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    Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Maverick on Tue Dec 15, 2015 6:17 pm






    Name: Maverick
    Alias's: G.E.N.O.S (Genetically Enhanced Neutral-state Obliteration Soldier)
    Rank: Rank-D
    Gender: Male
    Age: 20
    Birthday: December 25th
    Allegiance: Lawful Neutral
    Face Claim: Genos: One-Punch Man
    Species: Human-Cyborg

    Special Species Information:

    - Flight: Maverick has a pair of boosters located in each of his arms, they are located at the shoulder blade section, and allows him to propel himself using heat propelled exhaust gauges. Along with this there are also exhaust ports located in the center of his hands as well. Through training, and upgrades, Maverick is able to enhance his ability to fly at higher altitudes and progress into further regions.

    Height Limitations

    - D-Rank: 20 meter maximum
    - C-Rank: 55 meter maximum
    - B-Rank: 105 meter maximum
    - A-Rank: 170 meter maximum
    - S-Rank: 245 meter maximum
    - SS-Rank: 345 meter maximum
    - X-Rank: No numbers are currently available

    - Enhanced Speed: Maverick has the ability to increase the chance for him to increase his speed determined by his current rank to a single rank higher for a short duration of time. Meaning he is able to upgrade his bodies natural inhibitors and allow them to unlock the safety protocols for him to move like this.

    - D-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 2 Posts
    - C-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    - B-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts
    - A-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    - S-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts
    - SS-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 7 Posts

    Special Unique Characteristics

    - Bio-Organic/Synthetic Skin
    - Metallic Skeleton
    - Thermoplastic elastomers (Rubber) muscular fibers
    - Mechanical Arms
    - Mechanical Legs
    - Black Sciera
    - Glowing eye-sockets
    - Mechanical Eyes (Irises-sockets)

    Character Depth
    Personality:

    Relaxing Oriented environment: A extremely docile, somber and doll like individual, one who seems to show little to no emotion. He is rather closed in, as he rarely ever shows emotion, he is very somber, and acts very mature. He is somewhat of a doll at times, but when he does show emotion, he shows them in a rather secretive manner, only giving a slight smile. He tends to speak in monotone like words, and speech patterns, though this is the case, he is a very curious individual. He tends to keep his data banks on the lookout for new information, and tends to always be recording such important info. He is always evolving and changing his personality to fit to his surroundings when he feels need be, and will often take people off-guard at a change in his individuality. Though he is set to evolve and adapt, he tends to be somewhat bullheaded and will at times enter a system evaluation protocol. When in this state he will go through a evaluation listing of events to perform if such new information if gathered and the possible outcomes that could arise from it. Even to the point of him going against orders that he was given, Project G.E.N.O.S is one individual that is also excellent at taking orders. And often will follow them to the fullest of his extent, as such was his programming.  

    Combat Oriented environment: Maverick was programmed to be a killing machine in the wars of the past, and as such he is unforgiving. He is merciless and rather cold and calculating when facing his opponent, he strikes true and hits like a truck. He often will be invigorated by combat that his true nature will show up and will slowly tear his opponent apart, just to see if it will react like all living creatures would. He finds it fascinating to see how certain beasts inner workings operate, and when he is in combat will tear open their bodies to understand them more. Though he tends to is set to attack Hostile and evil creatures only, this does not include humans, with the, his enhanced programming prevents him from killing them. He instead goes into a Training Simulation, and will spare with a human instead of actual lethal combat. While fighting humans unless he has exterior reasoning, he will instruct them on how to be a better fighter in hand to hand combat, and how to counter such attacks. While also praising them for good works, and learn more about others around him, this in turn makes him a excellent teacher in martial arts, and unarmed fighting.

    Likes:

    - Flowers: He has a strange liking towards flowers and will always be seen knelt to one, and taking in the scent. He loves flowers of all kinds and will defend them if in danger.

    - Nature: Much like the flowers, Maverick is one who cares about the world around him, though his many travels. He has learn to enjoy the beauty in nature and like flowers he will defend it.

    - Protecting others: Maverick is a being who holds others over his own well being, and cares to protect anyone he can, he mostly protect those who can't protect themselves. This points mostly at sickly people, children and the elderly as well as injured people.

    Dislikes:

    - Snoops: Maverick hates when people eavesdrop on him, he believes that all privacy should be kept like that. If anyone is caught by him eavesdropping he will be very angry and won't forget their wrong doing.

    - Haters: He dislikes people who show negativity to others for the simplest of events. Such as a better spell, toy, clothing or even home. Those people he sees have no place in his heart.

    - Needless Fighting: If there is no reason to fight then it should be left at that. Maverick dislikes seeing people fight for no apparent reason.

    - Nature and Flower killers: If Maverick sees a person destroying nature or even flowers he will loss his cool and flip. Unless you want a raving lunatic yelling at you, then don't kill nature. Or flowers... god knows his anger then.

    Fears:

    - Losing friends: Once  has made a friend, he hates to see them go, he will try everything in his power to keep one with him.

    - Letting others die: Maverick hates to have others die, to him if he allows this he couldn't forgive himself for letting someone leave this world through non natural cause.

    - Becoming a Machine: Maverick hated the idea of becoming a Android, and losing his humanity, it is the reason why he became a Cyborg. He still retains his human brain, and human emotions, though they are usually kept under wraps. If Maverick was every forced to become a robot, or inhuman he would shut himself down permanently by his own hands.

