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    Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Laney on Sun Feb 07, 2016 6:06 am

    Sirius Heliacal


    "Don"
    19
    08/08
    Etherious Demon
    D
    Chaotic Good
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk


    Etherious Demon - The Etherious are a sub-race of demons that are born from a book containing many dark and forbidden spells. In the case of Sirius Heliacal, he was born as a unique entity, being the sole demon to be derived from a book titled, "Soul Cartel." This book details the story of a man as he travels through the lands to become the ultimate Don and finally, the Godfather. Within his adventures, he uses many spells deemed to be uncouth, evil and forbidden. From these pages, the Etherious known as Sirius Heliacal emerged, named after the story's protagonist.
    Perks: Etherious Trandsformation - As a member of the Etherious race, Sirius is able to attain a transformation which embodies his 'true' power. This transformation alters his appearance and allows for a certain stat buff. Whilst in his Etherious Form, he can not use it as a disguise to fool others into believing he is a second being. In his case, he allows for a transformation that follows the buffing table and affects his speed, upon reaching A-Rank, it also allows Sirius to buff his Strength. His transformation and buff scale with his own rank.
    D-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 2 Posts/Cooldown of 3 Posts (1 Stat Only)
    C-Rank: +1 Rank for 3 Posts/Cooldown of 4 Posts (1 Stat Only)
    B-Rank: + 1 Rank for 3 Posts/Cooldown of 4 Posts (1 Stat Only)
    A-Rank: + 1 Rank for 3 Posts/Cooldown of 4 Posts (2 Stat Only)
    S-Rank: + 1 Rank for 5 Posts/Cooldown of 6 Posts (2 Stat Only)
    SS-Rank: + 1 Rank for 7 Posts/Cooldown of 8 Posts (2 Stat Only)
    Enhanced Senses - As a demon, he is granted a variety of altered and enhanced senses. Specifically, his sense of smell. His heightened smell follows the AOE range template.
    D-Rank: 10 meter radius maximum
    C-Rank: 25 meter radius maximum
    B-Rank: 45 meter radius maximum
    A-Rank: 70 meter radius maximum
    S-Rank: 100 meter radius maximum
    SS-Rank: 140 meter radius maximum


    Special/Unique Characteristics


    Sirius bares a tattoo of a black paw mark beneath his right eye, the center of which begins by his cheekbone.


    Character Depth


    Personality: Not one to be considered a hard book to read, Sirius wears his own emotions on his sleeve. Nervous, with a knack of being something of a coward, the Etherious Demon does not live up to his race's talents of being fearless and headstrong. Instead, he and his powers all focus on keeping himself alive. While he may prioritise his own self-perseverance, he is loyal to those who he has befriended, one of his few redeeming qualities.

    Another quality that surfaces more often than not, is his own stupidity. He will usually be the last to stumble onto a conclusion and will find difficulty with problems that others would have been able to solve in an instant. Whether it be his natural desire to be within a group or a pack, the Etherious Demon finds that he doesn't work well on his own, and is prone to suffering from his stupidity and lack of balance doubly so once he is placed alone. The one physical trait of his that is always as strong as ever, is his superior sense of smell. Granted by his own heritage, Sirius weilds this ability to hone in on the location of a food cart before quickly tucking into a meal, being a voracious eater, he eats and ungodly amount of food as he lacks self restraint.

    Finally, Sirius believes himself to be incredibly unlucky, as he finds himself in a wide array of awkward scenarios. Whether it be falling up a flight of stairs, slipping and ending up sliding down a field of glass, or even being mistaken for someone who no one would like to be mistook as, the Etherious Demon finds himself placed at the opposite end of Lady Luck. Sirius, as it were, has a wish to become a woman, believing that the female form is the epitome of beauty, which he values to a large extent, willing to go to great lengths to protect what and whom he deems to be beautiful, safeguarding them from the ugliness that is evil.

