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    Raiden



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    Kitsune

    Post by Raiden on Thu Dec 24, 2015 2:56 pm

    Name: Kitsune
    Gender: Female
    Rank: B-Rank
    Species: Fox-Spirit
    Type: Support

    Description:

    Personality:
    Kitsune is a very confusing critter, at first she will be rather docile she would tends to be lazy and sleepy. But when you least expect it she will be full of energy, be yipping while jumping from table to table. Kitsune can at times act like a spoiled brat, not listening to others, and would tend to ignore people if they didn't give her what she wants. And what she wants is treats, when you give her treats she will turn into a larger humanoid version of her fox form. Due to her being a sprite she is able to freely change between the two forms and roam around with other humans.

    Other than her usual stubborn fits if she doesn't get her way, she is a very calm and sweet being who loves to be the center of attention. She is also very curious about many things and very bold to speak her mind, is she is confused about something she will speak bluntly and straight to the point. But despite this rather curious thought process, Kitsune is a very gentle being, who loves others and will protect them at all costs, she loves to make friends. And always will be there to help others, whether they are in a bad mood, or if they just need a friend to be with. She is a very good conversationalist, and tends to talk for hours on end like any other girl.
    Apparance:

    -Fox Form
    Spoiler:

    Kitsune is a mammalian, quadruped creature with primarily brown fur, the tip of her bushy tail and her large furry collar are cream-colored. Kitsune has short, slender legs with three small toes and a pink paw pad on each foot. While she retains a pair of  brown eyes, long pointed ears, and a small black nose, in her fox form she is about the size of a puppy. Her height is that of 33 cm from her ears to her toes, and weighs about 6.8 kg.

    -Human Form
    Spoiler:

    Kistune when she converts to her humanoid form, retains the same characteristics of her fox form but instead of fur, she now has brown hair, eyes a larger but same poofy tail and a dress. Her dress resembles her fox forms fur, in colour and pattern, as the areas about her neck are cream colour. And the trim around the base of her dress, she also has a pair of leather armlets that seem to resemble her fur like pattern, though now she has skin, which is a light peach tan colour. She still retains her brown eyes, but loses her black nose, and keeps her long ears, though longer now. She wears a pair of knee high fur boots, with cream coloured fur along the trim and dark brown knee stockings. She stands about 170.18 cm in height and weighs about 62.14 kg. And while in her humanoid form, she has a very tender, loving, and light voice that tends to be extremely soothing.

    Abilities:

    Active:
    Name: Healing Kiss

    Rank: B

    Type: Healing

    Range: Touch

    Duration/Cool Down: Instant/4

    Appearance: The aura that Kitsune gives off is that of a warming green aura, which consumes whomever she touches and will slowly seep into their form. Healing them through her touch, and after the glow is gone, the spell will end.

    Description: When Kitsune does as the spells describes and kisses someone, whether it is in her fox form or humanoid form, she is able to heal one person through touch contact. She is able to send warm and soothing waves of vibrant energy to aid a person if they are injured. The effects differ between her forms, while in her fox form she is only able to heal someone for 11.5% of their lost health, but in her humanoid for it is much more powerful. As this ability lasts for 2 posts, meaning healing lost in combat or through other means is granted back to the person blessed with this effect. The only way to negate this magic spell is to tape her mouth shut, and tie her up, or else she can heal anyone she pleases through a kiss.

    Extra: The spell only works on someone who is injured, so if someone is not injured and Kitsune kisses them, nothing will occur.

    Passive:
    1.) Kistune has the ability to change between fox form and humanoid form, this is one of her passive abilities. This ability though can only last for one post, once the timer ends she reverts to her fox form.

    2.) Communication to all animals- Kitsune has one passive ability that allows her to speak to all animals the kingdom of beasts. She is able to understand them and speak to them, but as a human would, and is able to translate between the races-


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    Genesis



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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Genesis on Thu Dec 24, 2015 3:01 pm

    Hello my name is Genesis and I will be grading your pet app today.

    Everything looks great except for the spell. You have 3 B rank spells, which is a total combination of 9 D rank spell slots. However, B rank pets are allot 5 D rank spell slots, you will have to get rid of one of the spells and downgrade the other. Bump when done~
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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Raiden on Thu Dec 24, 2015 3:09 pm

    Le Bump!
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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Genesis on Thu Dec 24, 2015 3:16 pm

    @Raiden wrote:Name: Kitsune
    Gender: Female
    Rank: B-Rank
    Species: Fox-Spirit
    Type: Support

    Description:

    Personality:
    Kitsune is a very confusing critter, at first she will be rather docile she would tends to be lazy and sleepy. But when you least expect it she will be full of energy, be yipping while jumping from table to table. Kitsune can at times act like a spoiled brat, not listening to others, and would tend to ignore people if they didn't give her what she wants. And what she wants is treats, when you give her treats she will turn into a larger humanoid version of her fox form. Due to her being a sprite she is able to freely change between the two forms and roam around with other humans.

