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    Rin Moriyama



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    ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Rin Moriyama on Fri Feb 26, 2016 1:25 pm

    Rin Moriyama
    Rinny
    17
    March 14th
    Elf(Undine)
    D Rank
    Lawful good
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk
    Elves are said to be semi-divine beings that are known to appear in fairy tales quite often. They are of normal human stature but have elongated, pointed ears. Their beauty is on aq god-like level. They are a very ancient and intelligent race. They have a vast knowledge of the world. They are long-lived creatures with incredibly long lifespans of up to 1000 years. Undines, are a sub-species of elves that are said to live near and even sometimes in bodies of water. Unlike normal elves, they are mostly female and have aqua blue hair and eyes.

    Special Unique Characteristics
    Long elf ears

    Character Depth
    Personality:
    Rin can be described as a temperamental person. She is easy to irritate or set
    off. She is quite friendly most of the time but when in a bad mood,
    Rin tends to act more coldly towards others. Rin is a very kind and
    sweet person the majority of the time. She enjoys having
    fun and relaxing. One thing Rin can't stand are crowds,
    they make her uneasy and irritated to
    the point where if she doesn't get out of them,
    people will get shocked, literally. Rin doesn't like
    being bossed around and has no patience for people
    who are rude or disrespectful. She is not
    above putting those without manners in their place.
    Rin is not timid i the least bit, however, she
    normally has trouble speaking her mind and
    refuses to admit how she truly feels. Her words
    often will contradict her actions and when people
    point this out to her, she will lash out in
    embarrassed anger. Rin is quite clumsy. She's
    the type who trips over her own feet easily.
    She tends to get embarrassed easily and when she does she
    blushes and stutters. She tends to not like it when
    people beat around the bush, she rather they
    be completely honest with her. Even though she
    prefers blunt honesty, Rin is very sensitive.
    This girl has constant changing mood swings.
    One minute she could be all happy and the next
    she could be pissed depending on what happens.
    Rin likes to spend her free time, reading or
    relaxing or spending time with her friends.
    Rin is quite stubborn, she never likes admitting she's
    wrong and a lot of the time refuses to own up to her actions.
    Rin likes to make friends and believes that no one should be alone.
    She has great compassion and a strong heart. She is not
    easily deterred from her goals once she sets out to accomplish them.

    In battle: Rin always takes her battles seriously.
    She is not one to taunt an enemy nor fall for an
    enemy's taunt. She does not let her emotions affect
    her during battle and is merciless towards
    her enemies. She is not one to let those who hurt
    others get away with it. Rin prefers being a
    leader rather than being led. She is not one to listen
    to others too well and usually tends to
    ignore what a leader tells her to do out of sheer pride.
    Rin never really makes a plan of attack.
    She just usually plays it by ear and wings it.
    This normally works out so she sticks with this. In
    battle, because she doesn't come up with a battle strategy,
    this makes her unpredictable by her
    enemies which makes it much easier for
    Rin to have the upper hand a lot of the time.

    Likes:
    -Music
    Growing up, Rin's mom would always sing to her when she was down,
    so Rin came to like singing very much.
    -Training
    Rin is always trying to become stronger both magically and physically, therefore, she finds training to be a very good way to do that and enjoys it.
    -The color pink
    Its her favorite color, she has just always liked it for some reason.

    Dislikes:
    -Rude people
    Being taught manners growing up, Rin cannot stand those who lack the most basic of manners. If someone is tactless and doesn't know how treat others, it will really piss her off.
    -Bugs
    Rin hates bugs, most of them look really creepy and gross to her so, she avoids them whenever she can.
    -Crowds
    She hates being squished in between a bunch of people, it makes her feel like sardine and its just extremely uncomfortable for her.

    Fears:
    -Being Alone
    Having lost both her parents at a young age, Rin was all alone for a long time. She is terrified of the thought of being left all alone again.
    -Thunder
    She has a phobia of thunder. Main reason is, because both her parents were killed on the night of a thunder storm, so hearing it brings back horrific memories.
    -Death
    She fears dying the most. If she were to die, she'd never see her friends or loved ones again.

