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    Post by Knux Shi Mon Oct 12, 2015 11:34 am

    Knuckles Shi
    Knux
    21
    Jan13th  
    Human
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    Chaotic Neutral
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk
    Character Perk: Noble Family: The Shi name is well known through out the lands for starting a chain of bath houses that has become the number 1 choice for customers, this means those of the Shi Clan are well known, and have a high level of respect from other Noble families. This also allows the Shi's to be invited to important social events such as Celebrations of Marriages, Social Achievements and business meetings dealing with town rates and income.  

    Special Unique Characteristics
    Knux wears jewelry when in normal attire. Silver earrings of skulls with a green Emeralds in the eye sockets. Also a Silver necklace with a solid green emeralds in the center. On his left elbow he has a spider web tattoo with small spiders crawling over it, an Ace of diamonds on the center of his forearm with a spider in the center of the diamond symbol. The A's on the card are in a red ink as well ass the diamond itself. On his right shoulder he has a skull reaper in a black cloak with hood, it's arms are reaching out to the side and a smoke surrounding it. Lightning bolts can be found on his collar bones reaching down to his chest. They are Black, and have a storm cloud connecting them in the top center part of his chest, are his peck muscles. Just under that he has the Sabertooth Marking.  

    Character Depth
    Personality: Knux Shi's the kind of person who enjoys the better things in life. Though he has work ethic, he's used to having the best. But he's still the kind of guy who lives normally in the since as he doesn't throw what he has in other's faces. He prefers to stay stylish, in the newest clothes he can find.  Though he's not one to brag about what he has, he is a cocky one. He think's he's the best Mage in his guild even if proven other otherwise. This still doesn't stop him from training and pushing himself to his limits and slightly past them. His training he does is more likely the reason for his cocky attitude about his strength, His Doesn't have much of a goal as far as becoming the BEST Mage out there but he does care however what others think of his guild.  He feels that Sabertooth is the strongest guild and dares anyone to prove him wrong. Never turning down a  fight as it is just another chance to prove his strength  and how strong members of Sabertooth are, is probably one of his weak points. His cockiness can get the better of him and gets him into some pretty tough spots.  As for interacting with others he generally he is respectful unless someone does something to rub him the wrong way. Not really any certain type of person really bothers him but those who a rude for no reason are likely to find a lightning bolt flying near their face. The idea of stealing from others is something that really gets to him, as he knows how hard is is to work for what you have.  He usually stays well groomed while not on the job, meaning if he is not on a mission he is cleaned and shaved. His hair is bushed in a pleasing manner to himself, and his clothing is appropriate for the current day or activity he is doing. He tries to help his guild members out when they need it if it is something he thinks he can do for them with ease. Helping with a job is something he'd do more or training with another member. He tries to stay away from giving advice out to other so he's no one's target for blame if they fail.

    When in combat, he always looks to clear the objective at whatever means. If there was a Dark Mage within a Village holding personal as hostages, then he would weigh the lives of these people for the lives of many others. Meaning Knux would kill 50 to save 100, always picking the highest safety rating within the future. He takes his job's serious as they are what the people view about Sabertooth most, and how their impression is given.


    Likes:
    -Money: Knux likes money because, he was raised with lots of it. Having the latest fashion and the best things money can buy just makes his life better to enjoy.
    -Work: Knux likes to works because, he knows to make something of your self you must put in the work. People respect success but more so if you worked hard for it.
    -Smoking: Smoking cigarettes are just something he deems worthy of doing, besides enjoying playing with the smoke he thinks it adds to who he is.
    -Heights: Being high above the ground helps him gain a view point on life on how small they actually are in this world. Helps center his thoughts and also keeps him hidden when he doesn't wish to be found.
    -Clothes: Clothes help keep the mage stylish and looking good. Just because he's going rid the Forest of some vile creatures doesn't mean when he get's back to town he wants to look like a street walker.
    -Women Women, the prize art of the world. So many different styles, each blessed with their own artistic design yet so similar

    Dislikes:
    -Thieves: Having come from a family that worked hard for what they have today, he views those who steal what others earn lazy and disrespectful. Thieves are the lowest scum in this world.
    -Being Broke: Without money Knux can't buy the things he likes, and if he can't buy what he likes it makes him sad and angry.
    -Being out of Cigarettes: Being out of smokes is a horrible feeling because it usually happens when you want or need one the most.
    -Being called Ugly: Though he may know he is a handsome devil, when people call him ugly it hurts his feelings because he knows they are just trying to be hurtful to him. Being hit with the word ugly has a different meaning to most, but to his he takes it has his looks, and his soul.


