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    Blanc [Done]

    Post by Blanc on Tue Dec 22, 2015 9:21 am

    Blanc
    White Heart
    13
    4th june
    CPU
    Rank D
    true neutral
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk


    • Able to transform into a older form thanks to Hard drive destiny and are able to fly 5 meters in the air, increasing by 10 meters for ever rank the CPU ranks up. The change to Blanc in HDD are as followed, increase of Height by 43 centimeters, change of weight by 15 Kilograms, change of hair color from brown to blue, change of eye color from blue to red and a complete change of clothing, a white and red jump suit fully equipped with wings and armor.
    • CPUs can change into their HDD forms once every post, while HDD can only provide the ability to fly, which follows the height rule chart on how high they are allowed to fly, is only for appearance and doesn't provide anything more to combat except flight.

    CPUs are protectors, also known as goddesses, of their own country and must gather shares to keep their country flourishing. CPU stands for Console Patrol unit and are tasked to make their country grow and protect them from any threat that comes to their town. CPUs are people that don't age like other people and originate from Gamindustri, a world inhabited by humans, CPUs and monsters. CPUs can only be female and can't be male. their HDD form, Hard drive destiny, are older versions of themselves with their names originating from their appearance, being White Heart for Blanc. 


    Special Unique Characteristics
    Blanc has a barely visible scar on her stomach

    Character Depth
    Personality: Blanc is a young, mature and honest girl from the country known as Lowee, that is fairly small compared to others but isn't bothered by others calling her short. She has a short temper and can snap at any moment, transforming into her HDD form, White Heart, who is very aggressive and temperamental, getting into fights and never backing down or trying to let her foe get away. Blanc, around other people, tends not to get in to trouble and tries to get along with everyone she meets unless they are Evil or has a record of being in a evil Guild, which makes her get angry and makes her become her HDD form, White heart. White heart is drastically different from Blanc, She is fairly confident and can be very understanding to others, though is drastically more aggressive then her original form, and will tend to attack others by the simple action of doing anything remotely evil or illegal. In battle, Blanc is calm and doesn't take much time to figure out her foes weaknesses and strengths, while keeping her distance from her foe, trying to prolong her fight as long as possible to keep her stamina up. however, when Blanc becomes White heart, her battle strategy is more in the lines of taking out her foe as quickly and as brutally as possible, keeping her opponent close and never letting them have a single moment to have a break, using the terrain to her advantage and not letting her foes get the better of her. White Heart is cruel, harsh and takes every opportunity to crush and kill her foes as quickly as possible, taking every weakness they have into account and exploiting them with no mercy, While Blanc is more calm and takes her time to kill her foes by whittling down their defenses and stamina down to near nothing before dealing the final strike on them, killing her foes and gaining experience from the fight as she needs it to keep growing stronger, strong enough to keep her home country of Lowee safe. calm and cool, Blanc is a CPU that never wants to let her people down and to keep her family safe from the threat of everyone in the world.

    Likes:
    -Cats: their fluffy tails and cute face make Blanc very happy and gives her a urge to play with them that can't be resisted.
    -Training: if it is mentally or physically, Blanc likes to train and get stronger for her country.
    -animal people: reading about people with animal features, Blanc likes to believe in people with animal features and wants to meet one soon.

    Dislikes:
    -horror movies: seeing anything remotely horror like annoys Blanc and tends to make her angry.
    -sleeping: having to waste her time sleeping is not a thing Blanc likes to do but she accepts it is something she must do.
    -Evil: taught by her mother alongside her younger sisters to be good, Blanc hates evil people and tends to take things into her own hands if the law does nothing to it.

    Fears:
    -her country being destroyed: if Lowee was ever in danger of being destroyed, Blanc would fear that it would be destroyed and would try to get back as quickly as possible to protect it.
    -her younger twin sisters dying: Blanc fears her little sisters dying and doesn't wish to have them die so soon.
    -losing her position as Lowee's CPU: losing her CPU position is her biggest fear as she won't be able to protect her sisters without her power as a CPU.

