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    Shockwave

    Post by Hiroko on Thu Dec 03, 2015 10:43 am

    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Black Airs
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is based on the creation of shock waves and vibration effects. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibrations around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air) and generating shock waves. These shock waves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks or break anything with a specific vibration for each target.

    Perks of Magic


    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shock waves when in contact with that object. The vibration can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects up to the size of a car. This however can also damage the user after several times using. This can only be used once per post before dealing 1% damage to the user.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when someone is coming and basically lets him see anything around him. This can be felt even in the air meaning he can detect even flying enemies, the weakness of this perk however is that if his health goes down to a 50% of his maximum health, it will automatically nullify the effects of the perk because of the damage the user has taken in his body, his radar in other words.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing extra damage and basically giving Hiroko a 2 Rank stat buff. This lasts 5 posts and then enters a cooldown of 6 posts.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Chinmoku:
    Name: Chinmoku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: A Room. 20 meters radius maximum.

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: This spell has to be used inside a room. The user uses vibrations from his body to nullify any other vibration completely eliminating noise. This eliminates all the noise inside a room.

    Extra: 2 post duration. 2 post cooldown.

    Bureku:
    Name: Bureku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user, after seeing his target, he can vibrate it until it breaks. This can't be used to cause damage. This can only break objects up to the size of a tree or a boulder. Can't destroy spells or magic items.

    Extra: Can be used once per post.

    Iyahon:
    Name: Iyahon

    Rank: D

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user touches his target. He then creates vibrations able to destroy his internal ear. This is very painful for the target but deals no damage. Instead, it will leave the target deaf for 2 posts and will get dizzy as well for those 2 posts as well.

    Extra:The cooldown starts once the attack is performed. 3 post cooldown.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. These vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 50% more power against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Jetto Blast:
    Name: Jetto Blast

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: He jumpes towards the enemy and punches him.

    Description: The user vibrates their feet and their fist. By vibrating their feet, he can kick the feet many times before even jumping, giving him a increased speed jump. This jump is towards one target and takes about 1 second to move 20 meters with a 30 meters range max. Then, he will punch his target with his enhanced fist to deal C rank damage.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Yurei:
    Name: Yurei

    Rank: C

    Type: Defensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: -

    Description: Hiroko can actually vibrate himself in very high speed in order to separate his particles similar to a gaseous state. In this state, Hiroko won't receive melee damage and he will be able to instantly pass through a C rank or 2 D rank spells.

    Extra: 3 posts. 4 post cooldown.

    Ikari Dansei:
    Name: Ikrai Dansei

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user starts shouting and enhances the vibrations of his voice. This way, he can shoot some sort of very hard to spot almost invisible vibration beam able to destroy solid rock.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Oni Ude:
    Name: Oni Ude

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive/AOE

    Range: 45 meters

    Appearance: Cracks in the air appear when the user punches. Then everything in front is destroyed in a powerful blast.

    Description: The user creates vibration in his punch. These vibrations move through the air cracking it and destroying anything in front of the user. The area affected is a cone with 20 meters range and can have a 10 meter wide area at the end of the spell. This means the area of effect is a 100 square meter triangle.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Baria:
    Name: Baria

    Rank: B

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 1 Meter

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user uses vibrations which he throws from his hands creating an invisible vibration shield. While it deals no damage, it's 10 meters times 10 meters and can block up to 1 B rank damage before breaking. This also blocks ally attacks from the inside and won't let anyone pass until the spell ends.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Sonic Boom:
    Name: Sonic Boom

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 50 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user snaps his fingers and enhances the noise and vibration of said move. The user can then give that noise direction and cause it to violently explode when reaching it's target. It causes a 3 meter radius explosion.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Domu Breka:
    Name: Domu Breka

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive AOE

    Range: 50 meters radius

    Appearance: It looks like the air bellow the user cracks.

    Description: The user punches the air below him and creates cracks in it. Vibrations will be thrown in the nearby area instantly damaging anyone in the area of effect. This attack can also destroy any buildings nearby.