    Motivations/Goals:

    - Finding Knowledge: Knowing that the world is full of knowledge, Maverick keeps moving to find more. Wanting to fill his mind full of information to catalog.

    - The wonders of the World: With the world holding much to offer, Maverick wishes to discover more wonderful places to explore, and see the beauty in it.

    - Love: Even though he has never felt it, or had a chance to, reading about it in many love novels over his times. He finds the concept of love one thing to search for and understand more.her use his wit and his brain to understand and assets the situation in a more logical point of standing.

    Appearance

    Hair: Blonde
    Hair Type: Spiky
    Eyes: Black Sciera, Yellow Irises.
    Skin Tone: Peach
    Height: 6'0
    Weight: 285 lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Maverick has a mostly mechanical body his arms, legs, chest and skeleton as well as his muscular system is mostly synthetic or bio metallic on competition. The people who had him go through the G.E.N.O.S project wanted him to be mechanical but still remain human, through that reason his facial construction remained that of his once handsome young man features. His face and ears look like that of a normal human, made of an artificial, synthetic or bio-organic like skin material, and his eyes have black sclera with yellow irises. Along with his eyes, they're also bio-mechanical and upon analyzing any new phenomenon, his yellow irises will take on a form of mechanical optical lenses, much like the ones found in high grade telescopes.

    This view is very obvious and can be seen by anyone who looks directly at his face, the first thing that will be seen is a black circular twenty point reticle with several smaller circles moving clockwise and counter clockwise. He has spiky blond hair, his eyebrows are usually portrayed brown, but have a dark blonde hue to them. He also has pierced ears, in order to somewhat fit in Maverick wears normal street clothes and sleeveless tops and hoodies in order to allow his arms to transform without hassle. He has been shown to have many different sets of arms, with varying abilities and strengths. Notable examples of his various "arms" are those he used in his sparring match against his master, and the arms he equipped to combat the certain beings. Sometimes the arm sets he uses create a metal framing around his face.

    Other
    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo:
    Tattoo Location:


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    Norou Shikage



    Posts : 114
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    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Norou Shikage on Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:03 pm

    Ello Maverick, i'll be looking over your app today. Any edit's that I need you to make in order for me to approve this app will be posted in the following green within the app.

    @Maverick wrote:





    Name: Maverick
    Alias's: G.E.N.O.S (Genetically Engineered Neutral-state Obliteration Soldier)
    Age: 20
    Birthday: September; 13th
    Face Claim: Genos: One-Punch Man
    Species: Human-Cyborg

    Special Species Information:

    - Flight: Maverick has a pair of boosters located in each of his arms, they are located at the shoulder blade section, and allows him to propel himself using heat propelled exhaust gauges. Along with this there are also exhaust ports located in the center of his hands as well. This allows Maverick to move at higher speeds, and allow his punches to be somewhat more painful in the impact.

    This is a flight mechanic and a perk as well, as such, perks are only allowed one aspect, such as the damage boost, speed boost or flying itself. I will need you to change this perk to where it allows you only to fly, gain a single point stat boost in strength or speed, you will need to chose from one of these three.

    Also please note that we do have some rules on how high you can fly in accordance to your characters rank.
    Height limitations:
    Height Limitations

    Due to the large amount of users with magic or perks that allow them to fly, we've come up with some height limitations when flying, to keep things fair in and out of combat. Please follow these numbers when flying:

    D-Rank: 20 meter maximum
    C-Rank: 55 meter maximum
    B-Rank: 105 meter maximum
    A-Rank: 170 meter maximum
    S-Rank: 245 meter maximum
    SS-Rank: 345 meter maximum
    X-Rank: No numbers are currently available

    - Immense Strength: Maverick has the ability to quite literally send people or objects he comes into contact with flying with a single punch if he uses more energy than what is needed. Not only is his punches stronger, but his ability to move heavier things that normal humans can't move without help, this includes things that are three times his own weight. But as well as his ability to tackle stronger combat situations, as he can destroy his surroundings with multiple strikes, able to shatter the earth around him up to 15 feet from a single punch.

    Most of what this says would all depend upon your rank, your strength rank and the rank of your opponent. Primarily I would advise reconstructing this perk to make it to where it allows you to increase your strength by a single rank, thus allowing you to knock people who have lower strength than you, so long as they are the same actual rank or lower than you, back 15 feet. This will also allow you to focus your other perk above on either speed enhancement or flying. Also this will need a duration and a cooldown on it.

    Special Unique Characteristics

    - Bio-Organic/Synthetic Skin
    - Metallic Skeleton
    - Metallic Muscles
    - Mechanical Arms
    - Mechanical Legs
    - Black Sciera
    - Glowing eye-sockets

    While I see nothing wrong with this section, I would just like to state, just so that it is said and documented on this app. While the Bio-organic/synthetic skin and metallic parts ect are just fine for Unique characteristics, just know that you cannot regenerate because of this, you would need to make that into a perk via either this app as a species perk or on a magic app, if your magic has something to do with being robotic.

    Character Depth
    Personality:

    Relaxing Oriented environment: A extremely docile, somber and doll like individual, one who seems to show little to no emotion. He is rather closed in, as he rarely ever shows emotion, he is very somber, and acts very mature. He is somewhat of a doll at times, but when he does show emotion, he shows them in a rather secretive manner, only giving a slight smile. He tends to speak in monotone like words, and speech patterns, though this is the case, he is a very curious individual. He tends to keep his data banks on the lookout for new information, and tends to always be recording such important info. He is always evolving and changing his personality to fit to his surroundings when he feels need be, and will often take people off-guard at a change in his individuality. Though he is set to evolve and adapt, he tends to be somewhat bullheaded and will at times enter a system evaluation protocol. When in this state he will go through a evaluation listing of events to perform if such new information if gathered and the possible outcomes that could arise from it. Even to the point of him going against orders that he was given, Project G.E.N.O.S is one individual that is also excellent at taking orders. And often will follow them to the fullest of his extent, as such was his programming.  