    As a fighter, Sirius main strength arrives in the form of his ability to control his magic, which he uses far more often and excessively than he needs to. He also relies on weaponry that gives distance between himself and his opponent, namely handguns. He possesses a serious side, which is rarely seen until the heat of a battle, during this time, he is known for being more feral and animalistic as he embraces his Demon's brutal side.


    Likes:
    Large amounts of food (more so if it were free.)
    -Whether it be because his magic allows him to create artificial beings out of ethernano, Sirius is a voracious eater with little self control, which is why that he greatly enjoys gourging himself on large amount of food, being able to digest plates worth of full within moments.
    Objects or persons of beauty
    -He believes that the female form is the epitome of beauty, so he finds himself overly eager when he sees a being that represents his perfect image. Along with this, he founds himself with an urge to protect anything that properly resembles his idea of beauty.
    Loyalty (of others towards certain objectives or people, not only to himself.)
    -Being the embodiment of a story based around the leader of a crime family, Sirius believes that loyalty is one of the most important traits someone can have. He respects loyalty in any shape or form, granting someone his own silent approval from it.

    Dislikes:
    His own terribly bad luck
    -Self explanatory, Sirius suffers from bouts of bad luck, which usually result in his own self-injury.
    Finding himself alone
    -With a magic that allows him to conjure other beings, Sirius has never known what it is like to be alone, the concept himself sends shivers down his spine and terrifies him.
    Being laughed at or made a mockery of, not that he doesn't assist in this.
    -The figure of a Don is meant to be one which is meant to be respected. Being laughed is a sign of a lack of respect, which he dislikes.

    Fears:
    The thought of becoming a monster
    -The man depicted within the pages of the book where he was formed from became, at various intervals, a monstrous being who committed dark and violent acts. an urge which he suppresses at all times to avoid turning into such a malevolent beast.
    The thought of baring witness as something he deems beautiful be corrupted
    -For something which he deems beautiful to be altered or lessened in any way, Sirius feels that such an act would be a sorrow to the world, which is why he puts his life on the line to protect such things.
    The thought of finding himself in a beaten and broken state, a form which is unbecoming of a don.
    -Self explanatory, Sirius wishes to be considered in the same regard as the man within the book where he was born from, which is why he never wants to be defeated and broken in any shape or form.

    Motivations/Goals:
    To achieve a form which reflects his values and ideas of beauty
    -One of Sirius' own desires is to achieve a form which he deems to be beautiful, embodying what he views as the perfect form. A personal goal of his own which he rarely converses about.
    To fully realise and earn the title of 'Don'.
    -His main goal, Sirius wishes to achieve the ending of the book from which he was derived from and truly earn the title of Don.
    To become someone who can place their faith into.
    -As a Don, many need to be able to place their faith within him, which is why he wishes to live up to the expectations of those who place their faith in him.


    Appearance


    Hair:Blond hair which, when left alone, falls down to his shoulders, but is usually held in a messy pushed back style.
    Eyes: Dark-orange
    Skin Tone: Lightly tanned
    Height: 5"11
    Weight: 168lbs
    Overall Appearances: Sirius bares the form of a moderately built male. He has tight muscles, which are usually covered underneath his own clothing. Lacking scars of any kind, the man himself can come off as something as attractive, though he does sport a small dog print beneath his right eye, which gives him a somewhat odd look. His passive face makes him look somewhat dopey, his mouth is pulled up somewhat and his big, wide eyes make him appear to be almost comical in presence. His eyes brows are thin and usually are unforrowed. His nails are kept a little longer than most and naturally curve from the top to appear like claws, regardless of how often he files them. Overall, he bares a slightly androgonous body tone and facial shape, holding himself in such a manner that lacks a distinguishable gender.