    Motivations/Goals:
    -Magic
    Having her magic, motivates Rin quite a bit. She feels if she becomes stronger and more powerful, no one she cares for will suffer because she'll be able to protect them.
    -Her friends
    They give Rin a purpose in life. They're the reason she's able to smile and keep moving forward.
    -To one day create her own guild
    Rin wishes to create a guild for not only herself, but all her friends as well.


    Appearance
    Hair: Aqua Blue
    Eyes: Same as hair
    Skin Tone: Light
    Height: 5'7"
    Weight: 125 Lbs
    Overall Appearances:
    Rin's Appearance :


    Other

    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: If she had a guild tattoo, it would be on her upper right thigh in aqua blue





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    Krow



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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Krow on Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:56 pm

    This is Kyros V. Sora, I'm the man who will be Lord of the Skies, but enough about me.
    Let's see if we can get you on the way for your adventure!
    Everything that needs to be fixed will look like this.
    Be sure to BUMP once all of the necessary changes have been made. . .

    @Rin Moriyama wrote:
    Rin Moriyama
    Rinny
    17
    March 14th
    Elf(Undine)
    D Rank
    Lawful good
    Female


    Species Ability/Perk
    None

    Special Unique Characteristics
    Long elf ears

    Character Depth
    Personality: Rin can be described as a temperamental person. She is easy to irritate or set off. She is quite friendly most of the time but when in a bad mood, Rin tends to act more coldly towards others. Rin is a very kind and sweet person the majority of the time. She enjoys having
    fun and relaxing. One thing Rin can't stand are crowds, they make her uneasy and irritated to the point where if she doesn't get out of them, people will get shocked, literally. Rin doesn't like being bossed around and has no patience for people who are rude or disrespectful. She is not above putting those without manners in their place. Rin is not timid i the least bit, however, she normally has trouble speaking her mind and refuses to admit how she truly feels. Her words often will contradict her actions and when people point this out to her, she will lash out in embarrassed anger. Rin is quite clumsy. She's the type who trips over her own feet easily.
    She tends to get embarrassed easily and when she does she blushes and stutters. She tends to not like it when people beat around the bush, she rather they be completely honest with her. Even though she prefers blunt honesty, Rin is very sensitive. This girl has constant changing mood swings. One minute she could be all happy and the next she could be pissed depending on what happens. Rin likes to spend her free time, reading or
    relaxing or spending time with her friends. Rin is quite stubborn, she never likes admitting she's wrong and a lot of the time refuses to own up to her actions. Rin likes to make friends and believes that no one should be alone. She has great compassion and a strong heart. She is not easily deterred from her goals once she sets out to accomplish them.

    In battle: Rin always takes her battles seriously. She is not one to taunt an enemy nor fall for an
    enemy's taunt. She does not let her emotions affect her during battle and is merciless towards
    her enemies. She is not one to let those who hurt others get away with it. Rin prefers being a
    leader rather than being led. She is not one to listen to others too well and usually tends to
    ignore what a leader tells her to do out of sheer pride. Rin never really makes a plan of attack.
    She just usually plays it by ear and wings it. This normally works out so she sticks with this. In
    battle, because she doesn't come up with a battle strategy, this makes her unpredictable by her
    enemies which makes it much easier for Rin to have the upper hand a lot of the time.


    Your Likes, Dislikes, Fears, and Motivations need to be explained in a logical sentence.
    Likes:
    -Music
    -Training
    -The color pink

    Dislikes:
    -Rude people
    -Bugs
    -Crowds

    Fears:
    -Being Alone
    -Thunder
    -Death

    Motivations/Goals:
    -Magic
    -Her friends
    -To one day create her own guild


    Appearance
    Hair: Aqua Blue
    Eyes: Same as hair
    Skin Tone: Light
    Height: 5'7"
    Weight: 125 Lbs
    Overall Appearances:
    Rin's Appearance :


    Other

    Guild: Wanderer
    Guild Tattoo: If she had a guild tattoo, it would be on her upper right thigh in aqua blue







    Rin Moriyama



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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Rin Moriyama on Mon Feb 29, 2016 3:13 am

    I will not do that for the following reason.