    Combat Oriented environment: Maverick was programmed to be a killing machine in the wars of the past, and as such he is unforgiving. He is merciless and rather cold and calculating when facing his opponent, he strikes true and hits like a truck. He often will be invigorated by combat that his true nature will show up and will slowly tear his opponent apart, just to see if it will react like all living creatures would. He finds it fascinating to see how certain beasts inner workings operate, and when he is in combat will tear open their bodies to understand them more. Though he tends to is set to attack Hostile and evil creatures only, this does not include humans, with the, his enhanced programming prevents him from killing them. He instead goes into a Training Simulation, and will spare with a human instead of actual lethal combat. While fighting humans unless he has exterior reasoning, he will instruct them on how to be a better fighter in hand to hand combat, and how to counter such attacks. While also praising them for good works, and learn more about others around him, this in turn makes him a excellent teacher in martial arts, and unarmed fighting.

    Likes:

    - Flowers: He has a strange liking towards flowers and will always be seen knelt to one, and taking in the scent. He loves flowers of all kinds and will defend them if in danger.

    - Nature: Much like the flowers, Maverick is one who cares about the world around him, though his many travels. He has learn to enjoy the beauty in nature and like flowers he will defend it.

    - Protecting others: Maverick is a being who holds others over his own well being, and cares to protect anyone he can, he mostly protect those who can't protect themselves. This points mostly at sickly people, children and the elderly as well as injured people.

    Dislikes:

    - Snoops: Maverick hates when people eavesdrop on him, he believes that all privacy should be kept like that. If anyone is caught by him eavesdropping he will be very angry and won't forget their wrong doing.

    - Haters: He dislikes people who show negativity to others for the simplest of events. Such as a better spell, toy, clothing or even home. Those people he sees have no place in his heart.

    - Needless Fighting: If there is no reason to fight then it should be left at that. Maverick dislikes seeing people fight for no apparent reason.

    - Nature and Flower killers: If Maverick sees a person destroying nature or even flowers he will loss his cool and flip. Unless you want a raving lunatic yelling at you, then don't kill nature. Or flowers... god knows his anger then.

    Fears:

    - Losing friends: Once  has made a friend, he hates to see them go, he will try everything in his power to keep one with him.

    - Letting others die: Maverick hates to have others die, to him if he allows this he couldn't forgive himself for letting someone leave this world through non natural cause.

    - Becoming a Machine: Maverick hated the idea of becoming a Android, and losing his humanity, it is the reason why he became a Cyborg. He still retains his human brain, and human emotions, though they are usually kept under wraps. If Maverick was every forced to become a robot, or inhuman he would shut himself down permanently by his own hands.

    Motivations/Goals:

    - Finding Knowledge: Knowing that the world is full of knowledge, Maverick keeps moving to find more. Wanting to fill his mind full of information to catalog.

    - The wonders of the World: With the world holding much to offer, Maverick wishes to discover more wonderful places to explore, and see the beauty in it.

    - Love: Even though he has never felt it, or had a chance to, reading about it in many love novels over his times. He finds the concept of love one thing to search for and understand more.her use his wit and his brain to understand and assets the situation in a more logical point of standing.

    Appearance

    Hair: Blonde
    Hair Type: Spiky
    Eyes: Black Sciera, Yellow Irises.
    Skin Tone: Flawless (Other than the metallic parts of his body.)
    Height: 6'0
    Weight: 285 lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Maverick has a mostly mechanical body his arms, legs, chest and skeleton as well as his muscular system is mostly synthetic or bio metallic on competition. The people who had him go through the G.E.N.O.S project wanted him to be mechanical but still remain human, through that reason his facial construction remained that of his once handsome young man features. His face and ears look like that of a normal human, made of an artificial, synthetic or bio-organic like skin material, and his eyes have black sclera with yellow irises. He has spiky blond hair, his eyebrows are usually portrayed brown, but have a dark blonde hue to them. He also has pierced ears, in order to somewhat fit in Maverick wears normal street clothes and sleeveless tops and hoodies in order to allow his arms to transform without hassle. He has been shown to have many different sets of arms, with varying abilities and strengths. Notable examples of his various "arms" are those he used in his sparring match against his master, and the arms he equipped to combat the certain beings. Sometimes the arm sets he uses create a metal framing around his face,.

    Other
    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: Black
    Tattoo Location: Left Shoulder



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    Maverick



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    Join date : 2015-12-15

    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Maverick on Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:25 pm

    *Document status: Rendition complete, awaiting new evaluation*



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    Norou Shikage



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    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Norou Shikage on Thu Jan 14, 2016 3:33 pm

    I still need you to edit out the part in your flight mechanic where it says it allows you to move at higher speeds, your flight speed will be determined by your actual speed stat, since this cannot allow you to fly and boost your speed stat.

