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    Simple Sorrows



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    Shinra (wip)

    Post by Simple Sorrows on Mon Nov 09, 2015 11:03 am

    Akihito Shinra


    Shinra

    20
    unknown
    Human
    D
    none
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk


    No special abilities


    Special/Unique Characteristics


    His eye color changes to the color red depending on his mood


    Character Depth


    Personality: Shinra is an odd young man in many ways. His personality, his likes, his dislikes, love interests, and everything in general is contradicting. In many different angles he would be in lack of a better term, an enigma, to some extent the embodiment of hypocrisy. Many people in real life and in the game are extremely wary of him. This is probably due to his ability to change his personality and facade at a moments notice. The way he talks, the way he laughs. In a matter of seconds Shinra could speak warm words filled with hope and joy, and the next moment speak words filled with pain and sorrow. This causes many people call him a fake, nothing more than a hollow soul that can easily sway from side to side with little to no worries or cares.

    Though his mysterious aura repels most people, Shinra can't help but attract interesting folk. Fallen heroes, outcasts, failures, villains, people all sorts of odd natures seem to gravitate towards him. It is as if Shinra was the center of all rejects and insignificant people. When surrounded by these underdogs, and fallen warriors, Shinra a unforgettable bond is formed between himself and the unlikely allies and comrades he meets in his life. Though a lone wolf at heart, he often times would speak coldly and harshly to his comrades. It seems that he has a more consistent dark personality when around those he trusts. As a result he often times secludes himself but at the same time wishes to be surrounded by true friends and companions.

    Due to his odd nature Shinra boasts about the most minuscule and insignificant victories, but hides his true accomplishments and many great feats he has done in life. This is why whenever a friend or an ally is in need, Shinra would often make it seem that he has abandoned them. The truth is Shinra would go off on his own often times risking his own life to provide assistance and help in the shadows. Thus making Shinra a textbook example of an unsung hero. He has an easier time giving help rather than asking for it.

    In battle Shinra is an incredible tactician by himself. Ironically his great skill of a tactician does not come from keeping track of mp, hp and micro managing everything to perfection. Most of Shinras battle plans are made on the fly, and most times they make no sense whatsoever. In every way possible he plays in an unorthodox manner. It seems that the way he fights is much like a loose canon. This makes him incredibly deadly and a great adversary against other tacticians. Shinra fights to find loop holes and weak points of every monster, or adversary, and even the environment.

    However in very seldom instances when Shinra is playing in a party, he often times plays a passive role. His actions are usually dictated by the party. Shinra isn't afraid of becoming the joke or the clown of the group. He knows to himself that there has to be a person to take all the heat and burn, often times he would take it upon himself to take all the blame. However when faced in dire situations, or when his fury is unleashed Shinra is a force to be reckoned with. Shinra would still use his unorthadox methods, how ever his tactics would be more safer and less wild so that he can ensure the safety of his comrades. When Shinra gets “serious” his persona itself begins to change, to his friends and allies he is seen to be a charismatic leader, and unshakable pillar that holds the team together, a master not to be questioned or trifled with. Yet to his enemies they would only see a warlord, a beast out to quench his thirst for blood. When Shinra gets “serious” he will not stop until the enemy is completely annihilated, he will not stop until his enemies regret that they crossed paths and dared to challenge him ...

    Likes:

    -Shinra likes tea, it helps him relax.

    -Sleeping, Shinra loves to catch some Z's when he has spare time.

    -Cooking, not only does Shinra love to cook he loves to eat also!

    Dislikes:

    -Shinra hates those who exploit the weak

    -Shinra hates weak people who let people exploit them

    -Shinra strongly dislikes being rushed, he hates

    Fears:

    -Shinra is afraid of being to close to people, he is strongly dislikes betrayal

    -Shinra is afraid of being too weak when it's most important

    -Shinra is afraid of losing another person he cherishes

    Motivations/Goals:

    -Shinra whishes to find a place where he can truly call his home

    -Shinra hopes to find true comrades that will not betray him

    -Shinra wants to follow in his older brothers foot steps on becoming a powerful exorcist


    Appearance


    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Black
    Skin Tone: Light Skinned
    Height: 5'7"
    Weight: 132
    Overall Appearances: Shinra usually wears a red coat, or his traditional exorcist attire, of black robe like pants and a sleeveless red robe on top. Around his waist is a multitude of prayer bead tied around his waist. When he's not fighting he wears his glasses, but when things get a bit serious he takes them off.  



    Other


    Guild: none
    Guild Tattoo:on his back the color is black
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    Selenia



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    Re: Shinra (wip)

    Post by Selenia on Sat Nov 28, 2015 12:37 pm

    Bumping. If no response is made to this app within a week, app will be archived, thanks!



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    Simple Sorrows



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    Re: Shinra (wip)

    Post by Simple Sorrows on Thu Dec 03, 2015 8:42 pm

    Its done can someone check this.......
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    Ryoshi



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    Re: Shinra (wip)

    Post by Ryoshi on Sat Dec 05, 2015 1:18 pm

    Hello, I am Ryoshi and I will be grading your app today. However, I can only give first approval, meaning another mod must approve it as well.