    Extra: Instant. 5 posts cooldown.

    Oni Buraker:
    Name: Oni Buraker

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A white transparent bubble like sphere appears in the user's hand. He then smashes it against the enemy to deal massive damage. Looks like this.

    Description: The user gathers the power of his vibrations around his fist. He then punches the target with huge power to knock them back and deal A rank damage. The bubble like attack will deform the enemy only during the attack making it look as the hand and the enemy actually repelled themselves.

    Extra: Anything else we should know about?


    Sekai no Jishin:
    Name: Sekai no jishin

    Rank: S

    Type: Offensive, AOE

    Range: 100 meters radius

    Appearance: The user "grabs" the air around him as if it were tangible, and rapidly shifting it. After this, the whole ground will start to shake bringing down buildings, and after that, the air itself will crack, destroying anything inside the area of effect. First part looks liek this

    Description: The spell is divided in two phases, the first one is called Sekai. The user pulls the air to create massive shockwaves which first travel through the ground. These shockwaves will cause an earthquake which will cause everyone to lose their balance and destroy all buildings around. After that phase, it's called Jishin. In this phase, after everything looks destroyed, the vibrations will move to the air, virtually destroying the space itself dealing S rank damage to anyone inside the area of effect. This last part will look like many cracks in the air which will then shatter dealing damage. This spell is very hard to understand, and the only thing people can actually understand about it, is it's destructive power and the damage they recive.

    Extra: Instant. 7 post cooldown.

    {SS-Rank Spells here}





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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Krow on Sat Dec 26, 2015 9:48 am

    Hello there, Krow here, I will be reviewing your Magic App today.
    All of the necessary changes will look like this.
    For starters, before I start reviewing the actual Spells, please go back and check the grammar and wording on the description, weaknesses and strength. Also, please elaborate upon the abilities, that way I can give them a proper reading.
    Bump once you are finished, and I will get to the Spells.

    @Hiroko wrote:
    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Rusty Hearts
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is absed on the creation of shockwaves. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibration around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air). These shockwaves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks.

    Perks of Magic


    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shocwaves when in contact with that object. The shockwave can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects like one.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when is someone coming and basically lets him see anything around him.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing a 50% more damage upon any melee attack.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Chinmoku:
    Name: Chinmoku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: A Room

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: This spell has to be used inside a room. The user uses vibrations from his body to nullify any other vibration completely eliminating noise. This eliminates all the noise inside a room.

    Extra: 2 post duration. 2 post cooldown.

    Bureku:
    Name: Bureku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user, after seeing his target, he can vibrate it until it breaks. This can't be used to cause damage. This can only break objects up to the size of a tree or a boulder. Can't destroy spells or magic items.

    Extra: Can be sued once per post.

    Iyahon:
    Name: Iyahon

    Rank: D

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user touches his target. He then creates vibrations able to destroy his internal ear. This is very painful for the target but deals no damage. Instead, it will leave the target deaf for 2 posts and will get dizzy as well.

    Extra:The cooldown stars once the attack is performed. 3 post cooldown.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. This vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 100% more power (it doubles) against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. This vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 100% more power (it doubles) against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. This vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 100% more power (it doubles) against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Ikari Dansei:
    Name: Ikrai Dansei

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user starts shouting and enhances the vibrations of his voice. This way, he can shoot some sort of invisible vibration beam able to destroy solid rock.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Oni Ude:
    Name: Oni Ude

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive/AOF

    Range: 20 meters

    Appearance: Cracks in the air appear when the user punches. Then everything in front is destroyed in a powerful blast.

