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    Hiroko
    Hiroko

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 108
    Join date : 2015-10-24

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    Post by Hiroko Thu Dec 03, 2015 10:43 am

    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Black Airs
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is based on the creation of shock waves and vibration effects. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibrations around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air) and generating shock waves. These shock waves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks or break anything with a specific vibration for each target.

    Perks of Magic


    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shock waves when in contact with that object. The vibration can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects up to the size of a car. This however can also damage the user after several times using. This can only be used once per post before dealing 1% damage to the user.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when someone is coming and basically lets him see anything around him. This can be felt even in the air meaning he can detect even flying enemies, the weakness of this perk however is that if his health goes down to a 50% of his maximum health, it will automatically nullify the effects of the perk because of the damage the user has taken in his body, his radar in other words.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing extra damage and basically giving Hiroko a 2 Rank stat buff. This lasts 5 posts and then enters a cooldown of 6 posts.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Shockwave 4l20wZQ
    Chinmoku:

    Bureku:

    Iyahon:

    Shockwave 01UG7Sa
    Kyojin Ken:

    Jetto Blast:

    Yurei:

    Ikari Dansei:

    Shockwave TPuH4kG
    Oni Ude:

    Baria:

    Sonic Boom:

    Shockwave VUl2SUP
    Domu Breka:

    Oni Buraker:

    Shockwave ZpYOaPu

    Sekai no Jishin:

    Shockwave 7pCf7pz
    {SS-Rank Spells here}





    Last edited by Hiroko on Wed Feb 03, 2016 3:59 pm; edited 10 times in total
    Krow
    Krow

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 324
    Join date : 2015-03-13

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    Post by Krow Sat Dec 26, 2015 9:48 am

    Hello there, Krow here, I will be reviewing your Magic App today.
    All of the necessary changes will look like this.
    For starters, before I start reviewing the actual Spells, please go back and check the grammar and wording on the description, weaknesses and strength. Also, please elaborate upon the abilities, that way I can give them a proper reading.
    Bump once you are finished, and I will get to the Spells.

    Hiroko wrote:
    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Rusty Hearts
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is absed on the creation of shockwaves. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibration around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air). These shockwaves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks.

    Perks of Magic


    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shocwaves when in contact with that object. The shockwave can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects like one.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when is someone coming and basically lets him see anything around him.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing a 50% more damage upon any melee attack.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Shockwave 4l20wZQ
    Chinmoku:

    Bureku:

    Iyahon:

    Shockwave 01UG7Sa
    Kyojin Ken:

    Kyojin Ken:

    Kyojin Ken:

    Ikari Dansei:

    Shockwave TPuH4kG
    Oni Ude:

    Baria:

    Sonic Boom:

    Shockwave VUl2SUP
    Domu Breka:

    Oni Buraker:

    Shockwave ZpYOaPu

    Sekai no Jishin:

    Shockwave 7pCf7pz
    {SS-Rank Spells here}



    Hiroko
    Hiroko

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 108
    Join date : 2015-10-24

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    Post by Hiroko Sun Dec 27, 2015 6:56 pm

    Bump
    Krow
    Krow

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 324
    Join date : 2015-03-13

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    Post by Krow Sun Dec 27, 2015 8:00 pm

    Hello there, Krow here, I will be reviewing your Magic App today.
    All of the necessary changes will look like this.
    Like before, check below for the necessary changes that must be made.
    Oh, by the way, sorry in advance for the grammar nazi-ness. I just want your magic to be a clear read.
    Bump once you are finished.

    Hiroko wrote:
    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Black Airs
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is based on the creation of shock waves and vibration effects. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibrations around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air) and generating shock waves. These shock waves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks or break anything with a specific vibration for each target.

    Perks of Magic

    I need you give weaknesses/downfalls of these perks in their descriptions,

    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shoc waves when in contact with that object. The vibration can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects up to the size of a car.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when someone is coming and basically lets him see anything around him.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing 50% more damage upon any melee attack.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Shockwave 4l20wZQ
    Chinmoku:

    Bureku:

    Iyahon:

    Shockwave 01UG7Sa
    Kyojin Ken:

    Kyojin Ken:
    Delete this one as it is just a repetition of the above spell, and do the same for the one below, as it too, is just a repetition of the same exact spell.