    Motivations/Goals:
    -To become stronger: growing stronger then anyone else, that is Blanc's dream
    -To gain new friends:being a goddess of Lowee, Blanc never got to make many friends, so she wants to gain new friends by wandering around Fiore.
    -Becoming her worlds ultimate goddess:Being in a world where every countries CPU is trying to become the ultimate goddess, Blanc wants to get that too by gaining knowledge from Fiore.


    Appearance
    Hair: white hair
    Eyes: blue eyes
    Skin Tone: white
    Height: 127 Centimeters
    Weight: 45 Kilograms


    Other

    Guild: wanderers
    Guild Tattoo: non





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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Blanc on Wed Dec 23, 2015 2:41 am

    CPU Blanc is ready for assessment. Bump



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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Hiroko on Wed Dec 23, 2015 11:08 am

    @Blanc wrote:
    Blanc
    White Heart
    13
    4th june
    CPU
    Rank D
    neutral
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk
    Able to transform into a older form but drains the CPUs energy by 5% per post. CPUs, in HDD form, are able to fly 5 meters in the air, increasing by 10 meters for ever rank the CPU ranks up. CPUs are protectors, also known as goddesses, of their own country and must gather shares to keep their country flourishing. First, what do you mean with energy? Second, please explain your overall race here as well. Third, please bullet point your perks to let us know when does it end one perk and starts the other. And, I personally don't know what do you mean with HDD nor CPU.

    Special Unique Characteristics
    Blanc doesn't age because of being a CPU, console patrol unit, and is a bit stronger then normal people. Blanc can transform in to a older form by activating her HDD, hard drive destiny, and become ready for battle when the call happens for her to fight. This isn't a special characteristic, this would probably be a perk since characteristics are things like having horns or tails or maybe a scar.

    Character Depth
    Personality: Blanc is a young, mature and honest girl from the country known as Lowee, that is fairly small compared to others but isn't bothered by others calling her short. She has a short temper and can snap at any moment, transforming into her HDD form, White Heart, who is very aggressive and temperamental, getting into fights and never backing down or trying to let her foe get away. Blanc, around other people, tends not to get in to trouble and tries to get along with everyone she meets unless they are Evil or has a record of being in a evil Guild, which makes her get angry and makes her become her HDD form, White heart. White heart is drastically different from Blanc, She is fairly confident and can be very understanding to others, though is drastically more aggressive then her original form, and will tend to attack others by the simple action of doing anything remotely evil or illegal. In battle, Blanc is calm and doesn't take much time to figure out her foes weaknesses and strengths, while keeping her distance from her foe, trying to prolong her fight as long as possible to keep her stamina up. however, when Blanc becomes White heart, her battle strategy is more in the lines of taking out her foe as quickly and as brutally as possible, keeping her opponent close and never letting them have a single moment to have a break, using the terrain to her advantage and not letting her foes get the better of her. White Heart is cruel, harsh and takes every opportunity to crush and kill her foes as quickly as possible, taking every weakness they have into account and exploiting them with no mercy, While Blanc is more calm and takes her time to kill her foes by whittling down their defenses and stamina down to near nothing before dealing the final strike on them, killing her foes and gaining experience from the fight as she needs it to keep growing stronger, strong enough to keep her home country of Lowee safe. calm and cool, Blanc is a CPU that never wants to let her people down and to keep her family safe from the threat of everyone in the world.

    Likes:
    -Cats: their fluffy tails and cute face make Blanc very happy and gives her a urge to play with them that can't be resisted.
    -Training: if it is mentally or physically, Blanc likes to train and get stronger for her country.
    -animal people: reading about people with animal features, Blanc likes to believe in people with animal features and wants to meet one soon.