    His outfits only emphasize this. He wears eccentric outfits, which draw eyes to his person. Whether they be clothing with black tufts of faux hair, or extravagant overcoats, he tends to wear clothing that are loud, though he does often opt for old fashioned colours, rarely going for a colourful mix. He own a wardrobe filled to the brim with outfits which resemble gangsters and mobsters outfits, having a natural draw to the ensemble and forming the sole male orientated get together that he owns.


    Other
    Etherious Transformation: The Transformation that comes with being apart of the Etherious race is one that Sirius is able to accomplish at will. Within this form, he gathers the ethernano around him to alter his appearance. This form itself is known as "The Emergence of the Don." True to its name, it gives Sirius an appearance which is much more striking and appears to resemble that of the a mobster leader. His hair, regardless of state, is pushed back and turned a striking a white. He then begins to grow to a full form of 6"3 and his muscle grow to a larger, fuller state. His canines and nails grow out, resembling a beast of sorts. His outfit is also made up of an overcoat hanging from his shoulders, a white dress shirt, suspenders and sleek black pants form, along with fashionable shoes. By his sides, the holsters for his weapons become adorned with symbols and letters. A cigar is also known to form between his lips, something which he has a particular knack for not losing during a fight. Finally, the paw print beneath his eye enlargens and becomes less cute and more fearsome, the claw prints crossing over his eyes.


    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: If he were to bare a guild mark, it would be over his heart and be a dark orange in colour, nearing an opal hue.


    Last edited by Laney on Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:40 am; edited 4 times in total
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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Steelhooves on Sun Feb 07, 2016 2:03 pm

    Heyo! Steelhooves here, and I will be correcting your app. Since I am a mod-in-training, you have to get my approval and the approval of a real mod. BUMP when corrections have been made. I will be correcting in this color.
    Laney wrote:
    Sirius Heliacal


    "Don"
    19
    08/08
    Etherious Demon
    D
    Chaotic Good
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk


    Etherious Demon - The Etherious are a sub-race of demons that are born from a book containing many dark and forbidden spells. In the case of Sirius Heliacal, he was born as a unique entity, being the sole demon to be derived from a book titled, "Soul Cartel." This book details the story of a man as he travels through the lands to become the ultimate Don and finally, the Godfather. Within his adventures, he uses many spells deemed to be uncouth, evil and forbidden. From these pages, the Etherious known as Sirius Heliacal emerged, named after the story's protagonist.
    Perks: Etherious Trandsformation - As a member of the Ehterious race, Sirius is able to attain a transformation which embodies his 'true' power. This transformation alters his appearance and allows for a certain stat buff. In his case, he allows for a transformation that follows the buffing table and affects his speed. His transformation and buff scale with his own rank.
    D-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 2 Posts
    C-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    B-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts Change this to 3 posts, as it doesn't match up with the rest.
    A-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    S-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts
    SS-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 7 Posts
    Enhanced Senses - As a demon, he is granted a variety of altered and enhanced senses. Specifically, his sense of smell and hearing


    Special/Unique Characteristics


    Sirius bares a tattoo of a black paw mark beneath his right eye, the center of which begins by his cheekbone.


    Character Depth


    Personality: Not one to be considered a hard book to read, Sirius wears his own emotions on his sleeve. Nervous, with a knack of being something of a coward, the Etherious Demon does not live up to his race's talents of being fearless and headstrong. Instead, he and his powers all focus on keeping himself alive. While he may prioritise his own self-perseverance, he is loyal to those who he has befriended, one of his few redeeming qualities.

    Another quality that surfaces more often than not, is his own stupidity. He will usually be the last to stumble onto a conclusion and will find difficulty with problems that others would have been able to solve in an instant. Whether it be his natural desire to be within a group or a pack, the Etherious Demon finds that he doesn't work well on his own, and is prone to suffering from his stupidity and lack of balance doubly so once he is placed alone. The one physical trait of his that is always as strong as ever, is his superior sense of smell. Granted by his own heritage, Sirius weilds this ability to hone in on the location of a food cart before quickly tucking into a meal, being a voracious eater, he eats and ungodly amount of food as he lacks self restraint.

