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    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic

    Selenia
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    Post by Selenia Tue Jan 05, 2016 10:41 pm

    Heavenly Body Magic
    S
    Caster
    N/A
    Sub
    Fairy Tail
    No
    Offense


    Magic Description
    It is a powerful form of Magic that allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle, usually in offense.
    The properties of Heavenly Body Magic rely primarily on astronomical objects, such as meteors or the generation and manipulation of the energy of stars from their own body. The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of high destructive power, reminiscent of starlight, at their opponents. This light is not the only substance used, however. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent for destructive usage; the strength can be comparable to the effects caused by a black hole.


    Perks of Magic
    Meteor - The user's body is surrounded by Magic, allowing them to move through the air. This perk allows the user flight up to a height of 245 meters when the magic is at S-Rank. The user moves at their normal speed with this perk (unless stat boosts are present).

    Meteoric Speed - While using Meteor, Selenia's speed increases by two tiers for five posts with a six post cooldown at S-Rank.

    Heaven's Eye - Heaven's Eye is a form of Eye Magic which allows the user to see over long distances, giving them the ability to see through solid objects, thereby allowing one to track enemies with relative ease. Selenia can use Heaven's Eye in her normal field of view up to 250 meters away.



    Weaknesses
    Heavenly Body Magic is known for its strong offense, but is not defensive in nature. This leaves the user opens to attacks, and if they are overpowered then this magic will not be able to easily protect them.

    Strengths
    That being said, Heavenly Body Magic is extremely powerful in its offense, and its usage of astronomical objects allows it to complete extraordinary feats capable of accomplishing devastating attacks.

    Spells
    Place your Spells you know here
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 4l20wZQ
    Heaven Breakdown:
    Heavenly Arrows:
    Meteoric Strength:
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 01UG7Sa
    Heavenly Beams:
    Heavenly Blast:
    Heaven Palm:
    Worm Hole:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic TPuH4kG
    Meteor Shower:
    Gravity Flux:
    Asteroid Field:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic VUl2SUP
    Null Void:
    Planetary Ring:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic ZpYOaPu
    Grand Chariot:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 7pCf7pz
    Altairis:





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    Genesis
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    Post by Genesis Thu Jan 07, 2016 10:35 am

    Hi, you already know who I am so let's get started. Corrections are in this color.
    Selenia wrote:
    Heavenly Body Magic
    S
    Caster
    N/A
    Sub
    Fairy Tail
    No
    Offense


    Magic Description
    It is a powerful form of Magic that allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle, usually in offense.
    The properties of Heavenly Body Magic rely primarily on astronomical objects, such as meteors or the generation and manipulation of the energy of stars from their own body. The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of high destructive power, reminiscent of starlight, at their opponents. This light is not the only substance used, however. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent for destructive usage; the strength can be comparable to the effects caused by a black hole.


    Perks of Magic
    Meteor - The user's body is surrounded by Magic, allowing them to move through the air. This perk allows the user flight up to a height of 245 meters when the magic is at S-Rank.
    True Heavenly Body Magic - The user is allowed  two spells of a higher rank than their magic. However, there are several drawbacks to this perk. First of all, it takes two perk spots, not allowing the user to have a third perk for the magic. Second, the spell can only be used once a thread, aka cooldown is an entire thread. Third, they can have no other spells of that rank relating to the magic. Finally, they can only use one of these spells per thread.


    Weaknesses
    Heavenly Body Magic is known for its strong offense, but is not defensive in nature. This leaves the user opens to attacks, and if they are overpowered then this magic will not be able to easily protect them.

    Strengths
    That being said, Heavenly Body Magic is extremely powerful in its offense, and its usage of astronomical objects allows it to complete extraordinary feats capable of accomplishing devastating attacks.

    Spells
    Place your Spells you know here
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 4l20wZQ
    Heaven Breakdown:
    Heavenly Arrows:
    Meteoric Strength:
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 01UG7Sa
    Heavenly Beams:
    Heavenly Blast:
    Heaven Palm:
    Heaven Palm:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic TPuH4kG
    Asteroid Field:
    Gravity Flux:
    Meteoric Speed:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic VUl2SUP
    Null Void:
    Planetary Ring:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic ZpYOaPu
    Grand Chariot:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 7pCf7pz
    Altairis:



    Selenia
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    Post by Selenia Thu Jan 07, 2016 12:12 pm

    Bump!