    It does not say that in the template or anywhere else.

    If you wish to have me do that, I'll need proof that its not an invisible rule.
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    Krow



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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Krow on Mon Feb 29, 2016 9:24 am

    @Rin Moriyama wrote:I will not do that for the following reason.

    It does not say that in the template or anywhere else.

    If you wish to have me do that, I'll need proof that its not an invisible rule.

    You either make the changes or you character doesn't even get a first approval.
    Everyone else who we've asked to make this change has made it.



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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Lady on Mon Feb 29, 2016 10:00 am

    @Rin Moriyama wrote:I will not do that for the following reason.

    It does not say that in the template or anywhere else.

    If you wish to have me do that, I'll need proof that its not an invisible rule.

    @Krow wrote:
    @Rin Moriyama wrote:I will not do that for the following reason.

    It does not say that in the template or anywhere else.

    If you wish to have me do that, I'll need proof that its not an invisible rule.

    You either make the changes or you character doesn't even get a first approval.
    Everyone else who we've asked to make this change has made it.

    *Waves* Hey there Rin and Krow. I have been given authority to step in for obvious reasons. So Lady here to give you a quick rundown.
    To first try and reprimand the situation. It does state in the character template to at least provide 1 structured sentence on each dislike, like, goal and fear. Listing at least three minimum. If you did not see this rule, that is okay. Hence why we asked for these changes. TEMPLATE
    On top of that, like Krow specified, It has been requested that members not only make these changes, but I have personally asked them to go above and beyond that minimum.
    EXAMPLE

    Staff has come to an agreement that these terms must be met in order for your character to advance any further. To put it final, these changes are requested, for reasons stated above.

    - Lady

    P.S. Can you fix the personality in your application as well? It makes it hard to read when it is formatted
    like
    this.
    Thank you
    in
    Advance.


    Rin Moriyama



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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Rin Moriyama on Sat Mar 05, 2016 4:54 pm

    Bump, done.
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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Lady on Sat Mar 05, 2016 5:02 pm

    First Approval Given

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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Genesis on Sat Mar 05, 2016 5:09 pm

    Hi there, my name is Genesis and I will be grading your app for second approval.

    Please write a paragraph in species perk/ability explaining what an Elf (Undine) is. This is so we can have a better understanding of your character.

    Also although this isn't mandatory I request for you to change how your personality is formatted.

    Its not fun to read when your 
    personality is
    formatted something
    like this
    but I won't
    deny you if
    you choose to change
    This is just a suggestion

    Bump when edits are made~




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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Rin Moriyama on Sat Mar 05, 2016 5:44 pm

    bumpity~
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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Genesis on Sat Mar 05, 2016 5:56 pm

    Rin Moriyama wrote:
    They specialize in water and healing magic. Their magic power is truly immense, at least 2 times more powerful than that of average humans.

    First of all as for water and healing magic, know that its not a passive ability.


    As for the magical power, that would be a perk and considering you don't have any perks now it is fine. However please tell me how much more magical power you have.




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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Rin Moriyama on Sat Mar 05, 2016 7:29 pm

    As per bacon's advice via skype, I made edits to my app. And so, I claim this app to be bumped!
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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Genesis on Sat Mar 05, 2016 8:53 pm

    Rin Moriyama wrote:
    They specialize in water and healing magic. Their magic power is truly immense, at least 2 times more powerful than that of average humans.(These are not perks, its just my racial description and nothing more)

    After talking to staff we decided it would just be best to delete that section rather to go back and forth. Once you remove you're good~




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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Rin Moriyama on Sat Mar 05, 2016 9:02 pm

    Done and bump~
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    Re: ~Rin Moriyama~

    Post by Genesis on Sat Mar 05, 2016 9:22 pm

    Approved




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