    Finally, Sirius believes himself to be incredibly unlucky, as he finds himself in a wide array of awkward scenarios. Whether it be falling up a flight of stairs, slipping and ending up sliding down a field of glass, or even being mistaken for someone who no one would like to be mistook as, the Etherious Demon finds himself placed at the opposite end of Lady Luck. Sirius, as it were, has a wish to become a woman, believing that the female form is the epitome of beauty, which he values to a large extent, willing to go to great lengths to protect what and whom he deems to be beautiful, safeguarding them from the ugliness that is evil.

    As a fighter, Sirius main strength arrives in the form of his ability to control his magic, which he uses far more often and excessively than he needs to. He also relies on weaponry that gives distance between himself and his opponent, namely handguns. He possesses a serious side, which is rarely seen until the heat of a battle, during this time, he is known for being more feral and animalistic as he embraces his Demon's brutal side.


    Likes: Add reasons to his specific likes please. Why does he like these things?
    Large amounts of food (more so if it were free.)
    Objects or persons of beauty
    Loyalty (of others towards certain objectives or people, not only to himself.)

    Dislikes: Add reasons to his dislikes please.
    His own terribly bad luck
    Finding himself alone
    Being laughed at or made a mockery of, not that he doesn't assist in this.

    Fears: Add reasons to his fears please.
    The thought of becoming a monster
    The thought of baring witness as something he deems beautiful be corrupted
    The thought of finding himself in a beaten and broken state, a form which is unbecoming of a don.

    Motivations/Goals: Add reasons to his motivations/goals please.
    To achieve a form which reflects his values and ideas of beauty
    To fully realise and earn the title of 'Don'.
    To become someone who can place their faith into.


    Appearance


    Hair:Blond hair which, when left alone, falls down to his shoulders, but is usually held in a messy pushed back style.
    Eyes: Dark-orange
    Skin Tone: Lightly tanned
    Height: 5"11
    Weight: 168lbs
    Overall Appearances: Sirius bares the form of a moderately built male. He has tight muscles, which are usually covered underneath his own clothing. Lacking scars of any kind, the man himself can come off as something as attractive, though he does sport a small dog print beneath his right eye, which gives him a somewhat odd look. His passive face makes him look somewhat dopey, his mouth is pulled up somewhat and his big, wide eyes make him appear to be almost comical in presence. His eyes brows are thin and usually are unforrowed. His nails are kept a little longer than most and naturally curve from the top to appear like claws, regardless of how often he files them. Overall, he bares a slightly androgonous body tone and facial shape, holding himself in such a manner that lacks a distinguishable gender.

    His outfits only emphasize this. He wears eccentric outfits, which draw eyes to his person. Whether they be clothing with black tufts of faux hair, or extravagant overcoats, he tends to wear clothing that are loud, though he does often opt for old fashioned colours, rarely going for a colourful mix. He own a wardrobe filled to the brim with outfits which resemble gangsters and mobsters outfits, having a natural draw to the ensemble and forming the sole male orientated get together that he owns.


    Other
    Etherious Transformation: The Transformation that comes with being apart of the Etherious race is one that Sirius is able to accomplish at will. Within this form, he gathers the ethernano around him to alter his appearance. This form itself is known as "The Emergence of the Don." True to its name, it gives Sirius an appearance which is much more striking and appears to resemble that of the a mobster leader. His hair, regardless of state, is pushed back and turned a striking a white. He then begins to grow to a full form of 6"3 and his muscle grow to a larger, fuller state. His canines and nails grow out, resembling a beast of sorts. His outfit is also made up of an overcoat hanging from his shoulders, a white dress shirt, suspenders and sleek black pants form, along with fashionable shoes. By his sides, the holsters for his weapons become adorned with symbols and letters. A cigar is also known to form between his lips, something which he has a particular knack for not losing during a fight. Finally, the paw print beneath his eye enlargens and becomes less cute and more fearsome, the claw prints crossing over his eyes.