    Notes: Changed Asteroid Field to make it more of how I envisioned it.
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    Post by Genesis Thu Jan 07, 2016 2:09 pm

    Ok looks good then. First approval given.
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    Post by Genesis Mon Feb 01, 2016 11:11 pm

    Selenia wrote:
    Heavenly Body Magic
    S
    Caster
    N/A
    Sub
    Fairy Tail
    No
    Offense


    Magic Description
    It is a powerful form of Magic that allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle, usually in offense.
    The properties of Heavenly Body Magic rely primarily on astronomical objects, such as meteors or the generation and manipulation of the energy of stars from their own body. The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of high destructive power, reminiscent of starlight, at their opponents. This light is not the only substance used, however. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent for destructive usage; the strength can be comparable to the effects caused by a black hole.


    Perks of Magic
    Meteor - The user's body is surrounded by Magic, allowing them to move through the air. This perk allows the user flight up to a height of 245 meters when the magic is at S-Rank. State that they move at their base speed

    Meteoric Speed - While using Meteor, Selenia's speed increases by two tiers for five posts with a six post cooldown at S-Rank. Unfortunately you can only increase your speed by only one tier

    Heaven's Eye - Heaven's Eye is a form of Eye Magic which allows the user to see over long distances, giving them the ability to see through solid objects, thereby allowing one to track enemies with relative ease. Selenia's range at S-Rank extends to 250 meters in one direction. However, Selenia can also use Heaven's Eye at a shorter range, but see everything in a 360 degree radius around her. At S-Rank, it would be a 100 meter radius. This perk seems to be two perks in one. If one perk was simply for RP purposes it would be fine however this seems to be more of a PvP perk. I would like you to remove on of the following perks.




    Weaknesses
    Heavenly Body Magic is known for its strong offense, but is not defensive in nature. This leaves the user opens to attacks, and if they are overpowered then this magic will not be able to easily protect them. You will need two more weaknesses to balance this out. Also please reword the last part of the weakness description

    Strengths
    That being said, Heavenly Body Magic is extremely powerful in its offense, and its usage of astronomical objects allows it to complete extraordinary feats capable of accomplishing devastating attacks.Add 2 more strengths to this magic as well and you're golden.

    Spells
    Place your Spells you know here
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 4l20wZQ
    Heaven Breakdown:
    Heavenly Arrows:
    Meteoric Strength:
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 01UG7Sa
    Heavenly Beams:
    Heavenly Blast:
    Heaven Palm:
    Worm Hole:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic TPuH4kG
    Meteor Shower:
    Gravity Flux:
    Asteroid Field:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic VUl2SUP
    Null Void:
    Planetary Ring:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic ZpYOaPu
    Grand Chariot:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 7pCf7pz
    Altairis:




    Bump when edits are made~
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    Post by Selenia Tue Feb 02, 2016 6:34 am

    Genesis wrote:
    Selenia wrote:
    Heavenly Body Magic
    S
    Caster
    N/A
    Sub
    Fairy Tail
    No
    Offense


    Magic Description
    It is a powerful form of Magic that allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle, usually in offense.
    The properties of Heavenly Body Magic rely primarily on astronomical objects, such as meteors or the generation and manipulation of the energy of stars from their own body. The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of high destructive power, reminiscent of starlight, at their opponents. This light is not the only substance used, however. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent for destructive usage; the strength can be comparable to the effects caused by a black hole.