    Other than her usual stubborn fits if she doesn't get her way, she is a very calm and sweet being who loves to be the center of attention. She is also very curious about many things and very bold to speak her mind, is she is confused about something she will speak bluntly and straight to the point. But despite this rather curious thought process, Kitsune is a very gentle being, who loves others and will protect them at all costs, she loves to make friends. And always will be there to help others, whether they are in a bad mood, or if they just need a friend to be with. She is a very good conversationalist, and tends to talk for hours on end like any other girl.
    Apparance:

    -Fox Form
    Spoiler:

    Kitsune is a mammalian, quadruped creature with primarily brown fur, the tip of her bushy tail and her large furry collar are cream-colored. Kitsune has short, slender legs with three small toes and a pink paw pad on each foot. While she retains a pair of  brown eyes, long pointed ears, and a small black nose, in her fox form she is about the size of a puppy. Her height is that of 33 cm from her ears to her toes, and weighs about 6.8 kg.

    -Human Form
    Spoiler:

    Kistune when she converts to her humanoid form, retains the same characteristics of her fox form but instead of fur, she now has brown hair, eyes a larger but same poofy tail and a dress. Her dress resembles her fox forms fur, in colour and pattern, as the areas about her neck are cream colour. And the trim around the base of her dress, she also has a pair of leather armlets that seem to resemble her fur like pattern, though now she has skin, which is a light peach tan colour. She still retains her brown eyes, but loses her black nose, and keeps her long ears, though longer now. She wears a pair of knee high fur boots, with cream coloured fur along the trim and dark brown knee stockings. She stands about 170.18 cm in height and weighs about 62.14 kg. And while in her humanoid form, she has a very tender, loving, and light voice that tends to be extremely soothing.

    Abilities:

    Active:
    Name: Healing Kiss

    Rank: B

    Type: Healing

    Range: Touch

    Duration/Cool Down: Instant/4

    Appearance: The aura that Kitsune gives off is that of a warming green aura, which consumes whomever she touches and will slowly seep into their form. Healing them through her touch, and after the glow is gone, the spell will end.

    Description: When Kitsune does as the spells describes and kisses someone, whether it is in her fox form or humanoid form, she is able to heal one person through touch contact. She is able to send warm and soothing waves of vibrant energy to aid a person if they are injured. The effects differ between her forms, while in her fox form she is only able to heal someone for 15% of their lost health, but in her humanoid for it is much more powerful. As she is able to return over 40% of the lost health the person she is healing lost in combat or through other means. The only way to negate this magic spell is to tape her mouth shut, and tie her up, or else she can heal anyone she pleases through a kiss. Change the 40% to 20%

    Extra: The spell only works on someone who is injured, so if someone is not injured and Kitsune kisses them, nothing will occur.

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    Name: Hug of Strength

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: Touch

    Duration/Cool Down: 2/4

    Appearance: The spell gives off a brilliant red glow that seems to envelop the mage and seeps into their being much like her Healing Kiss. When the mage absorbs the energy they themselves emit a small cloud of red aura around him.

    Description: This spell only seems to work when she is in her humanoid form, and requires that she physically hug a person. As in her arms need to fully connect around the person she is trying to give the power of strength to. This spell increases the physical Strength attributes of the person she is cast it upon by one rank of their current, making their physical damage one rank higher and act like the damage of a spell of that rank. Rather than saying it increases their physical damage up by one rank (which is too OP in itself) state that it rather increases the strength stat by _____ rank. (Fill in the blank)

    Extra: This spell only seems too work in Kitsune's human form, and won't function when she is in her fox form.

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    Name: Speed Voice

    Rank: D

    Type: Supplementary

    Range: Touch or 3.048 meters

    Duration/Cool Down: 2/5

    Appearance: Once cast, the spell emits a brilliant white hue that soars through the air, or when in touching contact seeps into the legs of the mage. Making the lower region more muscular as the spell stimulates the cells in the calves and thighs of the enhanced mage.

    Description: When cast, the targeted mage must be withing touch or a rank of 10 feet for her voice to reach them, once cast the spell then will travel to the mage. Once the mage has received the blessing will cause them to have more speed in movement. This increases their ability to dodge incoming spells of their ow *own rank and below, but unable to out maneuver anything above the rank of the spell cast. This in turn makes the mage as fast as a C-rank mage, and can avoid up to two spells of the rank of C, and three of anything below that rank. Rather than stating it makes a mage as fast as a C rank mage, and can avoid 2 C rank spells state the increase of the speed by 10% of the said mage, and don't say you can avoid 2 C rank spells, that would be considered auto-dodging. 

    Extra: The spell can be negated if a louder sound is emitted over Kitsune's voice, anything from a loud crash or a high pitch ringing sound.
    Passive:
    1.) Kistune has the ability to change between fox form and humanoid form, this is one of her passive abilities.