    Description: The user creates vibration in his punch. These vibrations move through the air cracking it and destroying anything in front of the user. The area affected is a cone with 20 meters range and can have a 10 meter wide area at the end of the spell. This means the area of effect is a 100 square meter triangle.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Baria:
    Name: Baria

    Rank: B

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 1 Meter

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user uses vibrations which he throws from his hands creating an invisible vibration shield. While it deals no damage, it's 10 meters times 10 meters and can block up to 2 B rank damage before breaking. This also blocks ally attacks from the inside and won't let anyone pass until the spell ends.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Sonic Boom:
    Name: Sonic Boom

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 50 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user snaps his fingers and enhances the noise and vibration of said move. The user can then give that noise direction and cause it to violently explode when reaching it's target. It causes a 3 meter radius explosion.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Domu Breka:
    Name: Domu Breka

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive AOE

    Range: 10 meters radius

    Appearance: It looks like the air bellow the user cracks.

    Description: The user punches the air bellow him and creates cracks in it. Vibrations will be thrown in the nearby area instantly damaging anyone in the area of effect. This attack can also destroy any buildings nearby.

    Extra: Instant. 5 posts cooldown.

    Oni Buraker:
    Name: Oni Buraker

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A white transparent bubble like sphere appears in the user's hand. He then smashes it against the enemy to deal massive damage. Looks like this.

    Description: The user gathers the power of his vibrations around his fist. He then punches the target with huge power to knock them back and deal A rank damage. The bubble like attack will deform the enemy only during the attack making it look as the hand and the enemy actually repelled themselves.

    Extra: Anything else we should know about?


    Sekai no Jishin:
    Name: Sekai no jishin

    Rank: S

    Type: Offensive, AOE

    Range: 100 meters radius

    Appearance: The user "grabs" the air around him as if it were tangible, and rapidly shifting it. After this, the whole ground will start to shake bringing down buildings, and after that, the air itself will crack, destroying anything inside the area of effect. First part looks liek this

    Description: The spell is divided in two phases, the first one is called Sekai. The user pulls the air to create massive shockwaves which first travel through the ground. These shockwaves will cause an earthquake which will cause everyone to lose their balance and destroy all buildings around. After that phase, it's called Jishin. In this phase, after everything looks destroyed, the vibrations will move to the air, virtually destroying the space itself dealing S rank damage to anyone inside the area of effect. This last part will look like many cracks in the air which will then shatter dealing damage. This sell is very hard to understand, and the only thing people can actually understand about it, is it's destructive power and the damage they recive.

    Extra: Instant. 7 post cooldown.

    {SS-Rank Spells here}






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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Hiroko on Sun Dec 27, 2015 6:56 pm

    Bump




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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Krow on Sun Dec 27, 2015 8:00 pm

    Hello there, Krow here, I will be reviewing your Magic App today.
    All of the necessary changes will look like this.
    Like before, check below for the necessary changes that must be made.
    Oh, by the way, sorry in advance for the grammar nazi-ness. I just want your magic to be a clear read.
    Bump once you are finished.

    @Hiroko wrote:
    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Black Airs
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is based on the creation of shock waves and vibration effects. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibrations around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air) and generating shock waves. These shock waves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks or break anything with a specific vibration for each target.

    Perks of Magic

    I need you give weaknesses/downfalls of these perks in their descriptions,

    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shoc waves when in contact with that object. The vibration can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects up to the size of a car.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when someone is coming and basically lets him see anything around him.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing 50% more damage upon any melee attack.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Chinmoku:
    Name: Chinmoku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: A Room Can you please give approximated dimensions for said room?

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: This spell has to be used inside a room. The user uses vibrations from his body to nullify any other vibration completely eliminating noise. This eliminates all the noise inside a room.

    Extra: 2 post duration. 2 post cooldown.

    Bureku:
    Name: Bureku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user, after seeing his target, he can vibrate it until it breaks. This can't be used to cause damage. This can only break objects up to the size of a tree or a boulder. Can't destroy spells or magic items.

    Extra: Can be sued (Change sued to used.) once per post.

    Iyahon:
    Name: Iyahon

    Rank: D

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user touches his target. He then creates vibrations able to destroy his internal ear. This is very painful for the target but deals no damage. Instead, it will leave the target deaf for 2 posts and will get dizzy as well. Does the dizziness also last as long as the being deaf?