    Guild:None at the moment Instead of no guild, put Wanderer please.
    Guild Tattoo: If he were to bare a guild mark, it would be over his heart and be a dark orange in colour, nearing an opal hue.
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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Laney on Sun Feb 14, 2016 2:31 pm

    Edited.
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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Steelhooves on Sun Feb 14, 2016 3:09 pm

    Alrighty, you know the drill. BUMP again when the changes are made. I will be correcting in this color again.
    Laney wrote:
    Sirius Heliacal


    "Don"
    19
    08/08
    Etherious Demon
    D
    Chaotic Good
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk


    Etherious Demon - The Etherious are a sub-race of demons that are born from a book containing many dark and forbidden spells. In the case of Sirius Heliacal, he was born as a unique entity, being the sole demon to be derived from a book titled, "Soul Cartel." This book details the story of a man as he travels through the lands to become the ultimate Don and finally, the Godfather. Within his adventures, he uses many spells deemed to be uncouth, evil and forbidden. From these pages, the Etherious known as Sirius Heliacal emerged, named after the story's protagonist.
    Perks: Etherious Trandsformation - As a member of the Ehterious race, Sirius is able to attain a transformation which embodies his 'true' power. This transformation alters his appearance and allows for a certain stat buff. In his case, he allows for a transformation that follows the buffing table and affects his speed. His transformation and buff scale with his own rank.
    D-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 2 Posts
    C-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    B-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts Please change this to 3 posts or give a reason why it is 5 posts.
    A-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    S-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts
    SS-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 7 Posts
    Enhanced Senses - As a demon, he is granted a variety of altered and enhanced senses. Specifically, his sense of smell and hearing


    Special/Unique Characteristics


    Sirius bares a tattoo of a black paw mark beneath his right eye, the center of which begins by his cheekbone.


    Character Depth


    Personality: Not one to be considered a hard book to read, Sirius wears his own emotions on his sleeve. Nervous, with a knack of being something of a coward, the Etherious Demon does not live up to his race's talents of being fearless and headstrong. Instead, he and his powers all focus on keeping himself alive. While he may prioritise his own self-perseverance, he is loyal to those who he has befriended, one of his few redeeming qualities.

    Another quality that surfaces more often than not, is his own stupidity. He will usually be the last to stumble onto a conclusion and will find difficulty with problems that others would have been able to solve in an instant. Whether it be his natural desire to be within a group or a pack, the Etherious Demon finds that he doesn't work well on his own, and is prone to suffering from his stupidity and lack of balance doubly so once he is placed alone. The one physical trait of his that is always as strong as ever, is his superior sense of smell. Granted by his own heritage, Sirius weilds this ability to hone in on the location of a food cart before quickly tucking into a meal, being a voracious eater, he eats and ungodly amount of food as he lacks self restraint.

    Finally, Sirius believes himself to be incredibly unlucky, as he finds himself in a wide array of awkward scenarios. Whether it be falling up a flight of stairs, slipping and ending up sliding down a field of glass, or even being mistaken for someone who no one would like to be mistook as, the Etherious Demon finds himself placed at the opposite end of Lady Luck. Sirius, as it were, has a wish to become a woman, believing that the female form is the epitome of beauty, which he values to a large extent, willing to go to great lengths to protect what and whom he deems to be beautiful, safeguarding them from the ugliness that is evil.

    As a fighter, Sirius main strength arrives in the form of his ability to control his magic, which he uses far more often and excessively than he needs to. He also relies on weaponry that gives distance between himself and his opponent, namely handguns. He possesses a serious side, which is rarely seen until the heat of a battle, during this time, he is known for being more feral and animalistic as he embraces his Demon's brutal side.