    With that said, I can now say that everything in this app looks good to me. Therefore, I give it first approval.
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    Selenia



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    Re: Shinra (wip)

    Post by Selenia on Sat Dec 05, 2015 1:35 pm

    @Simple Sorrows wrote:Personality: Shinra is an odd young man in many ways. His personality, his likes, his dislikes, love interests, and everything in general is contradicting. In many different angles he would be in lack of a better term, an enigma, to some extent the embodiment of hypocrisy. Many people in real life and in the game are extremely wary of him. This is probably due to his ability to change his personality and facade at a moments notice. The way he talks, the way he laughs. In a matter of seconds Shinra could speak warm words filled with hope and joy, and the next moment speak words filled with pain and sorrow. This causes many people call him a fake, nothing more than a hollow soul that can easily sway from side to side with little to no worries or cares.
    What do you mean by in real life and in the game? What game? If you mean OOC and IC, please put that. However, IC isn't a game for the characters themselves.

    Though his mysterious aura repels most people, Shinra can't help but attract interesting folk. Fallen heroes, outcasts, failures, villains, people all sorts of odd natures seem to gravitate towards him. It is as if Shinra was the center of all rejects and insignificant people. When surrounded by these underdogs, and fallen warriors, Shinra a unforgettable bond is formed between himself and the unlikely allies and comrades he meets in his life. Though a lone wolf at heart, he often times would speak coldly and harshly to his comrades. It seems that he has a more consistent dark personality when around those he trusts. As a result he often times secludes himself but at the same time wishes to be surrounded by true friends and companions.
    Note that others' characters won't actually gravitate towards you unless they want to. This isn't somethings u need to add, but just something you should know.

    Due to his odd nature Shinra boasts about the most minuscule and insignificant victories, but hides his true accomplishments and many great feats he has done in life. This is why whenever a friend or an ally is in need, Shinra would often make it seem that he has abandoned them. The truth is Shinra would go off on his own often times risking his own life to provide assistance and help in the shadows. Thus making Shinra a textbook example of an unsung hero. He has an easier time giving help rather than asking for it.

    In battle Shinra is an incredible tactician by himself. Ironically his great skill of a tactician does not come from keeping track of mp, hp and micro managing everything to perfection. Most of Shinras battle plans are made on the fly, and most times they make no sense whatsoever. In every way possible he plays in an unorthodox manner. It seems that the way he fights is much like a loose canon. This makes him incredibly deadly and a great adversary against other tacticians. Shinra fights to find loop holes and weak points of every monster, or adversary, and even the environment.
    Just two notes that you aren't going to be able to learn an opponent's weaknesses or the weaknesses of a magic unless they themselves tell you. Furthermore, using terrain into your advantage would rely on how much you know the terrain, otherwise it's bordering on needing a perk. Keep in mind that power playing is not allowed, thanks!

    However in very seldom instances when Shinra is playing in a party, he often times plays a passive role. His actions are usually dictated by the party. Shinra isn't afraid of becoming the joke or the clown of the group. He knows to himself that there has to be a person to take all the heat and burn, often times he would take it upon himself to take all the blame. However when faced in dire situations, or when his fury is unleashed Shinra is a force to be reckoned with. Shinra would still use his unorthadox methods, how ever his tactics would be more safer and less wild so that he can ensure the safety of his comrades. When Shinra gets “serious” his persona itself begins to change, to his friends and allies he is seen to be a charismatic leader, and unshakable pillar that holds the team together, a master not to be questioned or trifled with. Yet to his enemies they would only see a warlord, a beast out to quench his thirst for blood. When Shinra gets “serious” he will not stop until the enemy is completely annihilated, he will not stop until his enemies regret that they crossed paths and dared to challenge him ...

    Likes:

    -Shinra likes tea, it helps him relax.

    -Sleeping, Shinra loves to catch some Z's when he has spare time.

    -Cooking, not only does Shinra love to cook he loves to eat also!

    Dislikes:

    -Shinra hates those who exploit the weak

    -Shinra hates weak people who let people exploit them

    -Shinra strongly dislikes being rushed, he hates
    Did you forget to finish this sentence? If so, please edit.

    Fears:

    -Shinra is afraid of being to close to people, he is strongly dislikes betrayal

    -Shinra is afraid of being too weak when it's most important

    -Shinra is afraid of losing another person he cherishes

    Motivations/Goals:

    -Shinra whishes to find a place where he can truly call his home

    -Shinra hopes to find true comrades that will not betray him

    -Shinra wants to follow in his older brothers foot steps on becoming a powerful exorcist

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    Appearance


    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Black
    Skin Tone: Light Skinned
    Height: 5'7"
    Weight: 132
    Overall Appearances: Shinra usually wears a red coat, or his traditional exorcist attire, of black robe like pants and a sleeveless red robe on top. Around his waist is a multitude of prayer bead tied around his waist. When he's not fighting he wears his glasses, but when things get a bit serious he takes them off.  



    Other


    Guild: none
    Guild Tattoo:on his back the color is black
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    Currently, wanderer is closed, so you will have to join a guild. In any case, even if you weren't in a guild, you wouldn't have a guild mark. However, due to the fact that wanderer is closed, please find a guild to join, thank you!

    Please make these edits or take into account my notes (in red), then bump to let me know and I'll get back to you ASAP, thank you! Also, some of the codes broke during my quote, but that's likely my fault so no worries about that stuff. Only focus on what's in red. However, there are some grammatical and sentence structure issues in your app, mainly in likes and dislikes, so if you could fix those that would be awesome.
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    Bacon



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    Re: Shinra (wip)

    Post by Bacon on Sun Dec 20, 2015 6:05 pm

    Hello!

    Seeing as this app has had no reply in over a week, we will be giving a time span of a week before this application is moved to archives. If you need more time, please bump and, when done, post in Help Desk so that our moderators know to check the application.

    Thanks in advance~
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    Selenia



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    Re: Shinra (wip)

    Post by Selenia on Mon Dec 28, 2015 10:06 pm

    Archived!




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