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    Clawford



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    Clawford

    Post by Clawford on Wed Dec 30, 2015 3:00 pm

    Clawford










    Nick Name Here Clawford
    Age Here 9
    Birthday Here March 16
    Species Here Exceed
    Rank Here D
    Alliegance Here Neutral Good
    Gender Here Male

    Species

    Exceeds are cat-like humanoids. They range in size from 20/50cm, and generally have bigger heads than bodies. They hatch from eggs and all have the ability to do Aera magic, allowing them to summon wings that allow them to fly.

    Species Ability/Perk

    Exceeds can use a magic called Aera, this allows them to summon large angelic wings that allow them to fly. Clawford can only fly as high as the height limit chart allows his rank to.

    Most exceeds have humanoid eyes. Clawford however has feline eyes, allowing him to see perfectly fine in the dark. However, because of this everything he sees is a shade of yellow/orange. This makes him color-blind as he wouldn’t be able to recognize any colors. His night vision only works on natural darkness, not on a darkness mage's spell.


    Special/Unique Characteristics
    He's color blind. Unlike most exceeds, he doesn't have humanoid eyes.



    Character Depth


    Personality:
    Clawford is a caring exceed with a good heart, he wants to help when others are in trouble and often puts the needs of others before his own. He’s also very protective to those he cares about and has a strong opinion about everything. He has a lot of determination and willpower, so despite the set-backs he faces on his journey he will always push forward until he reaches his limit. When it comes to fighting the situation he is in can blind him for reason, that said if he’s defending someone he cares for he will attack a mage who’s too powerful for him to defeat. In a normal situation he would of course reason not to fight said mage as he has no chance of winning.

    Curiosity killed the cat, or in this case, the exceed. Clawford likes to stick his nose where it doesn’t belong, and not everyone will appreciate him meddling in their business. He’s passionate about group activities, so he will always give his all for sports and games. And that’s fine for the ones he’s decent at, but he’s lousy at anything creative. Singing, dancing, acting, he will get an A for effort, but an F for performance. You’ll want to stay far away from him when he’s doing any creative acts, as it will not be pleasant for anyone but himself. Family and friends are the most important thing to him, this makes him possessive and get jealous easily, since he fears for others coming in between him and those he cares about. He will be very straight forward and tell the other right where it’s at.

    He’s both resentful and forgiving. He can stay angry at someone over a fight/argument for a very long time. This will be combined with very dark thoughts towards said person. Though when said person does an act of kindness towards him he will be very quick to forgive and forget and start over with a clean slate. This means that if he fights an evil person he will not try and convince them to become a good person, but will let darkness consume his opinion on the person: they’re bad, so they deserve to be punished.


    Likes:
    -Board/Card Games: Board games are a fun way to bond, and he has a lot of good memories from it. Same goes for card games, he enjoys the positive energy it brings forth in everyone.

    -Dragon Slayers: The most awesome mages in the world, and even better, they team up with exceeds. He holds them in the highest esteem.

    -Helping the community: He's a kind soul that cares a lot about the well being of others. Helping out makes other people happy, and in turn it makes him feel good about himself.

    Dislikes:
    -Criminals: The scum of the earth, they take other peoples hard earned money, beloved items, and worst of all, harm other people. What's not to dislike about these leeches that thrive on the suffering of others?

    -Games that require the ability to see colors: It's very frustrating for clawford to not be able to participate in a game. Board games with pastel colored pawns, all the same shape? Forget it, he's not going to be able to tell pawn from pawn.

    -Vulcans: These lady stealing monsters once barged into town, stealing women from their homes. One of these women was their favorite orphanage teacher. It took 5 weeks before the mages rescued her, which is a long time for young children to miss someone they care about. Clawford has disdained these creatures ever since.

    Fears:
    -Small confined spaces: he gets claustrophobic in small confined spaces. Not so much in an elevator because he's very small himself, but you won't find him crawling through any air-vents.
    -Doctors: Needles, thermometers that are stuck in unpleasant places, nasty check ups *shiver* nothing fun about getting examined and treated.
    -Tunnels: A tunnel is a confined place, large, yet still confined. Where does it end? Will it collapse? I'm trapped!

    Motivations/Goals:
    -Partner up with a Dragon Slayer: On a class tour to the light guilds he noticed figurines with exceeds on them, curious as he was he asked about it and thus learned of the partnership between dragon slayers and exceeds. From that moment on he knew where he belonged. He left the orphanage and has been looking for a dragon slayer ever since.

    -Be a part of a guild/family: Since he left his orphanage family behind he is eager to find a new one, a place to belong to and new people to bond with.

    -Help his partner and family: He likes to help out strangers, do things for the community as a whole. So helping his partner and family would be even better. Seeing the faces light up of those he cares about.


    Appearance

    Hair: Orange with a white belly
    Eyes: White with a slit for a pupil
    Skin Tone: The skin under his fur is orange and white
    Height: 46cm
    Weight: 3.8kg
    Overall Appearances: He wears a red vest with a cowl. The vest is imbued with magic, allowing for it to stretch up to 5x its original size. (the purpose of this is so that the cowl can go over his head without it dragging over the floor, since exceeds have bigger heads than bodies)

    Other

    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: None


    Last edited by Clawford on Thu Dec 31, 2015 12:14 pm; edited 5 times in total
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    Hiroko



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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Hiroko on Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:08 pm

    For your perk, the one you have is perfectly fine, but give a duration and cooldown to it. Also, you're allowed another perk.
    For the unique characteristic, see perfectly in the dark would actually be a perk, special characteristics can be for example, Exceed body, since you are an exceed after all. The not seeing colors however can stay.
    for your likes and deslikes, I'll have to ask you to explain them (I hated when I was asked the same but it's a rule I guess).




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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Clawford on Thu Dec 31, 2015 2:01 am

    Made the changes donut
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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Hiroko on Thu Dec 31, 2015 8:09 am

    My bad, didn't mention motivations and fears since they also need to be extended. That's the only thing I think you're missing. Though I would prefer if you explain you perk in the perk area rather than the special characteristic area.




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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Clawford on Thu Dec 31, 2015 9:22 am

    All done boss Onion 73
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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Hiroko on Thu Dec 31, 2015 11:25 am

    First approval
    Nice character by the way
    Also, no need to bump, I'll let a staff member know you're ready for second aapproval




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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Genesis on Thu Dec 31, 2015 11:33 am

    Hi my name is Genesis and I will be grading your app today.

    First of all state that your perk of flight follows the height limit chart. And give the cooldown for your Aera ability. After that add a species description right before the persk/abilities you gave are listed

    You say that you're colorblind in your special characteristics, are you always colorblind? If so you can take it out on your night vision perk.

    Also for your alignment, you simply state good. That's not specific enough. Are you Lawful good? Chaotic good? Neutral good?

    Please make the changes and bump when complete.




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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Clawford on Thu Dec 31, 2015 12:16 pm

    Alrighty Onion 7

    Made the changes according to the thread and what was discussed in the chatbox~
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    Re: Clawford

    Post by Genesis on Fri Jan 01, 2016 1:39 am

    This is fine then. Second approval given~




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