    Fears:
    -Letting a member of Sabertooth Die: What worse of a feeling then to have the blood of an alley on your hands when you could of stopped it from happening. Just allowing a member to die by his hands or his actions would eat at him for a while.
    -Becoming Broke: Losing all his money means his family lost everything as well, he would feel like it was his fault for becoming a mage in the 1st place.
    -Being raped: Rape is nothing to be ashamed of being scared about, after all he seen what it did to one of his sisters mentally when they were younger. It destroys ones mental state for the rest of their life.


    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    -Become Wealthy: Having money from his family business is nice and all, but becoming rich by being a mage would mean his skills of magic would be amazingly over average.
    - The best Mage he can be: By becoming strong Knux can protect his guild and family from any danger out there. Becoming near god like with his magic would put Sabertooth on the top of the list for a life time.
    -Get Married: Finding that special person in his life would mean a lot. What's better then sharing everything you have with someone who completely gets you for all your life.

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    Appearance
    Hair: Crimson
    Eyes: Emerald Green
    Skin Tone: White, with a tan
    Height: Six Foot
    Weight: 180 Pounds
    Overall Appearances: Crimson locks which are normally spiked when going on missions can normally be seen with his combat clothing. This generally entails suit of armor passed down from his family, or be it a furry jacket a black Tee and jeans with boots.  His combat/ mission attire will change depending on his mood that day. When he's just around town or the Guild House he wears a Tee shirt. a pair of jeans, and a neck-lace. His hair is usually not styled and hanging down just above his eyes,  His build of his body is tall with a nice bit of toned lean muscle. His body isn't bulky but when he fights his muscles pop showing just how much he has. His hues are Emerald green, his teeth are white, and a sun kissed skin toned almost of a bronzed color.


    Other

    Guild:Sabertooth
    Guild Tattoo: Lower chest, Gold





    Last edited by Knux Shi on Wed Oct 14, 2015 11:32 am; edited 1 time in total
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    Post by Mizuko Mon Oct 12, 2015 3:48 pm

    Hiya! I'm Mizuko, I'll be grading your app today. Just a few things you need to fix, and they are the following:

    Character Depth

    Your personality doesnt have an in-combat section.

    Everything from your likes down to your motivations need 1 sentence in description. Why does he like/dislike that certain thing? Ect;

    Appearance

    Please be aware that armor needs to be bought in the store for it to have any effect in terms of defense.

    And that's it! Glad you're joining ST! ^.^ Welcome to FTO
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    Post by Knux Shi Wed Oct 14, 2015 11:33 am

    BUMP
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    Post by Mizuko Wed Oct 14, 2015 7:43 pm

    The armor is still a problem. You didn't purchase or app it.

    As well as that, your combat persona is a but fluffy. Can you put a few more concrete traits in there?

    Thank you!
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    Post by Knux Shi Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:43 pm

    The Armor has no Perks, it is like normal clothing it is just for show service no combat purpose. What do you mean about my combat stuff?
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    Post by Mizuko Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:50 pm

    It doesn't give much information, it's mainly examples. It's not something that's super required, but it'd help you and others if you had a bit more solid personality points in there, when pertaining to battle.
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    Post by Knux Shi Sat Oct 17, 2015 8:20 pm

    I mean it's pretty plain and simple.... He will do whatever it takes to ensure his mission in completed. That's self explanatory.
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    Post by Mizuko Mon Oct 26, 2015 4:52 pm

    But what else? That can't be all he does during battle? No emotion? Nothing at all other than to get his job done?
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    Post by Knux Shi Wed Nov 04, 2015 4:54 pm

    Well I would think that emotions come with ever different type of battle. Is he fighting for his guild? Is he protecting someone? Is he hunting someone down? Is he trying to kill a dark mage? Like all of these are what you're asking pretty much. Each battle has it's own story thus Knux would have a different emotion for each one
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    Post by Mizuko Wed Nov 04, 2015 6:18 pm

    Oh, well then explain that! Right now, in battle, people will think your character is a total robot. So, flesh it out a bit. You have 1 point in the battle section. That doesn't give anybody much to work with at all.
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    Post by Selenia Tue Nov 10, 2015 10:47 am

    Hi, my name is Selenia and I'll be helping you out with this app, please make the previously required edits and bump to let me know, thanks!
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    Post by Selenia Sat Nov 28, 2015 12:38 pm

    Bumping. If no response is made to this app within a week, app will be archived, thanks!
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    Post by Kitten Sat Dec 12, 2015 10:49 pm

    To avoid confusion, this app was moved back to WIP Character. Please bump when done. Thanks <3
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    Post by Kitten Sun Dec 20, 2015 6:13 pm

    Hello!

    Seeing as this app has had no reply in over a week, we will be giving a time span of a week before this application is moved to archives. If you need more time, please bump and, when done, post in Help Desk so that our moderators know to check the application.

    Thanks in advance~
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