is somewhat self-conscious, but is very confident in her own abilities. She has to get stronger to prevent herself from ever becoming complacent with her bionically-enhanced abilities, which means pushing the unrestricted boundaries of her human body and having both parts of her work in perfect unison. Being partially bionic, things are a lot easier for Ruby than they are for a normal human. Not only is she physically stronger, but her mind works differently; she can tackle problems from the clearest, most logical solution in an instant, but sometimes fails to see that the best solution isn't always the most logical. Others' feelings have never been of major concern to her, but she has begun to realize that what she does actually does affect others.

    In battle, she shows fierce determination in defeating her opponent and grow stronger. Her stubbornness and strength of will is insane, but she won't ever let herself feel like she's reached her limit or unable to surpass her current strength, which includes having people be stronger than her. She will push herself until she has given it her all, and then push herself to go beyond that. Even if she ends up dying, she never wants to let either her human capabilities or the capabilities of the bionics within her restrict her; she will do whatever it takes to make it to the top. She can get reckless, but in all honesty, she has a lot of fun while she fights, proving to herself that she can be stronger than she's ever been before. However, she as much as she wants to be stronger, she won't give herself any undue hardships. If she's able to figure out the quickest way possible to take down an opponent, she will take it. After all, she'll be proving how she's grown if she's able to defeat anyone that tries to take her down. She's a bit of a solo fighter, preferring to fight alone due to her concentrated on the battle she becomes; strategy involving others doesn't usually concern her, since she feels like others will just slow her down most of the time, unless they can prove themselves to her.
    This is looking good but i do suggest a thorough read thru and grammar check, as there were parts that i had a hard time understanding. One thing i want to point out in your contradictory traits. While reading this i got the impression that she was steadfast and headstrong, but you stated once that she was self-conscious. What is she self conscious about? This can split off her main fiery attitude, such as being more nervous around certain people or feeling uneasy when people find out what she is.

    This gives me an idea about who she wants to be and who she is on the outside, but what about on the inside? Does she have particular feelings about being the species she is? the only feeling i got from that was that she was not going to let it hold her back. Other than that it looks great and passed the WC.

    Likes:
    - Fighting: It's the one main way she can prove she is getting stronger. She's very competitive, and will fight anyone who asks. She only becomes deadly when dealing with enemies, but she takes regular fights just as seriously, giving her full power as long as it won't kill the person she's fighting.
    - Meeting Capable People: When she meets new people, her hope is always that, if they are willing, they will be worthy opponents that she can view as equals, due to her wanting to be viewed as an equal. She enjoys the company of those willing to take risks.
    - Resounding Music: Ruby finds loud, powerful music really cool; it helps her get pumped up for a fight and she feels like it allows her to express herself in some ways.

    Dislikes:
    - Lazy People: Anyone who doesn't feel like going out there and becoming more than what they already are, no matter how strong they are or think they are, is worthless in her opinion, and piss her off, especially if they are strong. She doesn't like to deal with them if she can help it.
    - People Lacking Confidence: She feels a certain pity for some of them, who can't help being so weak. But those who have the power to be strong, or are strong but don't realize it just frustrate her to no end since they are the only ones stopping themselves. However, the ones she can't stand at all are those who give up completely. Ruby herself will never stop fighting till the end, and she believes others should as well.
    - People With No Morals: She feels like these people are the lowest of the low in society; even if she can be a bit destructive while she battles, she's still a good person in the end. However, anyone who has no respect for themselves or respect for others isn't someone she can appreciate on equal terms.

    Here you state that ruby dislikes people who are not confident, so once again that clashes with the personality description you gave me. I do not see Ruby being self conscious as that would be hypocritical with her likes and dislikes, unless she hides her true self conscious acts as she wants to appear tough.

    Fears:
    - Electricity: A powerful force, it can likely disrupt her bionics.
    - Magnetism: Similar to electricity, she is afraid magnetism will be able to ruin her bionics.
    - Unsurpassed Power: She worries that there is someone out there so strong that she'll never be able to reach them in power, but she hopes that she'll be able to keep growing stronger even if she does find someone that she currently can never hope to reach, in the hopes that one day she will be able to reach their level, and then surpass even them.

    I do not mean to be nitpicky but you need to state another fear. Electricity and Magnetism produce the same result, therefore the true fear is that she is afraid her bionics can be hindered by electricity and magnets. Please state another fear or give valid reasoning behind their seperation.
    Motivations/Goals:
    - Growing Stronger: She never wants to be limited in her power, so she's always trying to progress beyond her current limitations. She won't let what or who she is define her, but she will allow it to help her reach this goal.
    -Discovering New Machines: Through her Machina Soul, she's always looking for new machines which she can adapt into her body to grow stronger. (Machina Soul must be approved first for this to apply/her magic to be usable in PvP) What is Machina Soul?? Is it her Species Perks? Her magic? Just for clarification on my end.
    - To Be Understood: Ruby feels like she's always been different from everyone else due to the bionic nature of her body; even though she's still human, she also isn't. She just wants to be able to relate to people and for them to be able to understand her as well. AH! THERE IT IS!!! I was waiting for some indication of feelings towards her species. It would be great to elaborate on this a bit in her personality if you could.


    Appearance
    Hair: Black with red streak
    Eyes: Blue
    Skin Tone: Caucasian
    Height: 5'5
    Weight: 120 lbs
    Overall Appearances:
    Spoiler:


    Other

    Guild: Rusty Hearts
    Guild Tattoo: Red, located on the left side of her body, to the left of but below the ribs and above her waist.




    In my Overall Opinion i feel this app is very well portrayed, but don't sell yourself short by settling. To enjoy Rping you have to connect and understand every part about your character, so if any of these edits i have asked for seem difficult please come to me with questions or concerns.
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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Ruby on Mon Feb 01, 2016 3:35 pm

    Bump~



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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Lady on Mon Feb 01, 2016 3:54 pm

    Very Well Done, you have made all the appropriate edits. ^^ Enjoy!








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    Re: Ruby Rhion

    Post by Genesis on Mon Feb 01, 2016 10:17 pm

    Hi, my name is Genesis and I will be grading for second approval.

    This seems all good. Second approval given!




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