    Likes:
    Large amounts of food (more so if it were free.)
    -Whether it be because his magic allows him to create artificial beings out of ethernano, Sirius is a voracious eater with little self control, which is why that he greatly enjoys gourging himself on large amount of food, being able to digest plates worth of full within moments.
    Objects or persons of beauty
    -He believes that the female form is the epitome of beauty, so he finds himself overly eager when he sees a being that represents his perfect image. Along with this, he founds himself with an urge to protect anything that properly resembles his idea of beauty.
    Loyalty (of others towards certain objectives or people, not only to himself.)
    -Being the embodiment of a story based around the leader of a crime family, Sirius believes that loyalty is one of the most important traits someone can have. He respects loyalty in any shape or form, granting someone his own silent approval from it.

    Dislikes:
    His own terribly bad luck
    -Self explanatory, Sirius suffers from bouts of bad luck, which usually result in his own self-injury.
    Finding himself alone
    -With a magic that allows him to conjure other beings, Sirius has never known what it is like to be alone, the concept himself sends shivers down his spine and terrifies him.
    Being laughed at or made a mockery of, not that he doesn't assist in this.
    -The figure of a Don is meant to be one which is meant to be respected. Being laughed is a sign of a lack of respect, which he dislikes.

    Fears:
    The thought of becoming a monster
    -The man depicted within the pages of the book where he was formed from became, at various intervals, a monstrous being who committed dark and violent acts. an urge which he suppresses at all times to avoid turning into such a malevolent beast.
    The thought of baring witness as something he deems beautiful be corrupted
    -For something which he deems beautiful to be altered or lessened in any way, Sirius feels that such an act would be a sorrow to the world, which is why he puts his life on the line to protect such things.
    The thought of finding himself in a beaten and broken state, a form which is unbecoming of a don.
    -Self explanatory, Sirius wishes to be considered in the same regard as the man within the book where he was born from, which is why he never wants to be defeated and broken in any shape or form.

    Motivations/Goals:
    To achieve a form which reflects his values and ideas of beauty
    -One of Sirius' own desires is to achieve a form which he deems to be beautiful, embodying what he views as the perfect form. A personal goal of his own which he rarely converses about.
    To fully realise and earn the title of 'Don'.
    -His main goal, Sirius wishes to achieve the ending of the book from which he was derived from and truly earn the title of Don.
    To become someone who can place their faith into.
    -As a Don, many need to be able to place their faith within him, which is why he wishes to live up to the expectations of those who place their faith in him.


    Appearance


    Hair:Blond hair which, when left alone, falls down to his shoulders, but is usually held in a messy pushed back style.
    Eyes: Dark-orange
    Skin Tone: Lightly tanned
    Height: 5"11
    Weight: 168lbs
    Overall Appearances: Sirius bares the form of a moderately built male. He has tight muscles, which are usually covered underneath his own clothing. Lacking scars of any kind, the man himself can come off as something as attractive, though he does sport a small dog print beneath his right eye, which gives him a somewhat odd look. His passive face makes him look somewhat dopey, his mouth is pulled up somewhat and his big, wide eyes make him appear to be almost comical in presence. His eyes brows are thin and usually are unforrowed. His nails are kept a little longer than most and naturally curve from the top to appear like claws, regardless of how often he files them. Overall, he bares a slightly androgonous body tone and facial shape, holding himself in such a manner that lacks a distinguishable gender.

    His outfits only emphasize this. He wears eccentric outfits, which draw eyes to his person. Whether they be clothing with black tufts of faux hair, or extravagant overcoats, he tends to wear clothing that are loud, though he does often opt for old fashioned colours, rarely going for a colourful mix. He own a wardrobe filled to the brim with outfits which resemble gangsters and mobsters outfits, having a natural draw to the ensemble and forming the sole male orientated get together that he owns.