    As for your strength buff. You would be able to only buff it by one point until higher ranks. I will provide you the values below but for an example of what I'd like you to do is at D rank, you could have the lifting weight up to that of C ranks lifting weight, C rank could have up to B ranks lifting weight, B rank could have A ranks, etc. This perk also needs a cooldown and duration on it.

    strength guidelines. :
    D-Rank - Able to attack with physical damage of normal damage once per turn, able to lift up to 50 lbs
    C-Rank - Able to attack with physical damage of D-Rank damage once per turn, able to lift up to 100 lbs.
    B-Rank - Able to attack with physical damage of C-Rank damage once per turn, able to lift up to 225 lbs.
    A-Rank - Able to attack with physical damage of B-Rank damage once per turn, able to lift up to 350 lbs.
    S-Rank - Able to attack with physical damage of A-Rank damage once per turn, able to lift up to 475 lbs.
    SS-Rank - Able to attack with physical damage of S-Rank damage once per turn, able to lift up to 600 lbs.
    X-Rank - Able to attack with physical damage of SS-Rank damage once per turn, able to lift up to 1,000 lbs.

    Note: For each higher rank, you may make the duration and cooldown's higher, so as you rank up your strength boost can last longer.


    @Maverick wrote:





    Name: Maverick
    Alias's: G.E.N.O.S (Genetically Enhanced Neutral-state Obliteration Soldier)
    Age: 20
    Birthday: September; 13th
    Face Claim: Genos: One-Punch Man
    Species: Human-Cyborg

    Special Species Information:

    - Flight: Maverick has a pair of boosters located in each of his arms, they are located at the shoulder blade section, and allows him to propel himself using heat propelled exhaust gauges. Along with this there are also exhaust ports located in the center of his hands as well. This allows Maverick to move at higher speeds. Through training, and upgrades, Maverick is able to enhance his ability to fly at higher altitudes and progress into further regions.

    Height Limitations

    D-Rank: 20 meter maximum
    C-Rank: 55 meter maximum
    B-Rank: 105 meter maximum
    A-Rank: 170 meter maximum
    S-Rank: 245 meter maximum
    SS-Rank: 345 meter maximum
    X-Rank: No numbers are currently available

    - Immense Strength: Maverick has the ability to quite literally send people or objects he comes into contact with flying with a single punch if he uses more energy than what is needed. Not only is his punches stronger, but his ability to move heavier things that normal humans can't move without help, this includes things that are certain higher his own weight. But as well as his ability to tackle stronger combat situations, as he can destroy his surroundings with multiple strikes, able to shatter the earth around him.

    D-Rank:
    Lifting Strength: 150 lbs
    Earth Shattering Radius: 10 feet
    Punch Distance: 15 feet

    C-Rank:
    Lifting Strength: 165 lbs
    Earth Shattering Radius: 15 feet
    Punch Distance: 20 feet

    B-Rank:
    Lifting Strength: 170 lbs
    Earth Shattering Radius: 20 feet
    Punch Distance: 25 feet

    A-Rank:
    Lifting Strength: 200 lbs
    Earth Shattering Radius: 30 feet
    Punch Distance:  40 feet

    S-Rank:
    Lifting Strength: 275 lbs
    Earth Shattering Radius: 50 feet
    Punch Distance: 70 feet

    SS-Rank:
    [Lifting Strength: 350 lbs
    Earth Shattering Radius: 80 feet
    Punch Distance: 120 feet

    X-Rank: No numbers are currently available

    Special Unique Characteristics

    - Bio-Organic/Synthetic Skin
    - Metallic Skeleton
    - Thermoplastic elastomers (Rubber) muscular fibers
    - Mechanical Arms
    - Mechanical Legs
    - Black Sciera
    - Glowing eye-sockets

    Character Depth
    Personality:

    Relaxing Oriented environment: A extremely docile, somber and doll like individual, one who seems to show little to no emotion. He is rather closed in, as he rarely ever shows emotion, he is very somber, and acts very mature. He is somewhat of a doll at times, but when he does show emotion, he shows them in a rather secretive manner, only giving a slight smile. He tends to speak in monotone like words, and speech patterns, though this is the case, he is a very curious individual. He tends to keep his data banks on the lookout for new information, and tends to always be recording such important info. He is always evolving and changing his personality to fit to his surroundings when he feels need be, and will often take people off-guard at a change in his individuality. Though he is set to evolve and adapt, he tends to be somewhat bullheaded and will at times enter a system evaluation protocol. When in this state he will go through a evaluation listing of events to perform if such new information if gathered and the possible outcomes that could arise from it. Even to the point of him going against orders that he was given, Project G.E.N.O.S is one individual that is also excellent at taking orders. And often will follow them to the fullest of his extent, as such was his programming.  

    Combat Oriented environment: Maverick was programmed to be a killing machine in the wars of the past, and as such he is unforgiving. He is merciless and rather cold and calculating when facing his opponent, he strikes true and hits like a truck. He often will be invigorated by combat that his true nature will show up and will slowly tear his opponent apart, just to see if it will react like all living creatures would. He finds it fascinating to see how certain beasts inner workings operate, and when he is in combat will tear open their bodies to understand them more. Though he tends to is set to attack Hostile and evil creatures only, this does not include humans, with the, his enhanced programming prevents him from killing them. He instead goes into a Training Simulation, and will spare with a human instead of actual lethal combat. While fighting humans unless he has exterior reasoning, he will instruct them on how to be a better fighter in hand to hand combat, and how to counter such attacks. While also praising them for good works, and learn more about others around him, this in turn makes him a excellent teacher in martial arts, and unarmed fighting.

