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    Aspect Magic

    Gambit
    Gambit

    Aspect Magic ODFYPdI

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    Post by Gambit Tue Sep 29, 2015 7:59 pm

    Aspect Magic
    D-rank
    Buff/Take Over
    N/A
    Main
    Rusty Hearts
    Yes
    Both


    Magic Description
    Aspect magic is a variant of take over magic that allows the user to take on physical aspects of creatures. This type of magic only works on the caster and doesn’t cause any physical change to the person’s body, but allows free use of up to three different aspects at any one time. The way that an aspect user gets new spells is to study a creature whether it be actually finding the creature and observing it or reading all the available information on them in books. Due to the rate at which the spells are used it becomes a huge strain on the body as some aspects cause pain to the body after its effect(s) wear off, but if someone takes this magic they aren't scared of running out of magic because to attain this magic you must be accepted by the creatures of the world. The original name of this magic was known as "The Gift of Nature", but over the centuries the name has changed to what it is now. The original people studied both buff and take-over magics in order to try to create this magic even though there have been cases of some users letting the power go to their head. Once created it opened a door that was sealed between man and beast it gave all who used it to speak with all forms of creatures which allowed them to gain so many different aspects because of them communicating with nature.

    Perks of Magic
    Able to speak with all forms of creatures with a form of verbal language aside from humanoid creatures.

    Weaknesses
    -Uses up spells quickly in combat making so there will be times that Aeon has to fight without any boosts from spells
    -Max of three different aspects can be used at any one time
    -Has to of either read about or observed a creature in order to gain the aspect


    Strengths
    -Doesn’t cause any physical change on the user, so it can deceive enemies
    -Versatile as it allows Aeon to adapt to different situations much easier than most other people
    -Can mix different aspects together for devastating combos. An example being strength and speed boosts to make a powerful fast punch.


    Spells

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    Aspect of the Gorilla:


    Aspect of the Cheetah:

    Aspect of the Rhino:
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    {C-rank Spells here}

    Aspect Magic TPuH4kG
    {B-Rank Spells here}

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    {A-Rank Spells here}

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    {S-Rank Spells here}

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    {SS-Rank Spells here}





    Last edited by Gambit on Sun Nov 08, 2015 1:08 pm; edited 3 times in total
    Bacon
    Bacon

    Aspect Magic D3kALDY

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    Join date : 2015-03-08

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    Post by Bacon Wed Oct 07, 2015 2:37 pm

    Hi! this won't be graded until later today as takeover rules are still being finalized. thank you for your patience in advance!
    Mizuko
    Mizuko

    Aspect Magic N51AM3g

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    Join date : 2015-09-07

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    Post by Mizuko Sun Nov 01, 2015 4:01 pm

    Hiya! You know me ^.^ I'll be grading your magic today. Note, the takeover system is new!! So, if you don't mind, I'm using you as a guinea pig xD Just as a way to see how well the magic flows. So I apologize if a flaw in the system makes this go longer! I'll try to get it to go quickly so you can get right to RPing. Here are your corrections:




    Guild. Blue Pegasus isn't a guild anymore. That's been renamed to Rusty Hearts. So that should be a quick fix.




    As for your magic description, we don't have an MP system here. It's all cooldowns and durations! So anything pertaining to MP usage doesn't apply.




    Your perk needs more description. Is there a drawback? What exactly encompasses animals? If you think about it, humans are animals. Does this mean you can understand all human language as well?

    Also, you can have 3 perks! If you want more, feel free to add them.




    -uses up spells quickly

    This is sort of vague. Is this referring that they have long cooldowns? Or are spell slots taken up very rapidly by things?




    Please elaborate on your last two strengths. How is it versatile? What sort of combos are you talking about?




    You can remove that little piece saying "Place your spells here".

    Utility is not a spell type. The three types are Offensive, Defensive, and Supportive.

    Aspect of a Gorilla

    The strengths and weaknesses should be included in the description.

    Attack is not a stat, and therefore cannot be boosted. Try "Strength" stat, instead.

    This spell would be Supportive, not Utility.

    In range, try putting down how far you can throw things in this form.

    Aspect of the Cheetah

    This spell would be Supportive, not Utility.

    The range would be 'none'.

    If overuse causes pain, put down a percentage of health damage.

    Strengths and Weaknesses need to be moved to the description.

    Aspect of the Rhino

    This would be Defense/Supportive

    The strengths and weaknesses need to be moved to the description.

    Defense is not a stat.

    It needs to be described more. How much of the damage is mitigated? We need actual values, not simply that it's tougher.
    Gambit
    Gambit

    Aspect Magic ODFYPdI

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    Post by Gambit Sun Nov 01, 2015 5:29 pm

    bump and extra perks will take some time to think of
    Mizuko
    Mizuko

    Aspect Magic N51AM3g

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    Post by Mizuko Sat Nov 07, 2015 11:16 pm

    Uses up spells quickly in combat

    That is still very vague. Describe! Imagine people have NO IDEA what this means.




    Aspect of the Gorilla

    If it depends on the weight for the distance, just make a quick little chart with weight ranges correlating with how far you can throw it.

    If using his weight, include his weight in the description, so that people can figure out what 5 times your weight actually is.

    Aspect of the Cheetah

    What does (at least 3 times in one thread) refer to? The damage happening, or the use of the spell?

    Aspect of the Rhino

    An example would help users understand what you are getting at with the differences in damage taken.
    Gambit
    Gambit

    Aspect Magic ODFYPdI

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    Join date : 2015-09-27
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    Post by Gambit Sun Nov 08, 2015 1:08 pm

    bump
    Selenia
    Selenia

    Aspect Magic Qm1sqjP

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    Post by Selenia Thu Dec 03, 2015 9:49 am

    Hey there Gambit, seeing as how you specified your magic as a variant of Take Over magic, it might interest you to read the Take Over rules. It might make sense to name your magic as a Custom Magic, actually, seeing as how your spells would be classified as Partial Take Overs and therefore weaker than normal Take Overs. Just let me know what you think and please bump to let me know what you decide, thank you!

    Selenia
    Selenia

    Aspect Magic Qm1sqjP

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    Post by Selenia Sun Dec 06, 2015 1:52 pm

    Bumping. If no response is made to this app within a week, app will be archived, thanks!

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