    Extra:The cooldown stars (Change stars to starts.) once the attack is performed. 3 post cooldown.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. This(Change this to these.) vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 100% more power (it doubles) against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells. Make the 100% increase a 50% increase. Having it double is a wee bit excessive.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. This vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 100% more power (it doubles) against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.
    Delete this one as it is just a repetition of the above spell, and do the same for the one below, as it too, is just a repetition of the same exact spell.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. This vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 100% more power (it doubles) against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Ikari Dansei:
    Name: Ikrai Dansei

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user starts shouting and enhances the vibrations of his voice. This way, he can shoot some sort of invisibleInstead of invisible, could you make it like a semi-visible ripple in the air? vibration beam able to destroy solid rock.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Oni Ude:
    Name: Oni Ude

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive/AOF Change the F to an E.

    Range: 20 meters

    Appearance: Cracks in the air appear when the user punches. Then everything in front is destroyed in a powerful blast.

    Description: The user creates vibration in his punch. These vibrations move through the air cracking it and destroying anything in front of the user. The area affected is a cone with 20 meters range and can have a 10 meter wide area at the end of the spell. This means the area of effect is a 100 square meter triangle.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Baria:
    Name: Baria

    Rank: B

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 1 Meter

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user uses vibrations which he throws from his hands creating an invisible vibration shield. While it deals no damage, it's 10 meters times 10 meters and can block up to 2 B rank damage before breaking. This also blocks ally attacks from the inside and won't let anyone pass until the spell ends. Have it block 1 B-rank spell. Otherwise, its too strong for a B-rank spell.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Sonic Boom:
    Name: Sonic Boom

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 50 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user snaps his fingers and enhances the noise and vibration of said move. The user can then give that noise direction and cause it to violently explode when reaching it's target. It causes a 3 meter radius explosion.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Domu Breka:
    Name: Domu Breka

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive AOE

    Range: 10 meters radius

    Appearance: It looks like the air bellow the user cracks.
    Remove one of those l's, its below not bellow.
    Description: The user punches the air bellow him and creates cracks in it. Vibrations will be thrown in the nearby area instantly damaging anyone in the area of effect. This attack can also destroy any buildings nearby.

    Extra: Instant. 5 posts cooldown.

    Oni Buraker:
    Name: Oni Buraker

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A white transparent bubble like sphere appears in the user's hand. He then smashes it against the enemy to deal massive damage. Looks like this.

    Description: The user gathers the power of his vibrations around his fist. He then punches the target with huge power to knock them back and deal A rank damage. The bubble like attack will deform the enemy only during the attack making it look as the hand and the enemy actually repelled themselves.

    Extra: Anything else we should know about? Add a duration a cooldown here.


    Sekai no Jishin:
    Name: Sekai no jishin

    Rank: S

    Type: Offensive, AOE

    Range: 100 meters radius

    Appearance: The user "grabs" the air around him as if it were tangible, and rapidly shifting it. After this, the whole ground will start to shake bringing down buildings, and after that, the air itself will crack, destroying anything inside the area of effect. First part looks liek this

    Description: The spell is divided in two phases, the first one is called Sekai. The user pulls the air to create massive shockwaves which first travel through the ground. These shockwaves will cause an earthquake which will cause everyone to lose their balance and destroy all buildings around. After that phase, it's called Jishin. In this phase, after everything looks destroyed, the vibrations will move to the air, virtually destroying the space itself dealing S rank damage to anyone inside the area of effect. This last part will look like many cracks in the air which will then shatter dealing damage. This sell Change sell to spell. is very hard to understand, and the only thing people can actually understand about it, is it's destructive power and the damage they recive.

    Extra: Instant. 7 post cooldown.

    {SS-Rank Spells here}






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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Hiroko on Thu Dec 31, 2015 7:19 pm

    Oh shit, forgot to bump this




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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Krow on Wed Jan 13, 2016 1:53 pm

    Okay. Final fixes have now been requested, make them and I can finally approve this!
    Bump once finished.