    2.) Communication to all animals- Kitsune has one passive ability that allows her to speak to all animals the kingdom of beasts. She is able to understand them and speak to them, but as a human would, and is able to translate between the races-




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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Raiden on Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:42 pm

    Le bump, I have finished the edits.
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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Genesis on Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:59 pm

    @Raiden wrote:Name: Kitsune
    Gender: Female
    Rank: B-Rank
    Species: Fox-Spirit
    Type: Support

    Description:

    Personality:
    Kitsune is a very confusing critter, at first she will be rather docile she would tends to be lazy and sleepy. But when you least expect it she will be full of energy, be yipping while jumping from table to table. Kitsune can at times act like a spoiled brat, not listening to others, and would tend to ignore people if they didn't give her what she wants. And what she wants is treats, when you give her treats she will turn into a larger humanoid version of her fox form. Due to her being a sprite she is able to freely change between the two forms and roam around with other humans.

    Other than her usual stubborn fits if she doesn't get her way, she is a very calm and sweet being who loves to be the center of attention. She is also very curious about many things and very bold to speak her mind, is she is confused about something she will speak bluntly and straight to the point. But despite this rather curious thought process, Kitsune is a very gentle being, who loves others and will protect them at all costs, she loves to make friends. And always will be there to help others, whether they are in a bad mood, or if they just need a friend to be with. She is a very good conversationalist, and tends to talk for hours on end like any other girl.
    Appearance
    Apparance:

    -Fox Form
    Spoiler:

    Kitsune is a mammalian, quadruped creature with primarily brown fur, the tip of her bushy tail and her large furry collar are cream-colored. Kitsune has short, slender legs with three small toes and a pink paw pad on each foot. While she retains a pair of  brown eyes, long pointed ears, and a small black nose, in her fox form she is about the size of a puppy. Her height is that of 33 cm from her ears to her toes, and weighs about 6.8 kg.

    -Human Form
    Spoiler:

    Kistune when she converts to her humanoid form, retains the same characteristics of her fox form but instead of fur, she now has brown hair, eyes a larger but same poofy tail and a dress. Her dress resembles her fox forms fur, in colour and pattern, as the areas about her neck are cream colour. And the trim around the base of her dress, she also has a pair of leather armlets that seem to resemble her fur like pattern, though now she has skin, which is a light peach tan colour. She still retains her brown eyes, but loses her black nose, and keeps her long ears, though longer now. She wears a pair of knee high fur boots, with cream coloured fur along the trim and dark brown knee stockings. She stands about 170.18 cm in height and weighs about 62.14 kg. And while in her humanoid form, she has a very tender, loving, and light voice that tends to be extremely soothing.

    Abilities:

    Active:
    Name: Healing Kiss

    Rank: B

    Type: Healing

    Range: Touch

    Duration/Cool Down: Instant/4

    Appearance: The aura that Kitsune gives off is that of a warming green aura, which consumes whomever she touches and will slowly seep into their form. Healing them through her touch, and after the glow is gone, the spell will end.

    Description: When Kitsune does as the spells describes and kisses someone, whether it is in her fox form or humanoid form, she is able to heal one person through touch contact. She is able to send warm and soothing waves of vibrant energy to aid a person if they are injured. The effects differ between her forms, while in her fox form she is only able to heal someone for 15% of their lost health, but in her humanoid for it is much more powerful. As she is able to return over 20% of the lost health the person she is healing lost in combat or through other means. The only way to negate this magic spell is to tape her mouth shut, and tie her up, or else she can heal anyone she pleases through a kiss. Due to new healing rules that was established you're going to have to change this once more. Healing takes over the course of 2 posts. Since this heals B rank damage each post the said person receiving the healing will obtain 11.5% health back per post for 2 post max.

    Extra: The spell only works on someone who is injured, so if someone is not injured and Kitsune kisses them, nothing will occur.

    Passive:
    1.) KistuneKitsune has the ability to change between fox form and humanoid form, this is one of her passive abilities. State that she can transform only once per post

    2.) Communication to all animals- Kitsune has one passive ability that allows her to speak to all animals the kingdom of beasts. She is able to understand them and speak to them, but as a human would, and is able to translate between the races-




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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Raiden on Wed Jan 13, 2016 6:13 pm

    Final le bump.
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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Genesis on Wed Jan 13, 2016 6:23 pm

    Healing kiss: Change duration to 2 posts




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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Raiden on Wed Jan 13, 2016 6:42 pm

    Sorry about that, done now.
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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Genesis on Wed Jan 13, 2016 6:45 pm

    My bad sorry xDDD

    I mean Duration. Raise cooldown to 4 post again. Once again this is my fault I apologize.




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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Raiden on Wed Jan 13, 2016 7:47 pm

    Done
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    Re: Kitsune

    Post by Genesis on Wed Jan 13, 2016 8:53 pm

    Please raise the duration to 2.




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