    Likes:

    - Flowers: He has a strange liking towards flowers and will always be seen knelt to one, and taking in the scent. He loves flowers of all kinds and will defend them if in danger.

    - Nature: Much like the flowers, Maverick is one who cares about the world around him, though his many travels. He has learn to enjoy the beauty in nature and like flowers he will defend it.

    - Protecting others: Maverick is a being who holds others over his own well being, and cares to protect anyone he can, he mostly protect those who can't protect themselves. This points mostly at sickly people, children and the elderly as well as injured people.

    Dislikes:

    - Snoops: Maverick hates when people eavesdrop on him, he believes that all privacy should be kept like that. If anyone is caught by him eavesdropping he will be very angry and won't forget their wrong doing.

    - Haters: He dislikes people who show negativity to others for the simplest of events. Such as a better spell, toy, clothing or even home. Those people he sees have no place in his heart.

    - Needless Fighting: If there is no reason to fight then it should be left at that. Maverick dislikes seeing people fight for no apparent reason.

    - Nature and Flower killers: If Maverick sees a person destroying nature or even flowers he will loss his cool and flip. Unless you want a raving lunatic yelling at you, then don't kill nature. Or flowers... god knows his anger then.

    Fears:

    - Losing friends: Once  has made a friend, he hates to see them go, he will try everything in his power to keep one with him.

    - Letting others die: Maverick hates to have others die, to him if he allows this he couldn't forgive himself for letting someone leave this world through non natural cause.

    - Becoming a Machine: Maverick hated the idea of becoming a Android, and losing his humanity, it is the reason why he became a Cyborg. He still retains his human brain, and human emotions, though they are usually kept under wraps. If Maverick was every forced to become a robot, or inhuman he would shut himself down permanently by his own hands.

    Motivations/Goals:

    - Finding Knowledge: Knowing that the world is full of knowledge, Maverick keeps moving to find more. Wanting to fill his mind full of information to catalog.

    - The wonders of the World: With the world holding much to offer, Maverick wishes to discover more wonderful places to explore, and see the beauty in it.

    - Love: Even though he has never felt it, or had a chance to, reading about it in many love novels over his times. He finds the concept of love one thing to search for and understand more.her use his wit and his brain to understand and assets the situation in a more logical point of standing.

    Appearance

    Hair: Blonde
    Hair Type: Spiky
    Eyes: Black Sciera, Yellow Irises.
    Skin Tone: Flawless (Other than the metallic parts of his body.)
    Height: 6'0
    Weight: 285 lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Maverick has a mostly mechanical body his arms, legs, chest and skeleton as well as his muscular system is mostly synthetic or bio metallic on competition. The people who had him go through the G.E.N.O.S project wanted him to be mechanical but still remain human, through that reason his facial construction remained that of his once handsome young man features. His face and ears look like that of a normal human, made of an artificial, synthetic or bio-organic like skin material, and his eyes have black sclera with yellow irises. He has spiky blond hair, his eyebrows are usually portrayed brown, but have a dark blonde hue to them. He also has pierced ears, in order to somewhat fit in Maverick wears normal street clothes and sleeveless tops and hoodies in order to allow his arms to transform without hassle. He has been shown to have many different sets of arms, with varying abilities and strengths. Notable examples of his various "arms" are those he used in his sparring match against his master, and the arms he equipped to combat the certain beings. Sometimes the arm sets he uses create a metal framing around his face,.

    Other
    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: Black
    Tattoo Location: Left Shoulder


    Last edited by Norou Shikage on Thu Jan 14, 2016 4:13 pm; edited 1 time in total



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    Maverick



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    Join date : 2015-12-15

    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Maverick on Thu Jan 14, 2016 3:56 pm

    *Document status: Rendition complete, awaiting new evaluation*

    Additional information, please remove system coding for your quoted song, and refrain from implementing it please, thank you.



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    Norou Shikage



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    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Norou Shikage on Thu Jan 14, 2016 10:58 pm

    Okay I am happy with what you've done, I will only ask one more thing, on the speed buff, if you could up the cd and duration's of all of them by one then we are golden and I will give my approval.

    @Maverick wrote:




    Name: Maverick
    Alias's: G.E.N.O.S (Genetically Enhanced Neutral-state Obliteration Soldier)
    Age: 20
    Birthday: September; 13th
    Face Claim: Genos: One-Punch Man
    Species: Human-Cyborg

    Special Species Information:

    - Flight: Maverick has a pair of boosters located in each of his arms, they are located at the shoulder blade section, and allows him to propel himself using heat propelled exhaust gauges. Along with this there are also exhaust ports located in the center of his hands as well. Through training, and upgrades, Maverick is able to enhance his ability to fly at higher altitudes and progress into further regions.

    Height Limitations

    D-Rank: 20 meter maximum
    C-Rank: 55 meter maximum
    B-Rank: 105 meter maximum
    A-Rank: 170 meter maximum
    S-Rank: 245 meter maximum
    SS-Rank: 345 meter maximum
    X-Rank: No numbers are currently available

    - Enhanced Speed: Maverick has the ability to increase the chance for him to increase his speed determined by his current rank to a single rank higher for a short duration of time. Meaning he is able to upgrade his bodies natural inhibitors and allow them to unlock the safety protocols for him to move like this.

    D-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a C-Rank for 1 turn, and allow him to reasonably dodge C-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 2 turns.

    C-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a B-Rank for 2 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge B-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 3 turns.

    B-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a A-Rank for 3 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge A-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 4 turns.

