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    Rasa Antumbra [Done]

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    Rasa-Antumbra



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    Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Rasa-Antumbra on Sun Jan 10, 2016 12:09 pm

    Rasa Antumbra
    Nick name: Rasa
    Age: 16
    Birthday: Unknown
    Species: Simian
    Rank D
    Allegiance: Chaotic Evil
    Gender: Male


    Species Ability/Perk
    Rasa's race looks like a human with a prehensile tail (think DBZ Saiyan for appearance). As far as he knows or cares he's completely human other than the fact he has a tail. He's never seen any other person of his species and just assumes his tail was just something he was born with. A sort of birthmark if you will. He can use his tail as a makeshift limb.

    Special Unique Characteristics
    He has a tail and is perpetually dirty. Even freshly bathed he looks dirty. His tail is long and brown like that of a Howler Monkey. It's about three feet long. His body is riddled with scars and tattoos.

    Character Depth
    Personality: Rasa has ADHD as well as schizophrenia. He cannot sit still for long periods of time and believes the whole world exists to entertain him. It doesn't matter if Rasa is directly involved with a scenario or not as long as it entertains him. In fact watching chaos is his favorite pastime. He has ADHD and can't sit still for long periods of time. If a commotion starts, Rasa is almost always there smiling and laughing. Rarely serious, Rasa truly lives solely for the moment and doesn't worry about the consequences. He believes the whole world exists for his own amusement and often uses levity as a coping mechanism to cover for his own insecurities and dark past. He's largely harmless as long as he's having a good time. Fortunately he's easily amused, but has a very short attention span. However should he become serious, his constantly wagging tongue stops and the blades come out. This darker side of Rasa serves as a terrifying reminder to all that Rasa is no childish prankster. He is a trained assassin and can quite easily regain the composure required to continue his work. For a few minutes at least. The easiest way to deal with him is to remember that he is in a sense extremely gullible. Rasa may not believe you, but if the lie is more interesting than the truth, he'll accept it. Just be careful what you tell him because he is extremely intelligent and it is nearly impossible to beat him at his own game. In combat Rasa uses misdirection to make unpredictable strikes. He’ll often plan dozens of steps ahead, then get bored and scrap most of them. He uses traps more than any other form of combat, so he spends most of the time running around instead of directly attacking. He prides himself on his ability to run faster, leap higher, and turn sharper than almost anyone. He is extraordinarily athletic. Surprisingly he is also extremely clumsy. He trips, falls, miss-jumps, or otherwise just plain screws up on his maneuvers constantly. The people that know Rasa best assume it’s on purpose because there’s no way a trained assassin could screw up that many times, but no one has ever managed to prove it.

    Rasa LIKES: _______.

    -Stealing, because he's a thief.
    -Lying because the truth is boring.
    -Causing problems, because order is boring.
    -Chaos, because it's fun.
    -Entertainment, because the whole world exists for his amusement.
    -Being the center of attention, because he is the center of the universe.
    -Action, because waiting is boring.
    -Fun, because it's the most important thing to Rasa.
    -Being noticed, because he's the center of the universe.
    -Food, because he's a street rat.

    Rasa DISLIKES: _______.

    -Boredom, because being bored is the greatest sin.
    -Waiting, because waiting is usually boring.
    -Being bored, because he really hates not having fun.
    -Order, because it's predictable and boring.
    -Telling the truth, because it's boring.
    -Being serious, because it's hard to have fun if you're serious.
    -Boredom. This cannot be stressed enough.

    Rasa FEARS: ________.

    -Being bored. Boredom is the greatest sin to Rasa.
    -Not being noticed when he wants to be. Rasa wants to show off at all times.
    -Being ignored because it means he's not being entertaining.
    -Being bored. Seriously, boredom is the single worst thing in the world.
    -A boring death. Death is the final action anyone can do, so you've got to make it memorable.
    -Rasa's biggest fear is to be abandoned and forgotten. (Stems from being an orphan and having to raise himself from a young age)
    -Being trapped because there's nothing to do but wait and be bored.

    MOTIVATIONS/GOALS:
    -To be entertained. Rasa loves to see people's reaction to his own antics. It's proof to him that he makes a difference.
    -To have fun. If you're not enjoying every second of your life, than there's something wrong.
    -To become so famous he'll never be forgotten. If no one remembers you, there is no proof you lived. 


    Appearance
    Hair: Brown
    Eyes: Blue
    Skin Tone: Olive
    Height: 5'6"
    Weight: 120 lbs
    Overall Appearances:
    Picture:


    Other

    Guild: None
    Guild Tattoo: None





    Last edited by Rasa-Antumbra on Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:10 pm; edited 13 times in total
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    Genesis



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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Genesis on Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:40 pm

    Hi my name is Genesis and I will be grading your app today.

    First of all, may you explain your character species in character perks? I know you said you are a Simian but I have no idea what it is. Just give it a description and a bit of the history of the race will be fine.

    In your special characteristics please explain how the tail looks like. How long is it? What color is it? Also you should take out the part of him having a mental illness. That seems more like a personality trait.

    I also need you to explain your likes, dislikes, fears, motivations and goals. Why do you like or dislike this? Why to you fear that? Why does that motivate you to do whatever you want to do?

    Also this is not mandatory but recommended but may you resize your image to make it smaller? Once again this is not mandatory but highly suggested for you to do so.

    Bump when edits are made~
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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Rasa-Antumbra on Wed Jan 13, 2016 4:24 pm

    Edits except the picture made. Not sure how to change the size.



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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Genesis on Wed Jan 13, 2016 4:50 pm

    Final round.



    Can you tell us what mental diseases he has? Also minimum for personallity is 350 words please add more.

    In the likes, dislikes, etc section can you please take out the emotes? Although it is not required its highly suggested you do.
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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Rasa-Antumbra on Thu Jan 14, 2016 10:45 am

    There you go. That should be an ample description of his personality. If needed I can go into why Rasa acts that way, but that is backstory not personality.



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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Genesis on Thu Jan 14, 2016 6:17 pm

    A few things before I can approve it, you said boredom twice in both the fear and dislike catagory. Take one out and you'll be solid.
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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Rasa-Antumbra on Thu Jan 14, 2016 6:57 pm

    I repeated it twice on purpose for emphasis. Even ignoring the repetition there is more than three listed in both fears and dislikes.



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    Selenia



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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Selenia on Fri Jan 15, 2016 1:57 pm

    My name's Selenia and I'll be taking over this app from Genesis with her permission.

    Please change your allegiance to Chaotic Evil if that's what C/E stands for; it's a bit confusing as it's listed now.

    Your personality needs to be at minimum 350 words. You can add more to in combat and out of combat.

    Each like, dislike, fear, and goal needs at least a sentence description, even if you already have 3 for each. If you're putting boredom twice for emphasis, explain it.

    Once you've made these edits, bump to let me know, thanks!




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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Rasa-Antumbra on Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:10 pm

    done



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    Re: Rasa Antumbra [Done]

    Post by Selenia on Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:28 pm

    Approved!




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