    @Hiroko wrote:
    Shockwave
    S Rank
    Caster
    Wind
    Main
    Black Airs
    Not Character Specific
    Offense/Defense


    Magic Description
    This magic is based on the creation of shock waves and vibration effects. This is similar to wave magic but in a more destructive version. This magic allows the user to create vibrations around him which can travel through any source (land, water or even air) and generating shock waves. These shock waves can be used to burst the enemy with very destructive attacks or break anything with a specific vibration for each target.

    Perks of Magic


    • Shock: The user is able to individually destroy little objects by generating shock waves when in contact with that object. The vibration can reach the point where it can destroy that single object. This can be also used with walls and other big objects up to the size of a car. This however can also damage the user after several times using. This can only be used once per post before dealing 1% damage to the user.
    • Radar: The user can feel the vibrations of anyone around him. This way he can always know when someone is coming and basically lets him see anything around him. This can be felt even in the air meaning he can detect even flying enemies, the weakness of this perk however is that if his health goes down to a 50% of his maximum health, it will automatically nullify the effects of the perk because of the damage the user has taken in his body, his radar in other words.
    • Vibrating Body: Hiroko's body can vibrate when attacking. This way it can cause extra internal damage dealing 50% more damage upon any melee attack. In exchange of this, once each 5 posts, Hiroko enters in a weakened state because of the constant vibrations in his body. This weakened state makes any melee attack have thee same effect of gaining 50% power against Hiroko for that post. Make the weakened state last for a duration of at least three posts.



    Weaknesses


    • Not ally friendly, this can cause lots of trouble when in a team fight.
    • Lack of supportive versatility. It can't really help allies that much.
    • No elemental strength. This magic isn't strong against any element.



    Strengths


    • Highly destructive and raw power.
    • No elemental weakness, which makes it able to fight any magic.
    • Difficult to understand. The magic isn't common and has invisible spells to confuse the enemy.



    Spells

    Chinmoku:
    Name: Chinmoku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: A Room. 20 meters radius maximum.

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: This spell has to be used inside a room. The user uses vibrations from his body to nullify any other vibration completely eliminating noise. This eliminates all the noise inside a room.

    Extra: 2 post duration. 2 post cooldown.

    Bureku:
    Name: Bureku

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user, after seeing his target, he can vibrate it until it breaks. This can't be used to cause damage. This can only break objects up to the size of a tree or a boulder. Can't destroy spells or magic items.

    Extra: Can be used once per post.

    Iyahon:
    Name: Iyahon

    Rank: D

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user touches his target. He then creates vibrations able to destroy his internal ear. This is very painful for the target but deals no damage. Instead, it will leave the target deaf for 2 posts and will get dizzy as well for those 2 posts as well.

    Extra:The cooldown starts once the attack is performed. 3 post cooldown.

    Kyojin Ken:
    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. These vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 50% more power against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

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    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. These vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 50% more power against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

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    Name: Kyojin Ken

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A transparent white bubble like sphere appears around the user's hand.

    Description: The user gathers vibrations around his hand to enhance his next attack. These vibrations can destroy any material they touch before getting to their target. This spell gains 50% more power against defensive spells and loses 50% of it's power (it's halved) against offensive spells.

    Extra: Instant. 2 post cooldown.

    Ikari Dansei:
    Name: Ikrai Dansei

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 10 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user starts shouting and enhances the vibrations of his voice. This way, he can shoot some sort of very hard to spot almost invisible vibration beam able to destroy solid rock.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Oni Ude:
    Name: Oni Ude

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive/AOE

    Range: 45 meters

    Appearance: Cracks in the air appear when the user punches. Then everything in front is destroyed in a powerful blast.