    A-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a S-Rank for 4 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge S-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 5 turns.

    S-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a S-Rank for 5 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge SS-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 6 turns.

    SS-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a SS-Rank for 6 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge X-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 7 turns.

    X-Rank: No further enhancement in capable at this level, meaning his abilities stay stable for this level of mage. Can last for 7 turns, but cooldown time is 8 turns.

    Special Unique Characteristics

    - Bio-Organic/Synthetic Skin
    - Metallic Skeleton
    - Thermoplastic elastomers (Rubber) muscular fibers
    - Mechanical Arms
    - Mechanical Legs
    - Black Sciera
    - Glowing eye-sockets
    - Mechanical Eyes (Irises-sockets)

    Character Depth
    Personality:

    Relaxing Oriented environment: A extremely docile, somber and doll like individual, one who seems to show little to no emotion. He is rather closed in, as he rarely ever shows emotion, he is very somber, and acts very mature. He is somewhat of a doll at times, but when he does show emotion, he shows them in a rather secretive manner, only giving a slight smile. He tends to speak in monotone like words, and speech patterns, though this is the case, he is a very curious individual. He tends to keep his data banks on the lookout for new information, and tends to always be recording such important info. He is always evolving and changing his personality to fit to his surroundings when he feels need be, and will often take people off-guard at a change in his individuality. Though he is set to evolve and adapt, he tends to be somewhat bullheaded and will at times enter a system evaluation protocol. When in this state he will go through a evaluation listing of events to perform if such new information if gathered and the possible outcomes that could arise from it. Even to the point of him going against orders that he was given, Project G.E.N.O.S is one individual that is also excellent at taking orders. And often will follow them to the fullest of his extent, as such was his programming.  

    Combat Oriented environment: Maverick was programmed to be a killing machine in the wars of the past, and as such he is unforgiving. He is merciless and rather cold and calculating when facing his opponent, he strikes true and hits like a truck. He often will be invigorated by combat that his true nature will show up and will slowly tear his opponent apart, just to see if it will react like all living creatures would. He finds it fascinating to see how certain beasts inner workings operate, and when he is in combat will tear open their bodies to understand them more. Though he tends to is set to attack Hostile and evil creatures only, this does not include humans, with the, his enhanced programming prevents him from killing them. He instead goes into a Training Simulation, and will spare with a human instead of actual lethal combat. While fighting humans unless he has exterior reasoning, he will instruct them on how to be a better fighter in hand to hand combat, and how to counter such attacks. While also praising them for good works, and learn more about others around him, this in turn makes him a excellent teacher in martial arts, and unarmed fighting.

    Likes:

    - Flowers: He has a strange liking towards flowers and will always be seen knelt to one, and taking in the scent. He loves flowers of all kinds and will defend them if in danger.

    - Nature: Much like the flowers, Maverick is one who cares about the world around him, though his many travels. He has learn to enjoy the beauty in nature and like flowers he will defend it.

    - Protecting others: Maverick is a being who holds others over his own well being, and cares to protect anyone he can, he mostly protect those who can't protect themselves. This points mostly at sickly people, children and the elderly as well as injured people.

    Dislikes:

    - Snoops: Maverick hates when people eavesdrop on him, he believes that all privacy should be kept like that. If anyone is caught by him eavesdropping he will be very angry and won't forget their wrong doing.

    - Haters: He dislikes people who show negativity to others for the simplest of events. Such as a better spell, toy, clothing or even home. Those people he sees have no place in his heart.

    - Needless Fighting: If there is no reason to fight then it should be left at that. Maverick dislikes seeing people fight for no apparent reason.

    - Nature and Flower killers: If Maverick sees a person destroying nature or even flowers he will loss his cool and flip. Unless you want a raving lunatic yelling at you, then don't kill nature. Or flowers... god knows his anger then.

    Fears:

    - Losing friends: Once  has made a friend, he hates to see them go, he will try everything in his power to keep one with him.

    - Letting others die: Maverick hates to have others die, to him if he allows this he couldn't forgive himself for letting someone leave this world through non natural cause.

    - Becoming a Machine: Maverick hated the idea of becoming a Android, and losing his humanity, it is the reason why he became a Cyborg. He still retains his human brain, and human emotions, though they are usually kept under wraps. If Maverick was every forced to become a robot, or inhuman he would shut himself down permanently by his own hands.

    Motivations/Goals:

    - Finding Knowledge: Knowing that the world is full of knowledge, Maverick keeps moving to find more. Wanting to fill his mind full of information to catalog.

    - The wonders of the World: With the world holding much to offer, Maverick wishes to discover more wonderful places to explore, and see the beauty in it.

    - Love: Even though he has never felt it, or had a chance to, reading about it in many love novels over his times. He finds the concept of love one thing to search for and understand more.her use his wit and his brain to understand and assets the situation in a more logical point of standing.

    Appearance

    Hair: Blonde
    Hair Type: Spiky
    Eyes: Black Sciera, Yellow Irises.
    Skin Tone: Flawless (Other than the metallic parts of his body.)
    Height: 6'0
    Weight: 285 lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Maverick has a mostly mechanical body his arms, legs, chest and skeleton as well as his muscular system is mostly synthetic or bio metallic on competition. The people who had him go through the G.E.N.O.S project wanted him to be mechanical but still remain human, through that reason his facial construction remained that of his once handsome young man features. His face and ears look like that of a normal human, made of an artificial, synthetic or bio-organic like skin material, and his eyes have black sclera with yellow irises. Along with his eyes, they're also bio-mechanical and upon analyzing any new phenomenon, his yellow irises will take on a form of mechanical optical lenses, much like the ones found in high grade telescopes.