    Perks of Magic
    Meteor - The user's body is surrounded by Magic, allowing them to move through the air. This perk allows the user flight up to a height of 245 meters when the magic is at S-Rank. State that they move at their base speed
    Done

    Meteoric Speed - While using Meteor, Selenia's speed increases by two tiers for five posts with a six post cooldown at S-Rank. Unfortunately you can only increase your speed by only one tier
    Where does it say this in any system? o.o

    Heaven's Eye - Heaven's Eye is a form of Eye Magic which allows the user to see over long distances, giving them the ability to see through solid objects, thereby allowing one to track enemies with relative ease. Selenia can use Heaven's Eye in a 100 meter radius, seeing everything in a 360 degree radius around her. At S-Rank, it would be a 100 meter radius. This perk seems to be two perks in one. If one perk was simply for RP purposes it would be fine however this seems to be more of a PvP perk. I would like you to remove on of the following perks.
    Done~




    Weaknesses
    Heavenly Body Magic is known for its strong offense, but is not defensive in nature. This leaves the user opens to attacks, and if they are overpowered then this magic will not be easy to protect themselves with. You will need two more weaknesses to balance this out. Also please reword the last part of the weakness descriptionWhere does it say I need two more strengths? o.o

    Strengths
    That being said, Heavenly Body Magic is extremely powerful in its offense, and its usage of astronomical objects allows it to complete extraordinary feats capable of accomplishing devastating attacks.Add 2 more strengths to this magic as well and you're golden.Where does it say I need two more strengths? o.o

    Spells
    Place your Spells you know here
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 4l20wZQ
    Heaven Breakdown:
    Heavenly Arrows:
    Meteoric Strength:
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 01UG7Sa
    Heavenly Beams:
    Heavenly Blast:
    Heaven Palm:
    Worm Hole:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic TPuH4kG
    Meteor Shower:
    Gravity Flux:
    Asteroid Field:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic VUl2SUP
    Null Void:
    Planetary Ring:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic ZpYOaPu
    Grand Chariot:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 7pCf7pz
    Altairis:




    Bump when edits are made~

    Bump, can you please check this post for things disagreed upon? Thank you!
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    Post by Genesis Thu Feb 04, 2016 9:30 pm

    Selenia wrote:
    Heavenly Body Magic
    S
    Caster
    N/A
    Sub
    Fairy Tail
    No
    Offense


    Magic Description
    It is a powerful form of Magic that allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle, usually in offense.
    The properties of Heavenly Body Magic rely primarily on astronomical objects, such as meteors or the generation and manipulation of the energy of stars from their own body. The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of high destructive power, reminiscent of starlight, at their opponents. This light is not the only substance used, however. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent for destructive usage; the strength can be comparable to the effects caused by a black hole.


    Perks of Magic
    Meteor - The user's body is surrounded by Magic, allowing them to move through the air. This perk allows the user flight up to a height of 245 meters when the magic is at S-Rank. The user moves at their normal speed with this perk (unless stat boosts are present).

    Meteoric Speed - While using Meteor, Selenia's speed increases by two tiers for five posts with a six post cooldown at S-Rank.

    Heaven's Eye - Heaven's Eye is a form of Eye Magic which allows the user to see over long distances, giving them the ability to see through solid objects, thereby allowing one to track enemies with relative ease. Selenia can use Heaven's Eye in her normal field of view up to 250 meters away.



    Weaknesses
    Heavenly Body Magic is known for its strong offense, but is not defensive in nature. This leaves the user opens to attacks, and if they are overpowered then this magic will not be able to easily protect them.

    Strengths
    That being said, Heavenly Body Magic is extremely powerful in its offense, and its usage of astronomical objects allows it to complete extraordinary feats capable of accomplishing devastating attacks.

    Spells
    Place your Spells you know here
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 4l20wZQ
    Heaven Breakdown:
    Heavenly Arrows:
    Meteoric Strength:
    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 01UG7Sa
    Heavenly Beams:
    Heavenly Blast:
    Heaven Palm:
    Worm Hole:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic TPuH4kG
    Meteor Shower:
    Gravity Flux:
    Asteroid Field:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic VUl2SUP
    Null Void:
    Planetary Ring:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic ZpYOaPu
    Grand Chariot:

    Selenia's Heavenly Body Magic 7pCf7pz
    Altairis:



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    Post by Selenia Fri Feb 05, 2016 4:36 pm

    Bump~
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    Post by Genesis Fri Feb 05, 2016 8:46 pm

    This looks good then soooooo

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