    Dislikes:
    -horror movies: seeing anything remotely horror like annoys Blanc and tends to make her angry.
    -sleeping: having to waste her time sleeping is not a thing Blanc likes to do but she accepts it is something she must do.
    -Evil: taught by her mother alongside her younger sisters to be good, Blanc hates evil people and tends to take things into her own hands if the law does nothing to it.

    Fears:
    -her country being destroyed: if Lowee was ever in danger of being destroyed, Blanc would fear that it would be destroyed and would try to get back as quickly as possible to protect it.
    -her younger twin sisters dying: Blanc fears her little sisters dying and doesn't wish to have them die so soon.
    -losing her position as Lowee's CPU: losing her CPU position is her biggest fear as she won't be able to protect her sisters without her power as a CPU.

    Motivations/Goals:
    -To become stronger: growing stronger then anyone else, that is Blanc's dream
    -To gain new friends:being a goddess of Lowee, Blanc never got to make many friends, so she wants to gain new friends by wandering around Fiore.
    -Becoming her worlds ultimate goddess:Being in a world where every countries CPU is trying to become the ultimate goddess, Blanc wants to get that too by gaining knowledge from Fiore.


    Appearance
    Hair: white hair
    Eyes: blue eyes
    Skin Tone: white
    Height: 127 Centimeters
    Weight: 45 Kilograms


    Other

    Guild: wanderers
    Guild Tattoo: right arm and white







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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Blanc on Thu Dec 24, 2015 8:07 am

    I hope that i fixed it. Bump



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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Hiroko on Thu Dec 24, 2015 9:41 am

    @Blanc wrote:
    Blanc
    White Heart
    13
    4th june
    CPU
    Rank D
    neutral
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk


    • Able to transform into a older form but drains the CPUs stamina by 5% per post. Just explain your transformation physically, how does she change what will her new height be, etc. And stamina per post, I'm pretty sure we don't have stamina numbers in this site.
    • CPUs, in HDD form, are able to fly 5 meters in the air, increasing by 10 meters for ever rank the CPU ranks up. To transform into HDD form, you mean transforming into another form like above? If you do, you could actually combine the perks in a single one.

      So, for the two perks, if you Do combine them, I'd recommend to eliminate the stamina per post and add a duration and cooldown which would change each rank.


    CPUs are protectors, also known as goddesses, of their own country and must gather shares to keep their country flourishing. CPU stands for Console Patrol unit and are tasked to make their country grow and protect them from any threat that comes to their town. CPUs are people that don't age like other people and originate from Gamindustri, a world inhabited by humans, CPUs and monsters. CPUs can only be female and can't be male. their HDD form, Hard drive destiny, are older versions of themselves with their names originating from their appearance, being White Heart for Blanc. 


    Special Unique Characteristics
    Blanc has a barely visible scar on her stomach

    Character Depth
    Personality: Blanc is a young, mature and honest girl from the country known as Lowee, that is fairly small compared to others but isn't bothered by others calling her short. She has a short temper and can snap at any moment, transforming into her HDD form, White Heart, who is very aggressive and temperamental, getting into fights and never backing down or trying to let her foe get away. Blanc, around other people, tends not to get in to trouble and tries to get along with everyone she meets unless they are Evil or has a record of being in a evil Guild, which makes her get angry and makes her become her HDD form, White heart. White heart is drastically different from Blanc, She is fairly confident and can be very understanding to others, though is drastically more aggressive then her original form, and will tend to attack others by the simple action of doing anything remotely evil or illegal. In battle, Blanc is calm and doesn't take much time to figure out her foes weaknesses and strengths, while keeping her distance from her foe, trying to prolong her fight as long as possible to keep her stamina up. however, when Blanc becomes White heart, her battle strategy is more in the lines of taking out her foe as quickly and as brutally as possible, keeping her opponent close and never letting them have a single moment to have a break, using the terrain to her advantage and not letting her foes get the better of her. White Heart is cruel, harsh and takes every opportunity to crush and kill her foes as quickly as possible, taking every weakness they have into account and exploiting them with no mercy, While Blanc is more calm and takes her time to kill her foes by whittling down their defenses and stamina down to near nothing before dealing the final strike on them, killing her foes and gaining experience from the fight as she needs it to keep growing stronger, strong enough to keep her home country of Lowee safe. calm and cool, Blanc is a CPU that never wants to let her people down and to keep her family safe from the threat of everyone in the world.