    Other
    Etherious Transformation: The Transformation that comes with being apart of the Etherious race is one that Sirius is able to accomplish at will. Within this form, he gathers the ethernano around him to alter his appearance. This form itself is known as "The Emergence of the Don." True to its name, it gives Sirius an appearance which is much more striking and appears to resemble that of the a mobster leader. His hair, regardless of state, is pushed back and turned a striking a white. He then begins to grow to a full form of 6"3 and his muscle grow to a larger, fuller state. His canines and nails grow out, resembling a beast of sorts. His outfit is also made up of an overcoat hanging from his shoulders, a white dress shirt, suspenders and sleek black pants form, along with fashionable shoes. By his sides, the holsters for his weapons become adorned with symbols and letters. A cigar is also known to form between his lips, something which he has a particular knack for not losing during a fight. Finally, the paw print beneath his eye enlargens and becomes less cute and more fearsome, the claw prints crossing over his eyes.


    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: If he were to bare a guild mark, it would be over his heart and be a dark orange in colour, nearing an opal hue.
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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Laney on Thu Feb 18, 2016 5:45 pm

    Edited~
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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Steelhooves on Fri Feb 19, 2016 12:48 pm

    Alright, accepted! You now need a real mod to accept it. I'll let them know.
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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Genesis on Sat Feb 20, 2016 7:09 pm

    Hi there, the name's Genesis and I will be grading your app for second approval today.
    Laney wrote:
    Etherious Demon - The Etherious are a sub-race of demons that are born from a book containing many dark and forbidden spells. In the case of Sirius Heliacal, he was born as a unique entity, being the sole demon to be derived from a book titled, "Soul Cartel." This book details the story of a man as he travels through the lands to become the ultimate Don and finally, the Godfather. Within his adventures, he uses many spells deemed to be uncouth, evil and forbidden. From these pages, the Etherious known as Sirius Heliacal emerged, named after the story's protagonist.
    Perks: Etherious Trandsformation - As a member of the Ehterious race, Sirius is able to attain a transformation which embodies his 'true' power. This transformation alters his appearance and allows for a certain stat buff. In his case, he allows for a transformation that follows the buffing table and affects his speed. His transformation and buff scale with his own rank.
    D-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 2 Posts
    C-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    B-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    A-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 3 Posts
    S-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 5 Posts
    SS-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 7 Posts
    Please state that when you are in your etherious form you cannot trick anyone into thinking you are a different person. Second you are going to need cooldowns. Finally, this is more of a suggestion but I recommend you follow this list since it can make this perk slightly more powerful than it is currently. (Note once you reach A rank you can choose to boost the same stat for two tiers or two stats for one tier)
    D-Rank: +/- 1 Rank for 2 Posts (1 Stat Only)
    C-Rank: +1 Rank for 3 Posts (1 Stat Only)
    B-Rank: + 1 Rank for 5 Posts (1 Stat Only)
    A-Rank: + 1 Rank for 3 Posts (2 Stat Only)
    S-Rank: + 1 Rank for 5 Posts (2 Stat Only)
    SS-Rank: + 1 Rank for 7 Posts (2 Stat Only)

    Laney wrote:Enhanced Senses - As a demon, he is granted a variety of altered and enhanced senses. Specifically, his sense of smell and hearing

    Unfortunately you can only choose to have either enhanced smell or hearing not both. I woild also like to request a range for this perk as well.

    Please bump when edits have been made~




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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Laney on Fri Feb 26, 2016 9:24 am

    I feel as if there could be a story with the disguise fix. Also, I was unsure as to how I was meant to apply cooldowns, so if I ended up doing one of them wrong, I'd appreciate it if someone would be able to explain them to me. Presumably, this info will be helpful for my magic write-up ^^;

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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Genesis on Fri Feb 26, 2016 10:36 am

    I request a range for the sense of smell. You can find the ranges in the magic template.




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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Laney on Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:40 am

    Cool, edited in.
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    Re: Sirius Heliacal

    Post by Genesis on Fri Mar 04, 2016 10:06 am

    Approved!




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