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    Rasa Antumbra's Magic

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    Post by Rasa-Antumbra Sun Jan 10, 2016 3:28 pm

    Shadow Subversion
    Rank D
    Caster Magic: Shadow Make
    Element: Shadow
    Main Magic
    Guild: None
    Specific to Rasa
    Offense and Defense


    Magic Description
    Rasa's magic is his own personal touch on Shadow-Make magic. While in theory it has all the strengths and weaknesses of shadow-make, Rasa has applied his own unique spin to aid in his profession. As such, his variant is almost purely utility based. There are very few options for him to attack with, so instead he manipulates shadows to confuse or distract people. Shadow Subterfuge is the personification of a "smoke and mirrors" magic.

    Perks of Magic
    Creation, transmutation, and transformation of shadows. Rasa can create, shape, and transform shadows into objects. Objects do not provide combat advantages.

    Weaknesses
    Relies on the manipulation of shadows, making it difficult or nearly impossible to use under conditions with few shadows. This means the effectiveness of the magic also varies based on condition of lighting. No shadows, no magic. Extremely vulnerable to light magic. Few direct attacks. Few defensive buffs.


    Strengths
    Under optimal conditions where there are lots of shadows this magic becomes extremely powerful.
    Provides potential for stealthy attacks if it's dark enough.
    Extremely versatile and can adapt to almost any situation.
    This magic is all about shadows and positioning. If there are no shadows, there's nowhere to go. If there are lots of shadows, there are lots of places to go.


    Spells

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 4l20wZQ
    Cloak:

    Shadow Step:

    Grasp:

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 01UG7Sa
    {None yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic TPuH4kG
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic VUl2SUP
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic ZpYOaPu
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 7pCf7pz
    {None Yet}





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    Post by Genesis Wed Jan 13, 2016 9:31 pm

    Hi my name is Genesis and I will be grading your app today. Corrections are in this color
    Rasa-Antumbra wrote:
    Shadow Subversion
    Rank D
    Custom Magic
    Element: Shadow
    Main Magic
    Guild: None
    Specific to Rasa
    Offense and Defense


    Magic Description
    Centers on the manipulation of shadows to deceive enemies. It has few direct uses and is used primarily in subterfuge. This needs a longer description. Two paragraphs would be fine.

    Perks of Magic
    Power is related to shadows and thus gains or loses effectiveness based on how numerous the shadows are.Elaborate more on the perk. Give us percentages or how many tiers you get stronger by. Also note that you cannot get stronger by having many of our shadows up on the field

    Weaknesses
    Relies on the manipulation of shadows, making it difficult or nearly impossible to use under certain conditions.
    Power of the magic also varies based on condition of lighting.
    Unable to effectively attack an opponent based on lighting.
    Explain these weaknesses more clearly


    Strengths
    Under optimal conditions this magic becomes extremely powerful.What defines as optimal conditions? Elaborate more. And how does it become extremely powerful?
    Provides potential for powerful attacks when in extreme darkness.How does it provide powerful attacks in extreme darkness. Is the attacks more powerful? If so I need a percentage by rank and that would equal a magic perk.
    Extremely versatile and can adapt to almost any situation.


    Spells

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 4l20wZQ
    Cloak:

    Shadow Step:

    Grasp:

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 01UG7Sa
    {None yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic TPuH4kG
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic VUl2SUP
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic ZpYOaPu
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 7pCf7pz
    {None Yet}



    Bump when edits have been made~
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    Post by Rasa-Antumbra Thu Jan 14, 2016 11:29 am

    bump
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    Post by Genesis Thu Jan 14, 2016 6:45 pm

    Rasa-Antumbra wrote:
    Shadow Subversion
    Rank D
    Caster Magic: Shadow Make
    Element: Shadow
    Main Magic
    Guild: None
    Specific to Rasa
    Offense and Defense


    Magic Description
    Rasa's magic is his own personal touch on Shadow-Make magic. While in theory it has all the strengths and weaknesses of shadow-make, Rasa has applied his own unique spin to aid in his profession. As such, his variant is almost purely utility based. There are very few options for him to attack with, so instead he manipulates shadows to confuse or distract people. Shadow Subterfuge is the personification of a "smoke and mirrors" magic.

    Perks of Magic
    Power is related to shadows and thus gains or loses effectiveness based on how numerous the shadows are. I don't mean physical power, it's not going to hit harder if there are a lot of shadows, or hit weaker if there are few shadows. I literally mean if there is no shadow at all, there is no magic. If there are lots of shadows, or total darkness, there is more options. This seems more like a weakness. Also please refrain from using 1st person in apps

    Weaknesses
    Relies on the manipulation of shadows, making it difficult or nearly impossible to use under conditions with few shadows.
    Power of the magic also varies based on condition of lighting. Elaborate more please
    Unable to effectively attack an opponent based on lighting.
    No shadows, no magic. Lots of shadows, lots of magic. Pretty simple, no?Move the last part to strengths


    Strengths
    Under optimal conditions this magic becomes extremely powerful.[color=#0000ff]Be specific during what conditions is this magic extremely powerful.
    Provides potential for stealthy attacks if it's dark enough.
    Extremely versatile and can adapt to almost any situation.
    This magic is all about shadows and positioning. If there are no shadows, there's nowhere to go. If there are lots of shadows, there are lots of places to go.


    Spells

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 4l20wZQ
    Cloak:

    Shadow Step:

    Grasp:

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 01UG7Sa
    {None yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic TPuH4kG
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic VUl2SUP
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic ZpYOaPu
    {None Yet}

    Rasa Antumbra's Magic 7pCf7pz
    {None Yet},



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    Post by Rasa-Antumbra Thu Jan 14, 2016 7:21 pm

    Clear?
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    Post by Genesis Fri Jan 15, 2016 3:23 pm

    Alright last edit.

    For your perk state that each of your creations will have zero combat advantages.
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    Post by Rasa-Antumbra Tue Jan 19, 2016 1:44 pm

    Done
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    Post by Rasa-Antumbra Sun Jan 24, 2016 1:20 pm

    bump?
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    Post by Genesis Fri Jan 29, 2016 1:48 pm

    I apologize for the late reply but after talking to the staff you will need to match the number of strengths with weaknesses. Once again I apologize
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    Post by Rasa-Antumbra Sat Jan 30, 2016 2:08 am

    bump
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    Post by Genesis Sat Jan 30, 2016 8:39 am

    Alright then first approval given.

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