    This view is very obvious and can be seen by anyone who looks directly at his face, the first thing that will be seen is a black circular twenty point reticle with several smaller circles moving clockwise and counter clockwise. He has spiky blond hair, his eyebrows are usually portrayed brown, but have a dark blonde hue to them. He also has pierced ears, in order to somewhat fit in Maverick wears normal street clothes and sleeveless tops and hoodies in order to allow his arms to transform without hassle. He has been shown to have many different sets of arms, with varying abilities and strengths. Notable examples of his various "arms" are those he used in his sparring match against his master, and the arms he equipped to combat the certain beings. Sometimes the arm sets he uses create a metal framing around his face.

    Other
    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: Black
    Tattoo Location: Left Shoulder



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    Maverick



    Posts : 20
    Join date : 2015-12-15

    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Maverick on Fri Jan 15, 2016 2:07 am

    *Document status: Rendition complete, awaiting new evaluation*



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    Norou Shikage



    Posts : 114
    Join date : 2015-10-22

    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Norou Shikage on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:01 am

    You have my blessing, go forth in the world~ (Approved ;o)

    @Maverick wrote:





    Name: Maverick
    Alias's: G.E.N.O.S (Genetically Enhanced Neutral-state Obliteration Soldier)
    Age: 20
    Birthday: September; 13th
    Face Claim: Genos: One-Punch Man
    Species: Human-Cyborg

    Special Species Information:

    - Flight: Maverick has a pair of boosters located in each of his arms, they are located at the shoulder blade section, and allows him to propel himself using heat propelled exhaust gauges. Along with this there are also exhaust ports located in the center of his hands as well. Through training, and upgrades, Maverick is able to enhance his ability to fly at higher altitudes and progress into further regions.

    Height Limitations

    - D-Rank: 20 meter maximum
    - C-Rank: 55 meter maximum
    - B-Rank: 105 meter maximum
    - A-Rank: 170 meter maximum
    - S-Rank: 245 meter maximum
    - SS-Rank: 345 meter maximum
    - X-Rank: No numbers are currently available

    - Enhanced Speed: Maverick has the ability to increase the chance for him to increase his speed determined by his current rank to a single rank higher for a short duration of time. Meaning he is able to upgrade his bodies natural inhibitors and allow them to unlock the safety protocols for him to move like this.

    - D-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a C-Rank for 2 turn, and allow him to reasonably dodge C-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 3 turns.
    - C-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a B-Rank for 3 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge B-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 4 turns.
    - B-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a A-Rank for 4 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge A-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 5 turns.
    - A-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a S-Rank for 5 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge S-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 6 turns.
    - S-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a S-Rank for 6 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge SS-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 7 turns.
    - SS-Rank: Can increase his speed to that of a SS-Rank for 7 turns, and allow him to reasonably dodge X-Rank spells, but cooldown time is 8 turns.
    - X-Rank: No further enhancement in capable at this level, meaning his abilities stay stable for this level of mage. Can last for 8 turns, but cooldown time is 9 turns.

    Special Unique Characteristics

    - Bio-Organic/Synthetic Skin
    - Metallic Skeleton
    - Thermoplastic elastomers (Rubber) muscular fibers
    - Mechanical Arms
    - Mechanical Legs
    - Black Sciera
    - Glowing eye-sockets
    - Mechanical Eyes (Irises-sockets)

    Character Depth
    Personality:

    Relaxing Oriented environment: A extremely docile, somber and doll like individual, one who seems to show little to no emotion. He is rather closed in, as he rarely ever shows emotion, he is very somber, and acts very mature. He is somewhat of a doll at times, but when he does show emotion, he shows them in a rather secretive manner, only giving a slight smile. He tends to speak in monotone like words, and speech patterns, though this is the case, he is a very curious individual. He tends to keep his data banks on the lookout for new information, and tends to always be recording such important info. He is always evolving and changing his personality to fit to his surroundings when he feels need be, and will often take people off-guard at a change in his individuality. Though he is set to evolve and adapt, he tends to be somewhat bullheaded and will at times enter a system evaluation protocol. When in this state he will go through a evaluation listing of events to perform if such new information if gathered and the possible outcomes that could arise from it. Even to the point of him going against orders that he was given, Project G.E.N.O.S is one individual that is also excellent at taking orders. And often will follow them to the fullest of his extent, as such was his programming.  

    Combat Oriented environment: Maverick was programmed to be a killing machine in the wars of the past, and as such he is unforgiving. He is merciless and rather cold and calculating when facing his opponent, he strikes true and hits like a truck. He often will be invigorated by combat that his true nature will show up and will slowly tear his opponent apart, just to see if it will react like all living creatures would. He finds it fascinating to see how certain beasts inner workings operate, and when he is in combat will tear open their bodies to understand them more. Though he tends to is set to attack Hostile and evil creatures only, this does not include humans, with the, his enhanced programming prevents him from killing them. He instead goes into a Training Simulation, and will spare with a human instead of actual lethal combat. While fighting humans unless he has exterior reasoning, he will instruct them on how to be a better fighter in hand to hand combat, and how to counter such attacks. While also praising them for good works, and learn more about others around him, this in turn makes him a excellent teacher in martial arts, and unarmed fighting.