    Kyojin Ken:

    Ikari Dansei:

    Shockwave TPuH4kG
    Oni Ude:

    Baria:

    Sonic Boom:

    Shockwave VUl2SUP
    Domu Breka:

    Oni Buraker:

    Shockwave ZpYOaPu

    Sekai no Jishin:

    Shockwave 7pCf7pz
    {SS-Rank Spells here}



    Hiroko
    Hiroko

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 108
    Join date : 2015-10-24

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    Post by Hiroko Thu Dec 31, 2015 7:19 pm

    Oh shit, forgot to bump this
    Krow
    Krow

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 324
    Join date : 2015-03-13

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    Post by Krow Wed Jan 13, 2016 1:53 pm

    Okay. Final fixes have now been requested, make them and I can finally approve this!
    Bump once finished.

    Hiroko wrote:
    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Black Airs
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is based on the creation of shock waves and vibration effects. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibrations around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air) and generating shock waves. These shock waves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks or break anything with a specific vibration for each target.

    Perks of Magic


    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shock waves when in contact with that object. The vibration can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects up to the size of a car. This however can also damage the user after several times using. This can only be used once per post before dealing 1% damage to the user.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when someone is coming and basically lets him see anything around him. This can be felt even in the air meaning he can detect even flying enemies, the weakness of this perk however is that if his health goes down to a 50% of his maximum health, it will automatically nullify the effects of the perk because of the damage the user has taken in his body, his radar in other words.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing 50% more damage upon any melee attack. In exchange of this, once each 5 posts, Hiroko enters in a weakened state because of the constant vibrations in his body. This weakened state makes any melee attack have thee same effect of gaining 50% power against Hiroko for that post. Make the weakened state last for a duration of at least three posts.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Shockwave 4l20wZQ
    Chinmoku:

    Bureku:

    Iyahon:

    Shockwave 01UG7Sa
    Kyojin Ken:

    -:

    -:

    Ikari Dansei:

    Shockwave TPuH4kG
    Oni Ude:

    Baria:

    Sonic Boom:

    Shockwave VUl2SUP
    Domu Breka:

    Oni Buraker:

    Shockwave ZpYOaPu

    Sekai no Jishin:

    Shockwave 7pCf7pz
    {SS-Rank Spells here}



    Hiroko
    Hiroko

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 108
    Join date : 2015-10-24

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    Post by Hiroko Sat Jan 16, 2016 7:53 pm

    kk, bump, but just realized I have the same C rank spell 3 times. Did we discuss it for me to be allowed to have it? or did I just forget to remove them?
    Krow
    Krow

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 324
    Join date : 2015-03-13

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    Post by Krow Sun Jan 17, 2016 12:17 am

    Hiroko wrote:kk, bump, but just realized I have the same C rank spell 3 times. Did we discuss it for me to be allowed to have it? or did I just forget to remove them?

    You forgot to remove them.
    Hiroko
    Hiroko

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    Post by Hiroko Sun Jan 17, 2016 7:32 am

    kk done
    Krow
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    Post by Krow Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:02 am

    Hiroko wrote:kk done

    Did you add new C-rank spells?
    I can't remember if you did or not, so I thought it would be best to ask before I resume my review.
    Hiroko
    Hiroko

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 108
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    Post by Hiroko Thu Jan 21, 2016 6:07 pm

    Yep, I did
    Krow
    Krow

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    Post by Krow Thu Jan 21, 2016 7:00 pm

    Hiroko wrote:Yep, I did

    I'll review them in a little bit, so just bear with me.
    Hiroko
    Hiroko

    Shockwave N51AM3g

    Posts : 108
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    Post by Hiroko Wed Feb 03, 2016 4:00 pm

    I edited my last perk btw, I used the stat guidelines, at the bottom you can find the information I got to 100% follow the rules.
    Krow
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    Post by Krow Wed Feb 03, 2016 7:15 pm

    APPROVED!

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