    Description: The user creates vibration in his punch. These vibrations move through the air cracking it and destroying anything in front of the user. The area affected is a cone with 20 meters range and can have a 10 meter wide area at the end of the spell. This means the area of effect is a 100 square meter triangle.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Baria:
    Name: Baria

    Rank: B

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 1 Meter

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user uses vibrations which he throws from his hands creating an invisible vibration shield. While it deals no damage, it's 10 meters times 10 meters and can block up to 1 B rank damage before breaking. This also blocks ally attacks from the inside and won't let anyone pass until the spell ends.

    Extra: Instant. 4 post cooldown.

    Sonic Boom:
    Name: Sonic Boom

    Rank: B

    Type: Offensive

    Range: 50 meters

    Appearance: N/A

    Description: The user snaps his fingers and enhances the noise and vibration of said move. The user can then give that noise direction and cause it to violently explode when reaching it's target. It causes a 3 meter radius explosion.

    Extra: Instant. 3 post cooldown.

    Domu Breka:
    Name: Domu Breka

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive AOE

    Range: 50 meters radius

    Appearance: It looks like the air bellow the user cracks.

    Description: The user punches the air below him and creates cracks in it. Vibrations will be thrown in the nearby area instantly damaging anyone in the area of effect. This attack can also destroy any buildings nearby.

    Extra: Instant. 5 posts cooldown.

    Oni Buraker:
    Name: Oni Buraker

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: A white transparent bubble like sphere appears in the user's hand. He then smashes it against the enemy to deal massive damage. Looks like this.

    Description: The user gathers the power of his vibrations around his fist. He then punches the target with huge power to knock them back and deal A rank damage. The bubble like attack will deform the enemy only during the attack making it look as the hand and the enemy actually repelled themselves.

    Extra: Anything else we should know about?


    Sekai no Jishin:
    Name: Sekai no jishin

    Rank: S

    Type: Offensive, AOE

    Range: 100 meters radius

    Appearance: The user "grabs" the air around him as if it were tangible, and rapidly shifting it. After this, the whole ground will start to shake bringing down buildings, and after that, the air itself will crack, destroying anything inside the area of effect. First part looks liek this

    Description: The spell is divided in two phases, the first one is called Sekai. The user pulls the air to create massive shockwaves which first travel through the ground. These shockwaves will cause an earthquake which will cause everyone to lose their balance and destroy all buildings around. After that phase, it's called Jishin. In this phase, after everything looks destroyed, the vibrations will move to the air, virtually destroying the space itself dealing S rank damage to anyone inside the area of effect. This last part will look like many cracks in the air which will then shatter dealing damage. This spell is very hard to understand, and the only thing people can actually understand about it, is it's destructive power and the damage they recive.

    Extra: Instant. 7 post cooldown.

    {SS-Rank Spells here}






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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Hiroko on Sat Jan 16, 2016 7:53 pm

    kk, bump, but just realized I have the same C rank spell 3 times. Did we discuss it for me to be allowed to have it? or did I just forget to remove them?




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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Krow on Sun Jan 17, 2016 12:17 am

    @Hiroko wrote:kk, bump, but just realized I have the same C rank spell 3 times. Did we discuss it for me to be allowed to have it? or did I just forget to remove them?

    You forgot to remove them.



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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Hiroko on Sun Jan 17, 2016 7:32 am

    kk done




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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Krow on Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:02 am

    @Hiroko wrote:kk done

    Did you add new C-rank spells?
    I can't remember if you did or not, so I thought it would be best to ask before I resume my review.



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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Hiroko on Thu Jan 21, 2016 6:07 pm

    Yep, I did




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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Krow on Thu Jan 21, 2016 7:00 pm

    @Hiroko wrote:Yep, I did

    I'll review them in a little bit, so just bear with me.



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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Hiroko on Wed Feb 03, 2016 4:00 pm

    I edited my last perk btw, I used the stat guidelines, at the bottom you can find the information I got to 100% follow the rules.




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    Re: Shockwave

    Post by Krow on Wed Feb 03, 2016 7:15 pm

    APPROVED!




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