    Likes:

    - Flowers: He has a strange liking towards flowers and will always be seen knelt to one, and taking in the scent. He loves flowers of all kinds and will defend them if in danger.

    - Nature: Much like the flowers, Maverick is one who cares about the world around him, though his many travels. He has learn to enjoy the beauty in nature and like flowers he will defend it.

    - Protecting others: Maverick is a being who holds others over his own well being, and cares to protect anyone he can, he mostly protect those who can't protect themselves. This points mostly at sickly people, children and the elderly as well as injured people.

    Dislikes:

    - Snoops: Maverick hates when people eavesdrop on him, he believes that all privacy should be kept like that. If anyone is caught by him eavesdropping he will be very angry and won't forget their wrong doing.

    - Haters: He dislikes people who show negativity to others for the simplest of events. Such as a better spell, toy, clothing or even home. Those people he sees have no place in his heart.

    - Needless Fighting: If there is no reason to fight then it should be left at that. Maverick dislikes seeing people fight for no apparent reason.

    - Nature and Flower killers: If Maverick sees a person destroying nature or even flowers he will loss his cool and flip. Unless you want a raving lunatic yelling at you, then don't kill nature. Or flowers... god knows his anger then.

    Fears:

    - Losing friends: Once  has made a friend, he hates to see them go, he will try everything in his power to keep one with him.

    - Letting others die: Maverick hates to have others die, to him if he allows this he couldn't forgive himself for letting someone leave this world through non natural cause.

    - Becoming a Machine: Maverick hated the idea of becoming a Android, and losing his humanity, it is the reason why he became a Cyborg. He still retains his human brain, and human emotions, though they are usually kept under wraps. If Maverick was every forced to become a robot, or inhuman he would shut himself down permanently by his own hands.

    Motivations/Goals:

    - Finding Knowledge: Knowing that the world is full of knowledge, Maverick keeps moving to find more. Wanting to fill his mind full of information to catalog.

    - The wonders of the World: With the world holding much to offer, Maverick wishes to discover more wonderful places to explore, and see the beauty in it.

    - Love: Even though he has never felt it, or had a chance to, reading about it in many love novels over his times. He finds the concept of love one thing to search for and understand more.her use his wit and his brain to understand and assets the situation in a more logical point of standing.

    Appearance

    Hair: Blonde
    Hair Type: Spiky
    Eyes: Black Sciera, Yellow Irises.
    Skin Tone: Flawless (Other than the metallic parts of his body.)
    Height: 6'0
    Weight: 285 lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Maverick has a mostly mechanical body his arms, legs, chest and skeleton as well as his muscular system is mostly synthetic or bio metallic on competition. The people who had him go through the G.E.N.O.S project wanted him to be mechanical but still remain human, through that reason his facial construction remained that of his once handsome young man features. His face and ears look like that of a normal human, made of an artificial, synthetic or bio-organic like skin material, and his eyes have black sclera with yellow irises. Along with his eyes, they're also bio-mechanical and upon analyzing any new phenomenon, his yellow irises will take on a form of mechanical optical lenses, much like the ones found in high grade telescopes.

    This view is very obvious and can be seen by anyone who looks directly at his face, the first thing that will be seen is a black circular twenty point reticle with several smaller circles moving clockwise and counter clockwise. He has spiky blond hair, his eyebrows are usually portrayed brown, but have a dark blonde hue to them. He also has pierced ears, in order to somewhat fit in Maverick wears normal street clothes and sleeveless tops and hoodies in order to allow his arms to transform without hassle. He has been shown to have many different sets of arms, with varying abilities and strengths. Notable examples of his various "arms" are those he used in his sparring match against his master, and the arms he equipped to combat the certain beings. Sometimes the arm sets he uses create a metal framing around his face.

    Other
    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: Black
    Tattoo Location: Left Shoulder



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    Selenia



    Posts : 760
    Join date : 2015-10-11
    Age : 22

    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Selenia on Fri Jan 15, 2016 12:53 pm

    Hey, my name's Selenia and I'll be grading this for second approval~

    First off, I need you to add your character's rank, allegiance, and gender into your app, specifically stated (after Birthday would be great).

    Unless you applied for an Auto Rank, then your character's starting rank is D-Rank.

    Allegiance can be Lawful, Neutral, or Chaotic and then either Good, Neutral, or Evil.

    Gender is pretty obvious, if you have any problems with that let me know.

    Your flight perk is fine; only things for you to know is that you fly as your character's normal speed. If the height limitation chart changes, so will your height limitation.

    As for your increased speed perk, please change it so that it increases your speed stat for two posts with a minimum of a three post cooldown at D-Rank. Once you rank up you can edit it, or you can use this if you want to have them all listed now:

    D-Rank: +/- 1  Rank for 2 Posts
    C-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    B-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts
    A-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    S-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts
    SS-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 7 Posts

    Note the reason it goes down is because you're allowed to boost two stats at A-Rank.

    For appearance, his skin tone should be a tone; flawless doesn't make sense here.

    Finally, as you're going to be a wanderer you have no guild mark, so you can leave that blank and edit it later if you join a guild.

    Please make these edits and let me know, thanks!



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    Maverick



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    Join date : 2015-12-15

    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Maverick on Fri Jan 15, 2016 7:00 pm

    *Document status: Rendition complete, awaiting new evaluation*



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    Selenia



    Posts : 760
    Join date : 2015-10-11
    Age : 22

    Re: Maverick Status: Complete

    Post by Selenia on Fri Jan 15, 2016 7:34 pm

    Approved!




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