    Likes:
    -Cats: their fluffy tails and cute face make Blanc very happy and gives her a urge to play with them that can't be resisted.
    -Training: if it is mentally or physically, Blanc likes to train and get stronger for her country.
    -animal people: reading about people with animal features, Blanc likes to believe in people with animal features and wants to meet one soon.

    Dislikes:
    -horror movies: seeing anything remotely horror like annoys Blanc and tends to make her angry.
    -sleeping: having to waste her time sleeping is not a thing Blanc likes to do but she accepts it is something she must do.
    -Evil: taught by her mother alongside her younger sisters to be good, Blanc hates evil people and tends to take things into her own hands if the law does nothing to it.

    Fears:
    -her country being destroyed: if Lowee was ever in danger of being destroyed, Blanc would fear that it would be destroyed and would try to get back as quickly as possible to protect it.
    -her younger twin sisters dying: Blanc fears her little sisters dying and doesn't wish to have them die so soon.
    -losing her position as Lowee's CPU: losing her CPU position is her biggest fear as she won't be able to protect her sisters without her power as a CPU.

    Motivations/Goals:
    -To become stronger: growing stronger then anyone else, that is Blanc's dream
    -To gain new friends:being a goddess of Lowee, Blanc never got to make many friends, so she wants to gain new friends by wandering around Fiore.
    -Becoming her worlds ultimate goddess:Being in a world where every countries CPU is trying to become the ultimate goddess, Blanc wants to get that too by gaining knowledge from Fiore.


    Appearance
    Hair: white hair
    Eyes: blue eyes
    Skin Tone: white
    Height: 127 Centimeters
    Weight: 45 Kilograms


    Other

    Guild: wanderers
    Guild Tattoo: right arm and white







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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Blanc on Fri Dec 25, 2015 1:21 am

    i hope that is done. thank you for all your help.



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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Hiroko on Fri Dec 25, 2015 8:00 am

    No, thanks to you for your patience. Now, do you wish to have another perk? If you do, but this has my first approval. Merry Christmas ^-^




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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Blanc on Fri Dec 25, 2015 8:01 am

    no extra perks. sorry. i like to keep my one perk.



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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Hiroko on Sat Dec 26, 2015 8:50 am

    First approval given




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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Genesis on Sat Dec 26, 2015 9:53 am

    Hi there, my name is Genesis and I will be grading your app today.

    For your flight perk, please state that it follows the height rule chart on how high you can fly, since height limits have yet to be solidified.

    For the transformation into your HDD form, you must state that you can shift once per post. Also state that in this form, other than your flight perk that was mentioned above this has zero combat advantages.

    One last thing, Wanderers don't have guild marks.

    Please make the said changes and bump when complete^^
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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Blanc on Sun Dec 27, 2015 2:48 am

    thank you genesis, I appreciate your help. i have added the points you made and changed the guild mark to non. i hope this is OK. Bump for the cats.



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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Genesis on Sun Dec 27, 2015 10:11 am

    This looks fine then, second approval given




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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Genesis on Mon Dec 28, 2015 1:26 pm

    Unapproved due to a mistake I just noticed. I apologize.

    You simply put neutral which isn't specific enough. There's Lawful neutral, true netural, or chaotic neutral. Please choose one.




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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Blanc on Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:38 am

    thank you, done.



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    Re: Blanc [Done]

    Post by Genesis on Tue Dec 29, 2015 9:37 am

    Reapproved




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